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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (5.0)
I always preferred reading poetry of Dr. M C Gupta.Haiku means japanese poetry written in one line.Not ordinary.This a poetry of hunger for what a huma being can't sleep. He or she dreams for tasty and mouth watering food and this dream bring or help sleeping. The dreams are lulling. Of course very good poetry.


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Review of Harry and Megan  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a free verse poetry. Written by Sumojo. The name underlined with red colour.What'll be the spell then?

Anyway, The poet wants to tell that there was a lady named Markle. Her arrival caused debacle to whom. It' not clear. Is it for marrying the prince? But why? If so then why did she marry? Was the defeat of her heart for love? It made the queen wince from prince. And therefore her brite lost the sparkle? Of her oneself? These questions are not clear. Anyway, the writing is well.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
These is a free verse poetry. And the poet is Spidey. I haven't read anything from this poet or reviewed yet. Anyway, this is poetry about love. The lovers embracing each other and their feeling and not worried, no fear, no doubt, depending on each other. A true love and the loving moment. A good poetry. I enjoyed. Thanks.


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Review of Spring Things  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ha.. ha..ha Is this writer Jacky so lazy! Ha.. ha. I think not. It' s not short story. Can I say? just a description of few moments and the scene is very funny. Yard needed to clean up, he has the enthusiasm but issue energy?..ha ha...And spring time is cruel? For the leaf fall from the tree and become dirty? ha..ha very funny. And he's lying on hammock and the bolt from the green ball..and he spun around! Many times! all these are very funny. The writer is very good one as I know. And it's a good entertaining item.I enjoyed this very much.Thanjs to the writer.


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Review by proton69
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Only Short Stories
 
STATIC
Love And Conjugal Life  (GC)
We fall In love, get married but the married life can not always complete in peacefully.
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Review of Farewell !  
Review by proton69
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh! Why little lady? Why here is a tune of frustration? Why farewell? You have the whole life in front of you. And your writing power. Oh! What you wrote.My writiting is not of higher standard like you. Oh!I don't get much time for reading. But I have started.
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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice.
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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.5)
After a long time I'm reviewing. May I've read this poet's other pieces of work. A very good poetry. The poet talk of the present time that is not charming. And he wants to build a 0new world that there the time won't be like now. At certain age we feel and miss the things and persons with we passed our past time. And suddenly there is emptiness, for the losses. We find friend to share feelings, pain and tears.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel proud to be nominated and member of the group of so many good good writers.Thanks to WDC.
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Review of Death, Stay Away  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poet just echoed my voice. After my hair and beard had ripe I started to think I was getting older.I realized that I had a lot to do and I told death to stay away. I got slow down too,weary and was harder to stay on my road. But did not stop. And I want to echo back the last para. That is the spirit of life. We can't die without the fulfilment of dream. Good theme.


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Review of OVERCOME  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is an article and it's about religion. The writing goal must be the upcoming Christmas. Because this is from history of Jesus Christ. War in heaven, this is also told in the Hindus religious book 'Gee-ta'.But the war was fought on earth that is said in the Muslim community religious book. Anyway the bad instinct always occupy in our soul and we need to overcome this. That is the main theme.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dr. M. C. Gupta, my hearts warm greetings for him for his writings. He is my favourite and best poet and have become my idol. I have read many pieces of his poetry. Excellent, marvelous, splendid, bravo! This poetry is written on the history of arrival of Jesus Christ. And this is the perfect time for reminding Him through this poetry. I just love M. C. Gupta. Though I'm Muslim but I've honour for the Jesus Christ. Very very good rhythm and rhyme.I have not given much rating up to five. But this time.....


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Review of Lostness  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😇😇😇😇😫😫😬😬😵😳😢😢😢😢 I want to tell this writer please don't mind for sticker.You are newbie and I'm not discouraging you to write. Rather I'm encouraging twice. Write on.write your random things come to you that you wrote on bio. But why are you busy to be lost? Why you want to be lost? Oh! I read one time only and my head....Oh! It was spinning! But it's good article and good topic. You spend time for thinking that is sure. But don't do this too much. Your brain can be affected. Anyway, good writing and you have writing capacity. Go on.


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Review of Looking In  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poetry written by Elisa. We of course get energy and strength from something good, sweet, and nice thing. Bitterness or anything bad can't do this. Only make us frustrated, unhealthy minded.This is the main theme of the poetry. Good rhyme and rhythm.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (3.5)
Almost the end of the cursed year of the millennium. The year of deaths,pandemic covid-19. But yet the Christmas Eve have not ended. Throughout the world Christian people are waiting for the 25th Dec., the day when Jesus Christ took birth in Bethlehem. Three old man brought the gifts.The Santa clauses never idle to reach to the child to give their gift. And this joy of receiving gift of all retains all through the year. This is reminded through this poetry.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.5)
As it occur in my mind that I have read this writer's a piece about a accident in her life. I am not sure. She wanted to tell here how her past make her suffering. And get back the inner strength to fight with her trustworthy pen. And she inspires writers. Art is for relaxing mind. It is a way to alleviate, to ease all the pain. I eagerly believe this.


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Review of Chess  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sophy Bells. I haven't read anything from this writer too. It is about the very interesting indoor playing game. In my youth I played a lot with friends. Those were very good days. And I have one chess in collection. The pieces and board are very little.They look beautiful. Poet just given a live video of playing chess between two players through writing.


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Review of Amusing the Moon  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.5)
Redtowrite. I haven't read anything from this writer. A preferred writer. And preferable love poetry.But there is sad news in bio. Sorry! But great poetry.Every little thing picked up of the moment of making love from the opponent gender. Youth must be thrilled reading this poetry.


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Review of Are we there yet?  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
Big park street, London. Crispin, a cab driver reached there to pick up Rhea,a young lady, to reach cornerstone church. There was her wedding. But mistake that, he had picked up an old lady. So boss became tempered. That is the story. The writer is a newbie. But beyond any doubt he is a good writer and has good prospect. Just need to continue writing.


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Review of For Ludmilla  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very simple, a birthday wishes. And wishing well for happy times, living well, doing anything with consideration whether it is right or wrong, study hard and taking rest, and an advance happy new year. But relationship between Ludmilla and poet is not clear. Anyway, Good writing, nice rhythm and rhyme.


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Review of Swallow.  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (2.5)
Janna May, a newbie wrote this poem. I read thoroughly but could not trace out who is the guide she talked about. Swallow what? The present time's desperation? Sorry!I couldn't comprehend but surely it can be said that she has writing capability. Just ,I think, need to be cleared, her thoughts in writing.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
An article written by Marilyn Mackenzie on Jesus Christ, son of the God , according to holy Bible and also a prophet of Islam according to holy Quran. She narrated how she keep Him with her, in every step of movement. And in present time it is very much necessary to speak to people what God has commanded. The present world of inhumanity, sinners, crime, greed is need to be changed by realizing the messages delivered through all holy books of religion. Good writing.


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Review of HAUNTED MANSION  
Review by proton69
Rated: E | (5.0)
Last night I ate too much, so I delayed to take breakfast and started reviewing but this moment I am feeling that I did it wise. First a prosperous thought "age spots and wrinkles are Tattoo" Now my favourite MC Gupta's "heart a haunted mansion!".What are the ideas! In a haunted house the things happen, metaphorically it happens in our heart!Do we think this way?Oh! Great poetry! Very nice rhythm and rhyme. Salute NC Gupta.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem written by prosperous on awesome thought. We human being, grow up everyday, become aged, one day he was child of a father, but after years he become a father, and again after years a grandpa. What is the most amazing idea that the spots and wrinkles make tattoo on the skin! We see the spots and wrinkles on the skin of an older man or women, but never think it as tattoo! Great thinking of the poet. I like the idea.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow! Kay!A thirteen year old boy? Did I read bio correctly? And registered only 3 days ago! And writing this poem! I can't believe. And seven short stories? What this man will do on the later part of his life? This is absolutely astonishing.The story might be on war. The boy may have tried to draw a picture of the war. He is searching, may be his sister,telling lie that her mother is alive. It is not clear whether it's a scene of war or not.


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