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Review of Character sketch  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this was good. I'm new and still learning and you are already aware of whee your biggest weakness is. I think that you were doing a good job of developing the charecters though. I will have to let some of the very talented people give yo the advice you really need! Keep writing as you are definitely in the right place to learn!
Lin
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Review of Monster Island  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was good! I loved the concept! The only thing I would look at again is in paragraph 2:
"...in order for two things" is not flowing.
Maybe "...for two reasons"
Keep up the good work!
Lin
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Review of Sniglets  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Great contest! Hope to see you run another one!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This a loads of fun! When you need a laugh it is a good place to stop and visit!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is rolling along great!
Lin
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This reminded me that I DON"T miss those commutes! Well done.
Lin
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
That was beautiful! Thanks for a great read!
Lin
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Review of Water  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good and very evocative. Lin
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Review of Forever Yours  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Simple but with impact. well done!
Lin
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good story. I got a laugh out of this as well!
Lin
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Review of The Mountain  
Rated: E | (4.5)
well done! Keep climbing!
Lin
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Review of 15 Minutes  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed this one as well! How about "15 minutes" for a title?
Lin
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Review of The Hair Salon  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good job. I really enojyed this whole piece. Brought back a few memories!
Lin
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Review of The Journey  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think I've experienced that moment in time! Well done!
Lin
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Review of Poetic Insanity  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a hoot! For those of us normally petrified at thought of writing poetry this is a great place to release the muse! Good on ya!
Lin
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Review of Freedom from Sin  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very powerful story. Really well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Lin
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Review of taken  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Simply written but to often true. Good job.
Lin
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Review of The Night Before  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very evocative. I would just break it up a bit more and review for grammer. This is good though and does create tension of waiting and then moving forward. Well done!
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Review of Was  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was expressed in a beautiful manner and I am going to share this with my mom who has been int his position. A position few people truly understand. Thank you for sharing this. Lin
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed this. I've printed out your suggestions and will put them in my "HELP" folder! Thanks, Lin
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Review of Armed Vision  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this!
Lin
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a really good educational site that everyone can use who is in to fiction writing! Thanks for all your effort! Lin
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your educational tools make me feel like I just hit the jackpot! Well done! Thanks, Lin
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Review of My friend in you  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your pain clearly came through. Good writing. Lin
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Review of Please Review  
Rated: E | (5.0)
excellant page for newbies
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