MoonChilde's (moonchilde01) Reviews

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Review of Eeny, Meeny, Miney, Mo  

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wonderfully written. I watched my mom and grandmother fall into the rabbit hole of demetia and it's hard.

My father, like yours, was always strong and robust. Even when was diagnosed with Parkinson's he didn't slow down. Until a motorcycle accident broke his back and other bones.

After that he too became a shell of his former self. It was so hard for me to witness.

Thankfully he's moved on to a better place. I still hear his voice giving strength to get through my tough times.

Thank you so much for sharing this personal story.

-Moonie


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Review of Nosedive No More  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've started reading this and HAD to save it until I can finish.

So far what I've read it's a great story!!

I love when animals are given the personalities of people.

You're doing a great job and I can't wait to finish the story.

-Moonie


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Review of viking funeral  

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wonderful description of the way you physically feel after a break-up.

Yes, there is a hole in your body that might shrink over time but it unfortunately never completely heal.

I always described it to people is something that I knew was hurting but yet it was numb.

I think everybody has felt this at one time or another.

Fabulous work of art!

My only suggestion would be to double space and increase the size of the text.

-Moonie


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Review of No More Dreams  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to this well written poem. I think many people experience the same thing but don't talk about it.

The poem put me in mind of Poe. Enough insight to see yourself as you truly are.

Keep writing.

-Moonie


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Review of Return To Sender  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG! That was absolutely adorable. I loved the older childs personality. I think you captured it perfectly.

It reminded me of my mother telling me how she tried to put her younger brother into the trash can when her parents brought him home from the hospital.

Very well written!!

Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

-Moonie


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Review of Maisie's Mom Says  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the flow of this poem.
Like you, the random things children say make me smile.
When my youngest son was little I held my breath at times because, as I used to tell people, he didn't have filters. If he thought it he said it.

-Moonie


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Review of Think  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
That's beautiful and very introspective.
I definitely could relate to your words.
Yes moving on is hard, especially from an abusive or neglectful relationship but it can be done.
I know this from experience and I admire that you see what's in front of you without excuses or denial.
You have a beautiful soul.

-Moonie


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Review of The Fallen Moon  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Being a childe of the moon I liked the concept.

I would like to make one suggestion though.

My personal opinion is that you describe the setting in the beginning quite well. Wonderful imagery. Then you repeated the same description several times throughout the story. For me it was a bit much. I already could visualize the setting and the repetition distracted me.

Other than that suggestion it was a wonderful and imaginative work of art.

-Moonie


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Review of Sunset Dreams  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ken

I loved the visuals that the poem gave. It's true that some of nature rests at night only to wake up the next day. The only suggestion that I would offer is changing the word bercuese. I feel like if you have to explain to the reader what a word means for me it takes away from the flow of the words. Other than that I loved it!

Blessings- Moonie