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Review of Searching  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Im not sure if your way of understanding jesus is going to help or attract people. It is honest, and quite a lot of work went int this, but, and please forgive me it seems,judgemental, Jesus will decide, but well,its really lacking the power of the kingdom of God adn the glory of victory over all that assaults and confronts us.
At this particular time in our land its kinda im orotant to exhort adn lift up souls, actually iam really happy to see that there are ordained and capable, people to handle the word of God like you, yu are serious studious and quite knowledgable but you are always vaccialating from grabbin the big lever of faith alone adn pulling on it till you are in Glory land...The victory is ours if we claim it wit intent courage and faith alone...thers not that many words in faith alone
Make no mistake, I myself am fraught with weaknesses, proclivities, and many, squeaks, and groans of the carnal nature,
But when its time to exhort and 'Edify' others, I stick to the point and give the the straight ananecdote, jesus has won .jesus blood is power over all fears, you seem to be chasing phantoms, adn inducing others to do likewise, I do it too mind you, and I dont mean to judge... or then again do..not sure, maybe maybe not?, dont know, I,
as I stated I lay myself open to my masters rebuke if i have done so.....
Look carefully sir at this sites frailties, but also it potential, build up blow winds of the kingdom of Gods power, for withaout this strengt and conviction and power no-one will be edified or saved.
I do respect your scholarshio and attention to deatail, Im willing to realize you are working as a pastor and put a lot of work into what you addressed, bless you, an your hard work, I can and ahave learned some of a pastors wortk from you.
It may be that God has different paths for us, I will try to be more thoughtfull like you, and perhaps you can be more to the point like me, in the end let us serve these folks,an please Jesus in all things..thank you for your hard work and caring for others in this sight..patrick
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Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
,listen,Take a deep breath,think carefully, dont mean to be rude, forgive me,im sometimes annoying, but, oh well, here we go again,,, dont you realize you are dancing before the eyes ans opinons of mere humans,
I know i know "not a lecture,"
i didint like em either, but listen, it is written,we are made in Gods image, God is omnipotent vast and free,
He wants all of us to have this destiny,this vast freedom
but because he is "inviible" and other humans and there expectations are manifested and visible, seemingly real and important, we bow to them,
dont be fooled, its his wish to rermain invisible, but that doesnt mean hes not real,think on that,
but respectfully, your drive is admirable. i say you will definatirvely need education to make your way and support or be part of a funtioning family in our society.
But you, as a creation of the triuened God are not supposese to be a slave to men or institutions,
it looks like you are in bondage to pleasing folks.sorry I have been tagged as rude, i dint mean to be hurtfull... please beieve me..uh,, two things and then no more
young person, a gospel vignette or lesson, my clerical and errors are "atrociousm", uhh.

After jesus explined the scrioture very well,how could he not , he was in fact "God,'
the people around him admired his answer, but it says "jesus was not concrned with what people thougt for he "knew' what was in the heart of men, or people,meaning please God who made you not people, its fleeting and temeporary, thinkk big you have the ability to please God..this is your destiny young person, its possible
in closing I wish you well ins your univesity pursuits, i attended the university of Pittsburgh, i didnt graduate, but I did d wander around the country on a truth Quest, im pretty old almost seventy, I was in a few cults, but finally was introduced to a personal realtinshio with Jesus, I was raise Catholic but it was quite frankly sort of like liveing in an invisible cage....
yes i too, live before people eyes just like you, we are human, but know this..occasionally when I call out to him he shows me the slavery and abject bondage, im just like you, but, "i" get rest and great peace when he has mercy on me and at times its just him an me without worrying about people and stuff and things,peace at last
if you beleive like a child he is there, you will sense him,he is holy so musst be nvisible and known only by "faith' if you are obsevant an carefull after calling on him, things will occur,
For more info on this mystery, i have some essays from the book Of john, Check out "Nicodemeus" kinda long, or" Woman at the well" they my help you to "see" him better,
Welp,thats may hope,, thankyou for your your honesty in expressing yourself, it is the squeaky wheel. who get peace, peace in jesus , try a new way of seeing things, hes real..he lives, seek patrick
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Review of ulterior zealot  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
When we miss the narrow way, the consolation if u can call it that,is... is "this",
It is this stuff from "hell",
sophisticated.. so what? and a lot of readind and understanding,Is God impressed,
of the trappings of the husk of theology, however, vanity, throw it i swear it is deadly,live in peace, light joy, not death
See seekers, uh? look, know this, The soul writing it became bitter and expressed it in a distilled sort of um death fire,it s lyric lines lead to hell
what can we call it? but snake bile, Well, its a free country, so lets investigate ots source,Come along, come along isnt always going to be pleasant,war...it a sloggin day were marchin,
the origen of this stuff,please listen, this is real info, The road to hell is wide, heaven narrow, lets walk the narrow way seekers..cmon..you want to sing? do so,Keep time with feet.. stomp,is it working? okay good.. thats the spirit.


Long long ago there was an angel,He was not God, but for reasons that cannot be told and the details are not fully explained,Details all, just dont know, but what we have been told by the bible of truth, apparenlty, in his personal wisdom and Great beauty, this Cherub who covereth or leads all angels,
two things conspired.forgive me seekers, i know u will, maybe some,congecture on my part,Iam an "ecstatic" not a great scholar, trust it or trust it not, the pen or the typing goes, an what is written is written, send truth Jesus..
the chief of angles,He couldnt grasp that he was a created being, he was , well, too much in his actions like the triuned God in his opinion, and decided the triumpaherant should be a quatrain,He being an angel merely "thougtht" it,
Unfortunately, God knew it, Saw it, understood the folly, and His office was demoted horribly into and adversary of God and man,Forever and ever
and that in its simplified form is all there is to that,
his great gifts, now mere facades of beauty,shallow fleeting, once real, butno longer, now, fallen, such shallowness of momentary but fleeting awe for his creater gone, only love of carnival,false apolgetics adn malogned logic a aginst our Master jesus,A broken existnece, hehates bleiveirs
Do you hear his threats children, dont listen one bit,
time worn traps adn old vaudvillian nothing neww edness,
The elect can see him comin a mile away," the sons and daughters of Jesus love stomp his head. be wise chldren of God,
that victims fall into his snare are here dispalyed in the clever an seemingly seamless throw up, of a soul that fell victim to his shallow old tricks adn chimeras of magic form s words and more word all terrible all ugly, flee with all your might im not joking.. from this stench, oh children, of the light, and all vanity of its nature,
writer,sir madaam, liar, scribbler,yes you, dont imagine it came only from you, be wise repent and embrace Jesus and his blood or be damned, yes Damned, you see there are men left who oppose you,with truth..hear me now, the pit, it and so too the dire circumstance of its creater who inspired the writer to put it down, Stop thinking its just your words, I assure you they are not yours alone,, Words are all and nothing, these christians reading this khow, sadly satan, his destiany with death and eternal night....Run, flee this,It is not of God but the adversary. a prayer for cleaansing of this maligned site, to believers,avoid this mistake. Selah, hallelujah,here i stand here I raise my standard over this.... I wiil defend my flock as may master told me to do,mock me i will mock back in christ,Repent and live whoever you are who left this at the top of the site shame.Patrick,I worry for him...Maddaam Sir i will pray for you foremost, my master to do so, done,Im not turning
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Review of There Is No God?  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tell, and tell, and tell, and admonish, and admonish, and admaonish, but,The vapor and truth of Jesus? is it law? or....hmmmm?.. like the mysterious "wind in the willows,"
Sorry, no this time really sorry.... but look,
did you know or even underdstand, the abject grace, wonder and cosmic " what in the
world is thisedness" when, Jesus, told the story og the prodigal son at a dinner party,The strange and visceral wonder sublime synchroinisiry sorta floaoting in space, and "How does he engage us compleley?" on faces
Another time,wonder from all, when, bending low... and mixing his slaiva and dust, as the bored...(isnt this what we are all the time scribblers,.. bored?)..dont turn away,seek
behold, God, as man, he is our food from Heaven"
Mixing,Mixing in hand,Saliva , mud,,
a certain "concern", in the face, perhaps?,dont know, wasnt there,uh.I wonder...um "a smile?" perhaps. as the man acguiesces and wonders, Who is this?"
the bystanders,,,"us" transfixed,Yes me and you,
(know it all humans),predicatable to the bitter end, or maybe not... suddenly, dumb founded for once, "spellbound "by love and real purpose.
Then,Power..."go wash in the pool of Siloam."..
he obeys, but blind from birth, seeing people he only heard...Wow....Can you imagine....It would be wrong and duly narcicistic to say to you come away with me, I will show you,I cant do anything....Let the master heal you of yours and mines, (know it all ness)....dont get mad at me. Quite frankly,I just wonder at what my God will tell me to do next......Come away with him,
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Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is one somewhat good thing about hinduism, what i mean to say is in realation to the other religions of the world,It is primarily a cultuaral adherance out of customs and adherance to conformity,I believe many hindus beleive there is really nothing on the other side of eterntiy that matches up with these well meannng paths of thought and conduct.
It is important when your foundation is to go from earth to heaven that the evidience of authenticity for what you believe and where it is proposing to take you has sound historical and if need be archeological evidence,
few doubt Jesus christ was a person, they doubt his Godhead first, rising from the dead, and then its a vast ane nevere ending monkey hear monkey say what others say, so that no-one will rule over them, they down grade about this history of his life and his intent to make humans one with the creater through a sacrificail judaic offering of being crucifeid, slain like a lamb, by those he created.Is it real..yes..say yes adn love in the beyond or suffer in t aoart fro the God who made it happen for you to be saved,,, many say "it is Written by humans who lie and are flawed"
They wish to stay in the darkness as they are afraid of being decievd adn ruled over, in short they want to imagine themselves a Gods, its inderstandable, seem nice, but not correct, there constitutional created reality is created beings.
so look carefully at the evidince, also look carefully at your own restlessness, you are unrealized fully in who you are due to unsubstantiated fears of being decieved, so you are never fully realized as you in Gods eyes, u live in the worldfalse image, this is happening all the time, Take a chance on these words from in the spiritual realm. in closing fear not oh restless one, the evidence is real, the gift is authentic, stop doubting and thinking so much, have faith in this Man God Jesus and be free.....Come on.....Who are you really...Find out
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Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some , Human beings as we get older, oh my.. some get closer and others further away from heaven, where Jesus lives they will be judged becauee,Jesus always sends hidden messages to love, and mend help and love more. Most dont listen so.. " I dont know you" this is what Jesus will say,,, to those who turned a deaf ear, their code of conduct was to serve themselves, as the god of this rat race world impells,
yet some,Those, who 0nce... after reading his words... did heed the voice and didnt continue to live selfishly, they broke out
If you hear his voice today listen I beg you, if not he will greet you and turn you from his abode, you had ears of an adder,is this what you are...think, are,Think?
sadly but its really true we see that those without a personal Jesus get more and more carefull to just do things only for themselves,look, see, investigate, is this not the paltry ways of many,
But........... not Lousis,...hmmm? uh okay!! hurray, hallleujah... fourth of july fire works for the man,, thank you!! so Much!! for your wonderfull listnening friend louis, isnt it nice to kmow he is in heaven, again thank for real life, christian story . your friend louis was a perosn who's actions Were guided by Jesus,a drink of water in the desert ,
truly
He is the one Jesus was talking about when in john 4 he said the father seeks those who worship in spirit, not by creeds and orders of obeyance of the denominaions, full of so many dead do"s an dont"s, Just listen to Jesus like children... so sad they rareely do and so unfruitfull, one has passed and is glorifid i memory in the text, good work, cheering an a great memory of your love and his,.he picked u the mantle of this truth and did loving things,fire works ,canons, angels singing and dancind in joy Patrick
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Review of Lighten up  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Okay I agree Im not completely sure what i was thanking, i should have read the disclaimer and understood what you were really about, if as youve expressed i was was rude i do apologize.Umm I do read yoour stuff and as i stated agree with a lot of it, in truth i may ave progected things on you, in closing we are both Christian, So I will aplaogize to have peace, jesus doestn want war, he wants people of faith to work together I pray earnestly in the future we can, Im still kinda confused why i dd that ...uh it wont happen agaain peace in Christ, amen sorry Man!
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Review of United...  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
scriTherepturaally correct and nicely skeletal, though they dont admit It few Christins believe in his second coming, it is such a secret adn personal glory that it eludes most beleivers, slowly and imperceptibly the power of the world, steals it and it is lost, yes. they will stil enter heaven but the wonder and the absolute magnaifigance of this secret sharer on earth is only for the holy severe believing servant. keep doing this sort of thing to encourage, the symetery of the words okay, but but if the spirit is real and strong, thats enough.
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Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I see what you mean,Hmmm, well.........
There was once a man,who did whatever he wanted, He was a self styled artist and built a stupidly engineerd house on the side of a mountain, that no woman in her ight mind woud live in.
Fianlly he met an intrepid sort of self styled hobo gal the sort of raggedy ann to his raggedy andy who he let live with him becasue she was the only one who would,
Initially,He didnt think of her romanticly or as his soul mate, but sort of as his giant pet cat or something,
real cats wouldnt go in the house, (too smart),
well, one day he came home to his rickety house and saw her in a big barrel filled with rain water just taking a bath an singin to herself.....He realized in a flash that she wasnt a Giant pet cat, or hobo gal but a real pioneer girl, like in Whitmans Pioneers Oh pioneers, This is one of the few things tht I as a Christian will allow myself to like,It has an oceanic man woman power,) and so upon seeing her in said ol barrel "ker plunk" he fell in love with her,
She really didnt know what allthe to do was about hin after that but since he pretty much gave her whatever he wanted she sorta fell in love with him too,
Hmm in closing It is a little rare to find the path least raveled in reagards to courrting and being yourself andletting the chips fallwhere they may, but it is not that big a deal, as u might think the creeds adn orders of obyeance in a dying sin sick world that strives to order even every real and honest people feelings intp cages, is alway undone by the sychronicity of loves illusove way to find a way around the cages and grow a little flower, your stoty is good ann I appreciate it,slightly bu not overtly tedious , it is a good lesson
In closing, preach stuff comin, It is not meant for men or wwoman to be alone this is a blblical truth or tenant Genesis " A man and woman shall leave there mother and father and become one flesh..."Also Jesus hates divorce, these seemingly outdated adn sligly puritanicial constituional realtional realities will come back again and again, however, if they are not both realized in a realtisnshio with the creater of the two of them they wil not be able to fuffill together there deeper inner desire for love of God through jesus Christ, its mutual worship, or i fear the mourning dove will never cease to mourn... jointly and seperate, follow some truths of God.. uh hmmm.. you can take or leave the last part despite its truth, becasue if I become preachy you will feel iam bieng emperious and heavy handed,Ima not ashamed of the Gospel truths but aware that without genetleness, the instruciton can have no affect,
in closing
Im not sure how the lovely couple living in the shack on the side of a mountain really ended,
The shack.. didst, in the end, succumb to gravity and the childish but winsome man wondered how anything that took so much work could fail,
the answer in my opinion was he he only llistened to himself, God wants to help, but humans are sometimes fools. good essay by the way, uhh..... pleas if so inclined, check out "Woman At The Well", or The "Raising Of Lazarus", I tried to follow the cryptic outline of those who went before me in consort with Christ so as to build on what the holy spirit told me as best I could. bye patrick
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Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, the neighborhood,though many lofty ministers have come and gone,They tended to impart lofty things as though the ordinary was mundane,The widows migth he saw, a tiny forlorn man in a tree he saw, a blind man pushed aside,
he saw,He sees you lady,He test without warning, he see those who see what he sees and loves, the weal and woes of the mundane day will be reseen in judgement.....Look then and see and dont judge but..imagine love and see it made real,, concil those who have the heart of the world and see not.
We cannot judge or we wil err but he can adn knows and will have a day of irony for those, a look, a smirk, a "theyll be fine and he and the spirit flee. have a care,you seem of all i read to see,but......the day is not done yes, vhristian, have a care, give more spend more for others, tarry longet with the lonely and the boring soul,
listen though you know what they will say. bless you but dont prove me wrong before the master,Suffer some for his glory,but only some? life is a cheering gift, give back..the neigborhood awaits, servant of the nvisoble watcher Jesus, no denomination not cage or format...Im this im that, away.. spirit only , for these are the ones the Father and the Son seek.hold fast.. thank you for your poem, patrick
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Review of Jack's Beanstalk  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A winsome off beat wittiyness to the rhymes, not forced or over thought,The mothers scream to get the cow back, Quite funny and also decidedly "real",
Perhaps if you really want to do something totally new,not schooli jus sayin, go deeply inside your mind heart and soul, and just walk around in there in your galoshes. you are honest, come along....
look,There was once a man who just hung out in his back yard.... a real man mess!, with all kinds of cool junk he got for nohthin, that the tinkered with fruitlessly and ..."cheaply",
But,God?Jesus, was rather dissapointed with Him, becasue very deep inside, (perhaps like you) he truly..yes truly
He really loved jesus and knew that people needed his love to be self realized in a true love realtinship,not smaltz thats the devil sayig so...endure me im God's servant..
uh oh,yes yes its to be expected, yer thinkin, what is this?...stop being scared, this is uh..,hmm , yes yes, God given adventure, Dont run, dont scoff( this need s to see the ligth of day somewhere...) yes you say, but why me? take heart take faith,Its God calling, yeah really,
See we are spirit, not flesh,Other people, and stuff,seem like it will do the trick to mke us happy, but n0thing hit the spot, nothng made the soul come alive,Lets try God,or rather but actully both, Jesus.
The man surrounded by his ol machines knew,they needed to say "thank you" to him for his sacrifice, and real suffeering to save us... "just once in there soul", to get into heaven,,,, can it really be that simple, you like chidren because of there ability to bleive simply follow them silly,
Anyway,had a plan to do this, and help em to say this to Jesus, he s invisible but truly he hears sincerity and will honor it with eternal life with him,yes really,
but all the crap and misguided man curiousity in ol machine stuff was like a big drag on his ability to hear jesus. and help people.only this would make him happy now andlater... forever
Then one day... he went in to his back yard adn a jet black mare with a star on her forehead named "mercy" was just hangin out an eatin the grass between all his forlorn junk,.......What happened next....um, see what I mean, Iam not afraid to use whatever God has put inside of me to make people fully realized in love of God/Jesus....sorry I sorta spent more time with my stuff than yours,Im kinda worried about staring this new adventure, my inspiration is John Bunyans, "Pilgrms progress" a creative work inspired and written in consort with Jesus, a daunitng task sincerely patick
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Review of Tome at Last  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gutenberg was broke,The man who bought the patent or design for his design didt give a damn about his sweat genius and pluck to figure out the thing,
It was probably purchased when nobody was in a mood to care about whirring words cause they were in a recessiin and there was nothing to eat or drink,
The money man returnded againl like satanin in the desrt to jesus. and again with the Equivalent of What would be about ten grand in todays economy.
The thing that made me think about it was your printing press logo,That one looks about the time of our revolution.
Gutenberg probably had to cast each letter,And used the idea of the chinese hardwoods covered in there letterng with ink,or what Durer did to sell his fascinating prints on the street,
sorry not Durer, was before or after Gutenberghs time. finally, mid 15oo's the bible came out,
folks are purportng that the king james purveyers solicited the aid of Shakespeare not for the traslation, yeah maybe if has the Prosiac wonder, Shakespeare?. i doubt this.
When people want to escape into the darkness that John talked about, "He was in the world and the world was made by him and the world knew him not"
they Generally say " the book was wriitten by men" Jesus warned of this thing, when a man asked him what he must do to enter the kingdom of God, He said simply "your work is to belive in me"... People escape into darkness to miss the kingdoim of God,Does it happen? absolutely I rise against it,Help me.
Time to talk turkey,My eyes are open to the concerted effort by someone or something to hide the gospel,
I must tell you im so tired of this that t times when i bring truth, "it is written in consort with God by holy men, listening to God"...What is the mystery or beauty of God doing it all by himself" and people look at me like "yes yes but isnt this a desperat outlet to be heard as you havenot enjoyed the cheese cake and chocoate milk of the sin and indulgences that we learned and accompished folks in this seemngly endlessly flawed and shallow world have, is it not tht u cannot acquire these taht you preach at us"I read faces pretty well.
I dont like to Have to use my Gifts of uh... creative truthfullness packaged inerestingly to give u enertia to plunk down and look at my printing press and say,That capitol G casting is terrible, it looks like a sousaphone,
I want to be in heaven, with Jesus saying "well done Good adn faithfull servant, you wouldnt rest untill everone in the that God forsaken writers site read your stuff and many committed to bleieve in Jesus personally,You had interstingly writtn that was true and lead them to me,"Yes Lord but Remember that somewhat somewhat jaded brainy guy helped"
i dont like to have to keep pulling this stuff out of my mind, its not fully me...u of course sense the cheesing is unbecoming a man of God so anyway With or without you its going to happen,Men and weoman can only stuff the fake stuff of the world into there hearts, they are spirit and need spiritual guides...I thank Jesus ever day for coming in the body of a willing servant to be sacrifice like a lamb that we migth be free andw ho we really are by God who made us, here i stand jesu take all falseness theres still a lot, ,Thank you patirck


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Review of Whither Faith  Open in new Window.
Review by Patrick Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh my,um,First,You must understand that The pursuitof a realtinship with God jesus is fraugth with Wannabess and charlatans,It i may be so bold consider the First gold rush that ruined John Sutter's wealth health, and life, Lots o guys went, most of em just had no idea the will tenacity and stick to itness, to succeed,
This is nothing and at he same time everything about the pursuit of God /jesus.Nothing like it is that it is something invisible,It is so because, God can demand his way of being worshipped, that being, in purity, in devotion and steadfastness,
the problem is this it is to most impossible to,Irs like telling somebody to walk omto a vloiud adn God will catch you.. We doubt Gods way,but not to all, and in fact everyone is welcome,and can learn to do this if they persist to a certan point until the learning curve is overcome, so to speak is over,
Just now im recieving messages That scriture not this personalist thing will help this man to come back to God Jesus.
the realtionship that he had by education and rational thikning made him abandone it.
God damn universities,This is logic, scince, and smarmy sophistication, Love of God is beyond logic, too vast deep and oceanic when i was evangleizing at the university of Md to soon to be professors started laughing at me becasue they had learned some logic adn apolgetics. yes..truth seeker,obedient child of God, you will be thougth of as "stupid" ,well see..yes we will, though in the future, it is a reality,take heart it is written, you faith in the end wil bring you lastin honor given not by a inisersity but by God,
yes you cannot use higher educaion to help you, you must walk out with jus t you adn his inner dialogue, Nothing tht happened when i went out to share the Gospel was ever "jaded and old" , somewhat strange and seemingly unorthodox,enlivening,
in Lieau of polite society i prefer it.....But would never ever abandon it for the mundane deaths that I see people dying around me......
When a man refused to follow Jesus becasue he had to go and bury his parents Jesu/God said, "let the dead bury their. dead,
What he meant was that Te=he wayof God the way of life and the way of knowing jesus is The only thing worth living for,It to me an maybe you too.. the empiric "it",
listen man,he wants you to love your family adn be a good father and protect your wife adn love her, But sir you have it inside of of you too that just because it is a little cryptic and has some paradoxes tha are hard to swallow for a college graduate, uhh..The raltionship is real in jesus, Stop this long screea of blaisae excuses, and "See" youve been blind brother..cmon back
God came and said certian things and we are blessed and must as men of God pick them up and live them sir, even though now he has left the planet,You must discern him invisibley by faith.......Is it false because its hard? or makes you feel like a child, its better than being a jaded , take holiness and God given intuition.?
You complain of the hide and seek of it all,so did I we all do, therea re any her amaongs us who agree and see your point, but dont be decieved, , "Catholicism' can be discussed in further dialogues for sake of discretion.
In closing I have no idea what i will say next, it is a "faith" thing,This day this time, this moment stops.... Jesus tells me that the man must be prayed for deeply , You patrick have angerd him, and you may have done more harm than good.. aaagain..so, this will end it, Those who are righteous must know God by faith, Stop questioning Gods measn of raltionship, it is as it is, only,If this means asking querying and wondering what is doing to you and why all your days ,so be it,So be it, God almighry has ordainded, it,
a secret... God lets up once he know your in, you are presently out, don die this way repent my brethren, he has ordainded this way of sojourning on this sinfull planet for all those who beleive in his son Jesus, yes ,accepting tis soljourn is their entry, these are his children, in the coming days you freiends and co workers, colleagues, and family, freinds, wil be predictable and perhaps by no fault of ther own, "boring" and predictabe, sorry, I hope iam not overstepping my bounds, i beleive i know what im doing, , now, I want to say more but...but iam aware I Could wreck everything..dont give up, slowly pray for faith and believe and knwo he hears you....Its not a childish thing..have a care,.your honest plea has saved you,,,, you will soon be back "in',I will pray for you ..thanks for your essay very honest..uhh repent live.. discern by faith Patrick
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The up up up and away of the rainbow balloon was strugglng, ordinarily these inanimate creatures are pretty inspirational but this one wonderd why he stayed at fifteen feet. Its carefull and metered, others lessecstaic soul will find it calming, dont mind me from time to time, I want to see words tth knowc ove mountains, likein in pilgrims progress,Its amazing that his pilgrim brothers sorta said..usually no, bad bad..but sir,carry on, you take the cake, , for you well done is positive, and everyhting is in its place, but remeber the history of poems, many poems, are "sernenades' sir, a birdy or two and a panorama ofmountains and a wavey blue ocean miles below, crated by our wonderfull master "jesus" perhaps jus cruisin in a two winged blue world war one airplane would be nice,
in closing sir, you are you and i for better or worse am me, heaven needs celestial accountants, (the chimed thing works,) you know what you are doing. iam plesed you are a christian, the more the less to worry abut for evangelists,n more garsoing t straws to find faultm good poem, please continue ima the exceptin not the rule,order is a sign of heavenly things, we are merely differnt,A good and well thougt out saved accountants viewppint.patrick
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Rated: E | (3.5)
When John saw these things he was " In the spirit",Meaning it was what it was,lets not obcesss too much, it was "holy" intriguing and proper,the form of the messengers secondary to the message.relax,let us not fuss with the particulars too much , but listen to the message.
we are created beings, if we attmept to intrepret it too much its spiritual message will be lost and... alas we will miss the points that God is giving to us,
Moses (Perhaps_ sort of wearied god when he asked for his name, God said "Iam Who Iam" thus, the name the great Iam,
If anything, pay attention to the mistakes that God wants cleared up in the seven chuches,
Many of us are preoccupied with our householder and marital and professional affairs,We do not look up, but down at tidying these loose ends up,But iam reminded daily how foolish obcessive and cold and faithless is may walk with the invisible jesus by my side,soon...maybe today, in the next moment, i will not walk on earthly paths,
let us repent adn do the things we did in the beginning and please him with our friendshio and care for his hoy presence, non the less thank you for your essay, i look forward to hearing from you in the future, i too have a fascination with creatures, but....oh well, bless you freind, In Jesus name..amen
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Review of NO SOLUTIONS HERE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Yes sir, someone won, but not by embracing the lust for victory, no, that wouldnt be a lasting triumph, he created his children and then allowed them to regect and shame him and at last to fufill there blood lust in killing his body and severing by there sin,(yours mine everybodies actually, is is in there too, by the way),This darknes selfishness,, pain seperated him the source of his power and celesetial union for our limited uderstnding,The Father,
Symbolically but actually, This terribel break in his Godhead happend, he couldnt see feel or know his,,,,,Father, confused in agony,not pathos...m neccesary bokenness for all of his children creatde beings,,all of us..u too... cryin out to him, as "My father my father why have you forsaken me? .... ." for us to be realized in love of God..victory is his and ours
you must see its..a rather unortodox way to overcome the world and become its main focal point...dont regect it please consider.... It was in fact the only solution to the worlds sin, impotency and selfishiness,in short a way to fix the emptness and broken nature of this creation. It works for those who embrace it, live it witjout hypocrysy. and see ts beauty and uniquenss,Truly your angst and your recurring theme offering makes you a candidtate...please meditate deeply on it, for in it there is a certain understanding of hope love adn completenss which we all need, in closing sir,bless you for your honesty, and look into this offering, you are free to read my partfolio if u wish, i try.. welcome fellow sinner, Patrick
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Terribly sorry, the info clears up a lot,i mistook the "surprise" for "meanness' i suppose,
It was not u, but the word" "surprise's loaded meaning,
It is important to do what Iam doing, "Apologizing', if for no other reason that I dont like it myself when im , "misunderstood".
Uh,The story I read was nice,that is its 'real" an came across as an honest depiction, if everyone just did that the copies interest would be fine, adding stuff is what kills it,
I could see you were a good student from your writing,you have no idea how much ive been corrected,it is deserved and to be expected.
Iam going to be using the edititng tool in the fall, when I try to create some new sermons.
the best and perhaps most important thing you stressed was the importance to take seriouslsy the teneants that God has layed down in the bible, there are many, but foremsost is the need to be holy, God is not a man....we forget that, Iam reminded of it daily,umm,
in regrds to your sight?site..ahh mee!,,, and your writing, it is sound and proper as far as I can tell, quite baptist,
you also have an out reach which is the right thing to do..... do it all your days dont give in to discouragement.....Some people were pretty rough on my sermons, pethaps warranted, in the end Jesus pleasure in my discerning his will in the words,,,,the empiric goal..please forgive any mistakes i made in critiquing your piece, The way it came into being makes most of what i said not valid....yet hmm..
..he was doong well ad then this...oh well.. Remember, perhaps Pauls admoniton to be all things to all people for the sake of the Gospel,The woman at the well said "you worship on this mountain and we on that one" But Jesus said,," {"the father seeks those who worship in spirit)... you may see me doing this to a point that makes you wonder....im not always prudent..its good todo so, i must apply prudence,most likely lacking...Isense it in my souls as a concession to indulegnce.. it dies hard... if you spot it, just as I tried to put you back on track you may freely do so with my person.I really cant see it...until its too late...The writing is inititialy exciting, but in the end it becomes wearying..in editing...... stuff goes out, and hmm.. not quite proper.
in closing Thank you for your response glad you werent too mad...in jesus name amen
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Cruel to be kind,I get it,,sorta, but remember,The second part "in the right measure". All you said was true, but please Listen, and remember what came out of jesus as he was entering Jerusalem for the last
Time Before his crucifixion, "Oh jerusalem,.. Jerusalem, how I longed to take you in my arms, ( as a mother hen with her chicks) but.. you were unwilling". Truly he had the spirit of one who mourns over the lost,
Do you hope to find satisfaction in the demise of these errant sheep? I did too once, its understandable I dont mean to judge you,or do i? God truly knows, but i feel I must say, "you wait in vain and an irony awaits you",I fear,
Instead, a thought, a try... say to all the people that you see, "come into the house of the living God, he is kind mercifull and the only thing worthy of our love.His sacrifice on the cross was an authentic. sacrifice, please be carefull dont scoff..truly i say, done out of love." If they listen they will be saved if not... weep for them.. be holy to the end.. Yes there is regection as there was for him, so too for his servnts.. but dont be bitter
Be strong and very courageous...Keep you lamp trimmed and mind the oil,We must do so for our lord who has suffered to set us free,in thanks call others.. whether they listen or not...Bless you for you message.
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Well im wondering if its wise to mix art with anything as weighty as Gods invisible, presence,
but first out of respect for the piece, on a worldly plane. pretty well done, Genereally, when professional poets read, if they had pieces like this. and some acting ability it would have a puckish shakakespearian cultural experience, but seriously, havent we all Seen and felt the literary skill thing enough to know that either as the bard or his entertained and impressed audience, in the end, its fleeting.. well what can be said,He is known by faith alone,It is the only way to know him
while we are on earth ....its a "real" mystery,it becomes clearer with love and devoition,amd bible study,
please Dont be mad, Iaam a writer too....
listen a secret, in the beginning I was vexed by the hide and seek of everything or nothing too,I wanted to be a famous writer,A woman with a baby carriage om a sidewalk heard me playing a horn on a street and dragged me into her home to study the bible with her, in broken korean english,
It was brutal and nor at all literary, and went on for years and years, not light and fancy as your poem was, still.. Pretty good.. you worked hard ..but listen,My pride almost made me miss the omnipresence of God/Jesus,
Its important to knowm he must be discerned by faith,
this is what freed luther from the lies that surronded him,...."the righteous must live a by faith"... he discerned by faith the lies enslaving peopele nd him
In closing,,,The liberty is vast amazing creative and oceanic..also there is "
love of "jesus"..,,,seeker, be adventurous see if it is real alone with out anyboody to help me I doubted, but with the lady who found me I stuggled, not unlike A butterfly in in a cocoon, until something was there in my inutive souls that wasnt there before,
Welp, thats all, sorry about the cryptic nature of the review, .Please read "woman at the well" only if you are moved to do so.. Patrick
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Review of Tennis Anyone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice honest style, reads well, might want to start some inner dialogue with not ginned up bur, honest conflict, to give it some sizzle,..some art okay,
Im nor a big proponent of drama for dramas sake to hold peoples interest,
in the end ol Hem(Hemmingway).. a sadly Godless adn selfish guy, but he had some rather engaging copy just by not holding back on his man spirits intelectual honest wandering.
you seem christian, from some of the things said ,if youve overcome little dissapontments with A christian mans philospopical view...From the holy spirit, the releigous Genre needs writers its all poetry, nice stuff...but share spirtual wanderings, yes..ill read it make it real and skeletal, just it share it...
old age is an illusion, im almost seventy,,,but,, with christ its a state of mind a strong one. Jesus help in your messages may expose it , thank you, iam a tennis player too, i have faih in the tennis doctor(nice touch) but.. mostly jesus, cherish your wife and the lord patick
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Many times we forget, words are really everything and nothing,Essay/to try,French, if im not mistaken,Am I..again?, oh well.
Sometimes, it really seems, "whats the use," Like the sage in candide for the man and womnan seeking cosmic advice in ther problems, his precios word " shut your mouths" so wise..
however, rarely, but occasionally we are impelled by a spirit of "truth" to write or say things.
So listen, for better or your worse, whether you find it true or not, in God's final anlaysis it will definativly be revealed,
Sometimes, under the fire of writing, dead word have a power. it hides doesnt it, all power of word is not the same
"Gypsy poetry" unlike the stuff I pretnd to read like curlie holding a tea cup with his pinkie,Impressing no-one and certainly not me, for instance this poetry is chees cake, and get a load of this guy,,um , oh well hesre goes, "steamy stuff",sure its inersting but in truth it leaves one empty, unless your wife wrote it, or vicea, versa,
Are u wandering about me,Go ahead its truth,proper acceptable for a man of God to write,look her, dont read too much into it, dsperate times call for a fearless servant one,Why? i find it is not clear,its desperation and tempts lonley souls, please desist.you dimdinish yourself.,..Just let it happen with your wife or husband. holy moly, your gonna be disciplined pastor,Where will th mind go, perhaps not there?
oh well Il be on the mountain of truth, this unfiltered stuff Not a chore to read, why..unless im flattering myslef, yeah man it hapepne unpredictable and brave to some to o mystery...I pray its naturally engaging, but evenIt know its jazzed up not for entertainment but for the sake of the e\gospel to keep my audience, Will i regret it, and be disciplined. maybe and yes in that order.be holy , im tryin.
humans made in Gods image,as such, "spiritual beings" and made in Gods image intuitively and intellectually seek quite deeply for "truth" steamy stuff...an unhealthy diversion, clearly a dead end, truth noble steeds may I call you horsies?, No!! alwritht just askin. any way for this we run. with all our stength, like horses intent on winning, they run egually fast
Men and woeman egually,
Truth truth truth..The fallen and corrupted world cannot extinguish it, foolishly it fans the fire, but you have to beleive in it,its a sign of his followers,My followers said God will seek it, all of us are.Wake up we must run for it. In tandem with our vowed wives adn husbands,yoked to Go fast, feel the wind man and woman woman and man, waerying properness
speak or die, in your soul, it burns,..Jesus preserve this voice, keep me from harm
Fear not God will forgive,Trust him, if you are impelled and belieive its truth. raise the banner, "shout out" to the
"Spiritual Genre" spiritual?,is it.? some? uh sorta....It is the sisier sight of "reliigous,"
There pink prius is stuck in a big "Roamnce ditch", lemme hook up my truck hitch,A human being needs to be ina realtinshio with the opposite sex to ascend that mountain an take it as far as it is made to go, you guys are always reading more into it than it was crated to give yuh, ,maam, please take your cat with you this is a deep ditch Im gonna need to yank this thiang hard to gt it back on track...... sometimes? they speak truth, but truth that lasts is much deeper deeper...Who asked you Cowboy, no more judging from me, im a sinner,it the Genre has liberty and free will in it intent, it needs perhaps the truth itch and to seek an eteranl realtinship with the living God,is this not the end all and an be all of all spiritusl endeavours...yes yes yes this "is" possible,
Cmon run fast horsies, "giddeeyup" were goin rouwnd the bend um..? Somebody is thinkin "this is why they shoot horsies," run sea bisket runnnmm, what the... uh o cant resist..yeah yeah oh no not agsin .. oh man its baaaack Im suddenly "the Duke' in the meadow scene confronting the liars adn crooks, with a shotgun and one eye im running at the liars adn the cowardly and the decievers,The darkness the eternl night of spiriutl death..wow im goin ove niagra falls i a barrel and lovin it/// im loaded and screaming stuff.Mercy on me Jesus you made me to only know that I would write after I wrote it.
{gotta wrap it up},God given words in the bible are true,Bigger than ours, and this is in my opinion not subject for debate, but Let me try to explain something,
The men who wrote the gospels were "not" dictated to like scribes hearing an audible voice. Noow,,, listen, if you beleive you are "not" bound to heed them because they are written by men, you will find respite and some false sanctuary here here on earth but in my opionion based on faith, not in the world to come.. you are free to say, shuttup.. im not lstening,and take what youvve written autmatically and go away, or publicly revile me with it ,Im unabashed an unafraid, its your ooinion and free will,however,Time will definatively tell,I speak truth,in closing, "were you not entertained?"maybe inersting cool to say butplease think about what i said, something here to think about, still wonderin bout the for your eyes only,thing for spuose umm In truth it wont workd\ with mine,
l will just wait for something to happen, its always sort new, in the future i wiil proceed soberly..maybe by being truth full and brave it will Cause an unhappy ending to be averted, jesus is for everybody,Dont let the im so holy people drive you away,It a train for all people, get on... shout out to him for freedom, he hears hes for all sinners ,like me me maybe you too My intent was to show Im not so diffeernt from you guys, I live to write, but this is important... my destintion, heaven with my master Jesus possible cause he covers my sins adn all my mistakes... Iam saved, somewhat different,.by faith alone as luther embraced by trust and faith in him alone, Embrace him now in this one life,Say thank you for his sufering, accept his blood an have it fall on your forehead,ts a ticket to heaven.Yeah i hear scoffing ...so what!.
more...? okay,The four Gospel in the New teatment, The men who wrote them did so out of love to preserve the love.. truth, and work of there master.... he was God by the way,..The holiness to write what they did, "resposibility required is beyond me,I would be terrified,Im gettin there,Pray for me all who have assisted me in encouragement.thank you
These Apostles were lead by the spirit of God to do this,and they did, trust it, these gospels actually breathe ..There alive,Espescially "John " written for your good journey and to fall in love with him. Whos beinf\g roamantic now? Its kinda easy to have happen...in my opinion noting but him in this word is true and worth all of our devotion and love, Patrick
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Rated: E | (4.5)
At first when i read it, I was lost in my own stupid dreams of moving huge psychological stones and intriquing unsaved folks with wonderful fascianting ways to know Jesus,
before today under this " spell"I looked at you offering, and thought, "more of the same old stuff"....however, God was mercifull to the fool. today, I was graced to read it and thought, "Hey,today,, something there I didnt see before,"its suddenly, very transparent and sincere, It was a drink of water most real and not all gee gawed up.
Thank you for your truth and sincerity, "today" like in Hebrews, "if you hear his voice listen" Jesus is being espescially revealaing to me "today",
I have really suffered with my desire to bear fruit that endures to eternal life by saving people..... foolishly,trying my own way,...I hope to remember this pray for me, "really" not just saying that... your poem taught me it might be as easy s flling off long if you can stop dreaming like PT Barnum adn be sincere...thank you, ima glad you are restored and happy.Patrick

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes a relevant and fair critique, when I get carried away by my own way of trying to convince people, I feel decidedly empty....
He wants me to wait, seemingly forever, I try, (the standards of man are high those of God infinatlely higher,)

At times I get my own ideas,Astute of you to notice.
God/Jesus and Says What are you doing?" not audibly but u get th picture"
I ask him, "what then there fore can I do?" he seems to be sayng Just wait and be patient, This is my call, dont jam folks," sorta I mean, its a "faith' thing.

I say okay,its a delicate thing,
In truth, that message "Lazarus" was probably the worst one for non believers to read,Its more of a reminder of not to get to comfy with your idea of jesus, he is after all God,
Those ladies Hung out with him,it was easy to forget, it really hard to bleieve he was God, its a lifelong struggle.My weakness is holiness I was trying awfully hard to be a holy man. very little of what I wrote expressed my personal Jesus, These were the topical cryptic hidden meaning of ther for fathers of faith, I will grow and express a more personal message in the future. you might read it and like it but in the end only God knows your heart and soul. I try to do something not nothing, the latter is apathy in my opinon

Hmm.....You seem to have read "Woman At the Well" thank you for your time,Im not sure that which of those messages has the least "me" in it, but That one, " yeah maybe" It is kinda a gender friendly, and you cant really go by what people say,some of theNarried couples found it doing something real,possibly enlighthening, not me ,jesus done it
but the bottom line is pleasing Jesus this is my end all and be all,
he is aware of the sloth in regards to the preparation of these pieces..but infinatley moreso in listening to his spirit telling which way to drive the word train...everything is important you are correct in your taking of umbridge....
still My clarion jump of faith is to only stand before God himself, Jesus is there and his hamanity helps me to do this..somewhat.

Sir,The beginning of "Nicodemus" had a sortof clarion call that you might feel if your honest with yourself,The law the prestige the superego of title and The passing decetfull worlds slap on the back, "Good goin hypocryte"
wealth and title, versus love for the lost people dominated by leaders, not my plan or dynamics, Gods.
Thank you, an unvindictive and neccesary critique...Common ground is in short supply in these times Sir I sense and im not just makein this up,iam a sinner though an might just b saying it or more hoping it, God willing it may be granted by God if we are both sincere,truthfull, i did my best, God Jesus bless you
Patrick

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Review of More Sue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hmmmm...Well,um Im not entirely sure what to say about this?so.. "Haaruumph?"

I was sort of happy with the animal tales, and didnt want the, "Humans"

pulled in, in such a manner, thus, the above groaned, "Haaruumphhh"

I must tell you on inspection,it was "happily",and somewhat endearingly childish.Thank God

It just about made it around the corner to being real dialogue of the sisters, but then...Dun..dunt duuunt dunt.., the ice cream truck came... and, as they ran after it, you could see the tell-tale sign of ink and craft, "pretty good all in all" on the sidewalk, as they ran after it.

Pretty high interest,Fairly real,please, go no further, my "Cauthen Mather" puritianical advice, and mine too,I like you as, "Mr Green Jeans",That barnyard homey stuff your forte.

Other folks, not yours really "tame"
My take on the other stuff it creates " sin baggage" ,ditch it.

Any body listenin in do likewise, run free O Children Of The triuned God, dig!

smell the wind. see how "blue" the sky? Hear the clarion Gene Krupa wood pecker man, him hungy!Be a child of beauty ,clebrate.. "the day" not of the night
Any way it was written a while ago.no biggee
My intent as an Evanglelist is to save you indeed if paossibl every single person in the site, ambitious? yes.

I must be all things to all people, as far as interest level is concerned your kinda up there,you travel light, romance guy?nope, umm..hm? Me neither,

why this?,,, dont know,uh.. just came flyin in,


hmmm....when quereied in a twelve year old interview, the late, "John Updike" was asked, "sir, are you a religous man?",
The Gentlemen was wholly and completly bound to his class and said emptily, "Why , yes, um.. of course, without "this' people lack depth and are not well rounded out" something along those going nowhere to heaven trolley lines.

I judged forgive me Jesus.Thank you

Yikes, drama alert!!! My Editor upon reading this, said angrily, "this know it all unedited slop, is The antithesis of the Associated Press Format Sir" Jimmy said,No kiddin I think so too can i have clarks job?

Iam humbled, with the Papers fines, and Public, professional degredation, and humiliation deeply discouraged, um, well? sorta, yes yes,you see, "Mr, Kent" has a secret escape clause,

Lois unforutnalely is leaving me after my upbraiding, for a new love interest,,um,, which is me anyways. Wheeww ...close call. good thing I remembered that...
, In closing,Its kinda fascinating to me that at the slightest critical correction of almost all the people in this sight, that they come back almost instinctively to defend themselves,So predicatable, and wearying,
Shucks! nothing new? um hold up.. or is there somehthing new?

Solomon, in "Ecclesiastes" lamented, "there is nothing new under the sun"...however; this was before Christ advented and made peeps to have the inklings of something "new"
look ,, umm,well uh okay,,.....please, continue to admonish my pieces,
Carefully, I listen and take it all in. I mean, im giving it a whirl.
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The strange and distracting "triple spacing' is simply not possible for me to comprehend.

Why folks "believe" simply because it is the new order, they jump in and do, it,
Its probably the right thing to do, but,quite frankly ,for me..uh..hmm? its like every sentence they leave the room to go to the bathroom.

In closing,didnt i just say that? oh well...
I realize the critiquing part, "small" and get a load of me.. me... me.. meeeee, wearyingly,too big...Must repent.Its a biblical and personal recurring theme. I finish reading yers stuff once i start, thats all I should honestly



Hey man,God bless you for reading this, I think I told my "Brit" buddy, "Moomintroll" i made a new friend besides him, and its you Richard, I hope you enjoy my letter and critique some of your imput is scattered in here like a hand grenade. Im not superman either, iman evangelist and want o bring many to Christ with real messages, that hold intersest, I bleieve many will march into hell because no-one was mindfull of the Fact that the writer couslnt identify with the readers need for fresh spirit adn engaging concepts from topial nuances of reall life in the world, blind to this, they bored them and didnt give them a real undersstnding of who jesus is, they simply stopped listening

If you in an way assist me you will feel his life giving water an mysteriously something " new" in your heart and soul.God blessy you

I will pray that you come into my Persoanlist "Jesus is real".. "club" and it will help you to love your wife more, fam more,...everything that surrounds you on your estate, it sounds "fun" not a catastrophe man!
Count yer blessing, repent Bro!, im Concerned for your happy ending in christ...hey man is it may fault I write automtically?,
Id steer you towards my sermon "Nicodemus" but, Its is in the shop with an engine over haul, you can peep in if your bored... but, well,, you know how you are and how iam..now. not forever, must evolve.

....truly, your spiritual well being, and that alone is the thing here...hey man,Thats my lil secret intent, unles you havent figured it out..uh, u have i know, your a smart guy, but its simply not enough to bring yuh full circle to be realized fully in all things
in closing...whoops "Deja vou", Worry not brother,it will give you a happy landing in heaven, sincerly, wasnt it? i hope so, yours, Patrick
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Review of Dear Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Relations with other christian leaders is important, We may have gotten off on the wrong foot. if so, let us be like children who believe all things, espescially the gospel and the saving blood and personal Jesus, but also like children, to forget offenses and for the sake of the Gospel work as friends.
Thats really all for now,oh,, mio Dios,,,pardon a me,,mas..,si, si, Simepre con patricio mas...(Its wrong i know but i cant help myself) im not sure sometimes what my intent is when I just start clacking away like i did, anyway, no matter, I will pray that all the wonderfull things you mentioned can be achieved,especially for your wife , happy wife happy life,
pray for me pastor Juan, Im at times erratic and lack maturity even though im an old man,And proud, even now im wondering if what i wrote is sincere or gratuitous stuff,Im a sinner, yo cerrado..ahora..Ayudar Jesus,
The sight is in need of men of God, there is a passage that mentions "little foxes" is it in proverb? nibbling at vines in a vineyard and ruining. hermano en jesus,Ojos abierto tus, my vanity is showing,pretty bad huh? i repent now, just see oh servant,How rampant adn drastic the sin and liberality is many times worse than little foxes. we have found something real adn wonderfull we must tell them, they cant be happy here or after, hell is real, we must pull them from the fire,I really want someting i write to do this..reeally i do, let us prayfor holiness and stength Patrick
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