good :) I'm not properly getting it but I'll read the rest and find out! You are a good writer and the key thing to do is to write for as long as you can (it's 1:30 in the morning where I am, I'm still writing!) and as often, also write what you wanna write, don't force your self, many a story of mine have turned it super crappy from me forcing myself to write, good luck! :D
Awesome! Sounds like a good start and can't wait for more if it comes! I like vampire storys and I like writing them to, there's always that sense of freedom you get in the way they can look like anything!
I like this poem it's really going into detail about the ring and it's very well written with good description on the symbol and what it stands for! So basically awesome!