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Review of Black Lung  
Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Descriptive and incredibly visual. I like that there's hope at the end; how the speaker broke free from life in the coal mines and went their own way.
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Review of I'm Sorry  
Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Resonating strongly with this. Thank you for making yourself known and heard. Thank you for sharing so others might not have to feel alone.
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Review of Remembrance  
Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful and sad at the same time. I remember my days with a real tree; nostalgia points there. Thanks for the memories.
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Review of Dear Dad  
Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wish I could have had this; it's the way a relationship with a father should be remembered. The words are simple, but convey the emotions clearly. Thank you for sharing this piece.
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Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple, but beautiful.
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Review of I Remember  
Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is heartbreaking. I love it because it's a truth. I was a home care worker and I can relate.
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Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I'm not great at poetry. This does feel heartfelt, which is important (in my opinion). Hope to read more from you.
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Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is how I feel a lot of the time; I don't do well in social situations. I'm glad that Fergus still has his friends. Good pace and flow.
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Review by MRMLarsen
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I'll be honest; I don't read a lot of fan-fic. There's one line I'm not fond of "quivering lump of a woman". It's descriptive, but is kind of meh; not the way I would go. Only an opinion. I think I'd leave it at quivering or quivering with the excitement of being with him again.
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