I would often think why must poems rhyme,for some happy symetry truth is lost; the angel who says "Church" does work. Church is always the first fort the darkeness wants to destroy, it isnt brick and mortar or presbyterrians livin accordieng to apicket fence scripural rules, its a slow walk with Jesus as we try our best to be a Good bride and holy,
that terrible fight with the goat and stuff quite real um.. stay in church stay ready to be his, its for all of us to do men weoman children, bery enouraging and real thanks
encouraging poem, terribly vexing to not get the little header that message sent, no Matter you listened adn heeded what was preached in Hebrews " if you hear his voice today,"So im happy, also u bleive with a childs faith that Jesus talked of, so you have his help in times of darkness, iam confused by the gift points sending so ill just give you five stars, have a blessed sunday adn thank you for your poem
Sin is Gone, Its all new again,Not always easy but easy enough to escape,im not completely sure what you are saying. I have trouble with the conditions that are laid down and use faith to evade them only to have God remind me of the Parameters that still remain, anyway thank you for your insight.
Hi, theres a narrative of David Dancing in "Man Born Blind" It all depends on how people see.The adversary blinds folks to whats happening, thank you for sharing, Id feel a little sneaky if I didnt tellyou I wrote it, I assure you that passage is my favorite, cause its romance without one man one woman, It a man and God and a whole bunch of wise and enlightened weoman diggin what that Guys doing and not caring if his clothes happen to fall off cause his not paying attention to anything but praising God. I find that very wonderfull and moving, No body made up or ginned up the drama it just happend
Very encouraging, took a while but alls well that ends well, Im delighted to see your promoting Jesus in a field of many non blievers in a usefull and intersting way. the use of narratives stories was applauded by jesus as he used many. excellent work
The powerfull created being of which you speak was allowed to assert his freewill against Gods created being, in Hebrews it may have been his mistake of refusing to worship the son of God in consort with the other angels,noone knows really but one thing is certain in time his head would be crushed and his rebellion and the pain , eternal pain would come back again again,His power is seemingly great but one little word will fell him. many however are overcome by the magnaitude of his charade and illusion, they are because they have no other forcre to compare it to or to call upon, even Angels of great power when caught in battles with this being, call on God most high to rebuke him, When we tell or suggest anything to do its generally pride on the part of the person adn a desire to have things end his way so I wont say anything,so I will only say it was a well done adn accurate poem and I read it, the happy ending is with me and i believe with you as well,have a triumpahant day
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