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Review of To be alive  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I have to say that this is a great poem that you have written about the feeling of being alive and living life. I think that you are right that in order to really enjoy life it takes losing a sense to be able to really figure out what life is about. This was little hard to read at times but it was a great poem.



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Review of Attention Adults  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well you made your point thinking all adults are the same when they are not. I know that just because you hangout on corners, means that you could be the smartest in your class; but would because you act like you dont care standing out there on the corner no one would never know! I have brothers that did that and they are really smart and just wanted to be part of the crowd!



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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great sequel! I know that it is hard dealing with a family member with autism. I think that it is great that both brothers love there izzy! I think that the Couch was right to kick Jordan off the team because of making fun of her. He also announced that he had a family member that was autistic too. This is a great story! Keep ON Writing!!!


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Review of Alone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem about being alone and alright about being alone. I think that this shows from being alone in the relationship to being alone out of the relationship...I think that this shows so much imagery throughout the word in the poem. Keep On Writing!!!



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Review of Borrowed time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome poem about borrowed time. It is good one about not dwelling in the past. Our lives do change as a flowers shape changes through out time. The imagery is perfect when you read it and the picture comes perfectly to your mind! I think that this is great poem and right to the point!



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Review of My big dream  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this was a really powerful story about her dreams and her hockey and her dream team that helps her through the hockey but helps you more importantly get out of her situation. It is hard to try to hide abuse when they beat her all over. I am glad that Nicky, Harry, and Pav was there to take you in and take you to the police too..

I hope to read more of your work in the future. Sorry your character went through all that abuse and pain.




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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a great story about the little autistic girl and her brother and how much they love each other and how close they are too. Its hard when part of your family has someone that has a developmental disorder. I think that it was great that Izzy and Nicky had a wonderful relationship even when he knew something was wrong with her. That I think made them even closer because he loved her that much more!

Nicky was really strong about finding he was going to be drafted...I wonder how Izzy took him leaving for the millitary! I am sure it was hard on her, since her Nicky wouldnt be there for holidays and so forth. Or when she needs him because she was scared....

Keep On Writing!!!





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Review of KEYBOARD  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a different poem that can have two different meaning to words of an Acrostic of Keyboard. I like the two different acrostics in one piece of poetry! In the first set you are more traditional on all the words you have to say. Why the second one is more on life and how you really feel through the keyboards of life! Thank you for letting me in your port to read some of your poetry and I will be back for more!

Keep Om Writing!!




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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is perfect way to let us know about your trip to australia! I think it would be cool to go there regardless of the long flight. I would run out of money with the drinks from the vending machine since I have to have a soda in my hand at all times. I think that the flying foxes were really neat in the picture you taken. I also like the koala bear and all the birds! I think it would be neat to go shopping everywhere too. I think that this was the coolest trip to go on! I want to go here and New Zealand too!!!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome idea that to do!! I am so glad I am a participant of this because it is bring back great memories! I'm listening to "Santa is coming to town." Frank Sinatra and Cyndi Lauper were sing this classic! Using the song to base our entries on is really cool.

Thanks for having this Activities for us to enjoy!





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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a cute poem about the mouse that didn't say a word. You have wonderful imagery and your descriptions of each of the animal. I think that they started to be really quiet. Then they get louder and louder each time you went to a new stanza until the Mouse finally had it and said "SHUT UP!"





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Review of Winter Night  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful poem that has some lovely imagery in each stanza! I love how the reflects from winter to spring with the flowers. It also shows how the flowers go from winter to spring also by sleep beneath the ground until spring comes!!! Thanks for a great poem wit loads of imagery!




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Review of Kelli  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really cute story! I remember when my girls were at that stage and boys were yucky! I sure handling the fact her brother would be fun to stay home with, but also all the work she would have to help her mom! When you bring up ideas that they will not want to do and will go back to school where the mean teacher is and all the yucky boys are there too.









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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think this is really interesting way to have a story going in an interactive story. This is my first time ever reviewing an interactive. I think that you have a great story line and how the main character is now small and relying on everyone else. I would like to come to this when there are more entries to see where the story go from here.






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Review of Pay It Forward  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great idea and glad that I was able to get a Turkey Gram from someone so that it really cheered me up. I hope that many others come and do this too. This is awesome that it was started back when this was stories.com and then WDC!!! I would like to send some too and was wondering how you can nominate to send one too!!!!

Happy Thanksgiving!!!




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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great forum to be in when prepping for NaNoWrMo in November You learn so much from every helping with answers that help you prep! I am glad I went a head and did all this for the experience of all years I tried this out. Thank you for all the experience in this Awesome group!!!






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Rated: E | (5.0)
As usual this is a great poem! I have read many of your poems in the past! I love your poetry all these years that I have been on here. It is interesting how you can take a poem from years ago and rewrite many years later! I think that this is great poem that you have rewritten. The imagery in this is beautiful! The descriptions in this paint pictures in your mind as you read through this!
Keep On Writing! Have a great day!!





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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow that is deep. It gave me the chills and goosebumps on my arms and neck. I am so sorry to hear that you had to go through that all your life. I am glad that everything is better for you. The imagery in this is just wow! The descriptions as you wrote this had to make you feel better to get out the abuse into a poem that you could picture all the way through all 21 parts. I am glad that your children don't have to go through the same thing you did. I hope to come and read more of your poetry! You did a great job with getting this out! Hope you have a great life now that you are in a better place! Keep on Writing!





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Review of The Promise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that this is a great poem about the relationship between a son and his lost dad. I love the imagery that it makes through out the whole poem. It must be hard to lose a dad for so long and then you find him sitting on the bench in the park. That had to be hard for the father to realize that it was you the son. I dont think I could go through that like you have done!




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Review of Enough, I'm out!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is a great poem!!! It shows so much emotion in as you read right through it. You have come up with perfect descriptions of who you are breaking up with! I love the imagery this poem gives off as you read through it! Drinking and gambling can be hard to live with. I am a recovering alcoholic so I know it is hard but was never abusive to others. I know many others who are gamblers and will go until they have nothing left! So you describing both was a great idea! I hope that things get better and you find someone else who will treat you right! Keep on Writing!!!






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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was an interesting way counting down to be alone and in one solitude. This is very descriptive when picturing this as you read. I love imagery, minus the fly part, just not my cup of tea. I think that you have done a great job with this and I see every element you have put into see how you self destruct! The title to me doesn't really fit with the whole piece. I know it is hard to put titles on work and making it sound right. Keep up the Great job! Keep on writing!!!






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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love makes you blind when you are with someone and you try your hardest to be with them but your feelings take over. He looks like the man you feel in love with and then you realize the parts that make you want to leave him but you can't because love has overcome again. Hopefully he will decided if he just wants you or many more! I have been there dealt with that, and now his new wife has to deal with him! Keep On Writing and Have a great day!






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Review of Love is not  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow this was an interesting poem to read about what love is not. Its noted through this how love is not. What about what love is too. This has a lot of imagery in this! It paints many pictures in my head as I read this. I hope that life has gotten better since you have wrote this and need love. I hope that you are going to be better! I hope that Life is good now!

Hope you have a great day! Keep on Writing!!!





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Review of Silent Rain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this is really deep. I am sorry to hear that you are depressed, it's not fun. It makes it hard to live or love when you are depressed. I hope that you are doing better with the whole depression idea! I am one that gets depressed a lot and I write to get everything out as I see fit. I think that you have talent here and hope to see you here!! I will be back to review more of your port!

Have a great day and Keep on Writing!!!






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Review of The Home Sampler  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I personally know for a fact that it is hard to live with a unmedicated person without med's. I was with someone that had a mental illness and it was not medicated, he has multiple personalities instead. There was so much abuse that went with the drinking because he couldn't control his personalities! I, myself, also am BiPolar and OCD and went with out my med's for a who had a lot of problems to be with anyone because I didn't think It was needed.

I think that this poem has so much imagery from the descprition as you read this and see the picture of how it is to live with BiPolar. I went through a divorce where I again was not medicated and my kids would go into through room and shut the door and let me cool down. There dad never learned that and dealt with my mine.

I hope that you are able to get through so that you can see if he will go and get med's so you can live a peaceful life!!!

Have a Great day! Keep On Writing!!






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