We all at times can't see beyond our own issues. I for one fell into depression and I couldn't see a way forward and eventually landed in the hospital for an extended stay.
Well this was very interesting to read, thank you for sharing it. I am not mechanically inclined but you did a tremendous job painting the picture. Very descriptive.
I did not see anything to really change. Its refreshing for folks to share their family experiences.
Has a good rhythm and flows very well. You may wish to double check spelling. "Meant" for example. Fate being a fixed concept is interesting to contemplate.
I enjoyed this thought provoking piece. In the end we have to leave everything behind from this life for others to go through. So it is up to the individual which direction they wish their soul to take.
Very interesting. The concept of energy and time has always been an interest of mine although I must admit I am a novice. I think that you write extremely well. I appreciate the education. I often think that humanity is going to have to get off this rock at some point. I will have to read this a number of times over to gain lasting understanding.
Thanks for posting this and again for the education. Keep writing.
I really enjoyed this piece. It brought back memories of easier times when I was visiting the Casino De Montreal while on tour with the Shrine Circus production. Very well done indeed. On the whole it has wonderful rhythm. Thank you for sharing your work.
Well you certainly painted an accurate picture of sharing Thanksgiving dinner with someone you never is at a loss of room where the food is concerned lol. Very well done.
I hope that there was enough food for all in attendance. I liked the rhythm.
Very interesting article writing about two iconic Disney characters. Children would love this approach for a bit of story telling off the cuff. The pictures I believe would attract children to this article as well. I used to buy dresses for my niece so she could experience being the princess she is to me. Thank you for sharing.
Depression is a serious issue, one that is something that I personally have issues with. It is through writing and medication that I am able to manage.
I had trouble reading as a child and had a tutor for several months before being placed back into a normal classroom setting. Further, I pronounce my words a bit off so I can relate. To a degree. (I want to sing my works but...)
Yes writing lyrically is a hobby of mine, I used to donate my art the the Shrine (you would not believe what they did with it!)
Thanks for sharing a bit about yourself. Keep writing!
Oh... to be able to erase every single mistake we make, life would be so much better...
No loss of employment, no divorce, no bankruptcy, no homelessness and no depression. Oh to dream...
Anyways, thanks for sharing. I always try to keep in mind that there is always someone else who has greater problems than I do in order to keep my perspective.
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