MRMLarsen's (mrmlarsen) Reviews

MRMLarsen

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#4648813

Review of A Commercialized Christmas

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Clever wordplay. This is something I struggled with when assigned this in school. It was difficult to come up with words which began with the set letters and managed to accurately convey the message. I stand in awe of this as it not only conveys the message but instills all the emotions as well. Good work!

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#4648809

Review of A Final Meeting

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

You capture the emotions clearly. Not an easy task.

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#4620230

Review of Graveyard Cough

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Descriptive and incredibly visual. I like that there's hope at the end; how the speaker broke free from life in the coal mines and went their own way.

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#4620057

Review of I'm Sorry

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Resonating strongly with this. Thank you for making yourself known and heard. Thank you for sharing so others might not have to feel alone.

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#4619597

Review of Remembrance

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Beautiful and sad at the same time. I remember my days with a real tree; nostalgia points there. Thanks for the memories.

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#4619341

Review of The Monster and The Ghost

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

That was exciting. Interesting. It seems like an excerpt, though. It'll definitely lead readers to wonder what happened next.

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#4618956

Review of Dear Dad

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I wish I could have had this; it's the way a relationship with a father should be remembered. The words are simple, but convey the emotions clearly. Thank you for sharing this piece.

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