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Rated: E | (4.0)
This year has been weird in its own way. Words cannot describe the chaos going on around the world. Surely the Godhead is upset with people and their attitude towards existence. This poem is so beautifully written about the pandemic and it's socio-economic impact.

Prayers for all who are fighting the virus.
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Review of The Rolling Sea  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a melodious way to describe your love for the sea. I loved the imagery and the use of words Rolling Sea.
The depth of your love is visible as you want to go back to the sea even after the poet is gone.
Loved it.
Keep Writing and inspiring all of us.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spirits do reside in nature in their purest form. I was taken on a magical tour to the mystics of natural beauties of canyons, trees, winds and beyond.
A very well written poem and loved every bit of it.
Keep Writing and inspiring all of us.
Sky is the limit and beyond.

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Review of Cars and Bikes  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah! That first encounter. I loved the arrogance with which Janice started the conversation and loved how she melted on the first sight of Jim. Jim on the other hand looks calm collected and cool. Loved the variation given to both the characters.
The end was just awesome. Janice who was furious on the first meet seeing the bike, goes on a bike trip honeymooning couple of years afterwards. That is so romantic.
I would love to know who rode the bike that time *Wink*
Very good read.
Keep Writing and inspiring all of us.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is tough but not impossible to give justice to being a mom and being a writer at the same time. It was good to read your point of view and those tips were really helpful in boosting up that sagged determination that I sometimes have. Thanks for uplifting my spirit to a level where I have come to a point to stick to a routine. That will help a lot too.


Just one edit I could suggest.

They have the ability to} nurture a sick child and an infant novel at the same time.

Keep Writing and inspiring all of us.
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Review of Strawberry Smiles  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is always a pleasant sight to see a child slurping an ice cream. Yes I said slurping because they love to get messy. Or may be they slow down purposely to loose to the melting speed of that utterly delucious frozen dessert. They are more fascinated by that baby pink colour of a strawberry ice cream than actually relishing it's taste. They actually love the drizzle of melted ice cream on their warm fingers on a breezy summer day.

What a delight it was to read your poem and thinking about my daughter too.

Keep Writing and inspiring all of us.
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Review of Surrender  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Surrendering to His will leads to salvation. This idea is really put forth in this short but very crisp poem.
When we feel we have flawed, that's the time of self realization. Dawning upon us in pure bright glory it gives us immense peace and courage to surrender and go with the flow of life's trends.
Keep Writing!
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Review of My Fire Burns On  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really admire the depth of feelings you have while being with your loved one. The flames have not extinguished even after the departure. It still lingers on bright in your body,mind and soul complex.
I loved the line -
Emitting from the fires of your heart.
This line shows me that your love feelings were very well and aptly reciprocated. Lucky are the ones who give love and receive it many folds.
I loved the fact that the poet is adding life to years and that brings him joy even after there is no physical presence of the other half of his life.

It is a very positive attitude poem. Lovely read.
Keep Writing
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Review of Reality's Penalty  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful read to start my day. It really brought back flashes of images from the movie. I literally felt numb with goosebumps.
The loved the rhythmically rhyming structure. A story melodiously told with such ease.
Keep Writing and Inspiring all of us.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was truly informative and motivational. There are so many obviously known tips which we kind of overlook or underestimate. But they help in going forwards leaps and bounds. I loved this article for it as watered the dry soil of my wishes and desires.
Thank you so much for the push. Just what one needs on a bright sunny morning.
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Review of Hour Glass  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bullseye. Perfect definition of life. I loved the central idea of showing life through an hour glass. I loved it.
It is difficult to describe an idea in a poetry form with limited words and it is really impressive how you have done it perfectly.
Keep Writing and Inspiring all of us.
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Review of Diets  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Optimum application of the Pantoum poetry form is very much commendable.
You have effortlessly shown the very smallest of the real feelings we all go through at some point in our lives when we see our body shapes and physical health getting distorted. After reading this I have firmed my belief that no person is the only one on this planet who going through these kinds of thoughts and emotional feelings associated with physical appearance.
Very soft and nice read to begin the day.
Keep Writing and Inspiring all of us.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A soft hearted person is found vulnerable here. Vulnerable to hurts and aches which are not physically visible. They drive the person crazy with each passing day. Somewhere there is a small silver lining of a strong will to bounce back into life with smiles but it's not getting easier for the person as he has no emotional support.
This is a realistic poem on one aspect of relationships. Words are sharper than knife. The title suits the tone of this poem.
I liked the last line. It pierces deep into a reader's heart. The person is not able to understand cause of his pain. Whether it's because of the word abuse or because there's no one around to notice his suffering.
We all live a life based on acceptance. And we try to maintain standards based on other's acceptances. That makes us suffer more than anything else in this world.
Physical bruise heals with time. Emotional jolts are extremely difficult to overcome.
Very well said.
Keep Writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Where there is approximately six to seven months of winter things are really brutal. You have captured the rustic part of the cold. Other is the sugar dusting off and on from heaven above.
Yes I agree totally that life slows down in winters as there are limited and sometimes very less options of outdoor activities.
But after the harsh cold waves the warm sunlight is a real delight.

Very nice read for this day.

Keep Writing and Inspiring all of us.
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Review of All my life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hope of swings between love at first sight and a sixth sense of sensing that something is surely wrong with that special person.
The title kept me guessing after I read and re-read.
The writer knows it best.

Keep Writing and Inspiring us with beautiful words.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can very well relate to every word of this poem. The whole scene described here comes alive in my eyes. After a long winter a warm spring shower is a welcome blessing for colourful life to unfold.
Around my window I see a cherry blossom just getting ready to bloom. It has endured brutal gusts and tremendous snow. And I am proud of its perseverance to stand tall amidst the sugar dusted earth. Just awaiting that warm ray to bloom full.

Welcome Spring !!

Keep Writing !
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Review of Constellations  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Seeing everything with positivity and hope even when one is in the middle of turmoil and darkness is the very uplifting idea behind this piece.
An optimistic tone runs throughout the poem and it is very well complimented by a simple but effective rhyming scheme.
Good Read to start my day !

Keep Writing and keep exploring !!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The plot of your story is interesting and catchy. I loved the way you marked your opening paragraph. It kept my interest intact to read on.
Characters are believable and the story that you will develop will eventually turn our good. Super natural shade with spirits is a nice theme.
Will it be a thriller or a horror story ? Just curious to know *Smile*

Keep Writing!
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Review of Thought-Provoking  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Seeking lights to a brighter life , an enlightened future is what the man wishes for. But knowing the dark realities of life he turns away from the subtle moon of Hope and chooses to follow the present circumstances.
I loved the way this hopeful poem holds on to future and dreams yet stays grounded knowing that darkness of failure is still around.
Two tones ride this poem and still makes it very convincing read.
Thanks for sharing !
Keep Writing!
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Review of Tomorrow  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a situation all to-be graduates face. Including me. I faced such too.
I loved the fact that in the end you decided not to waste time over-thinking and take the reigns of today for a brighter tomorrow.
Thanks for sharing this poem.
Nice read for this day.

Keep Writing!
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Review of My Chains  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The worst disease that humans suffer is 'what will people (society) think?'
This is such a pity that human life revolves around pleasing others and living with norms created by others. Not realizing that we are calling prey to our own weaknesses and succumb to depending on social attributes.
Poet brings out these ill effects very nicely through this poem. Social rules become like the dark dungeon bars which seem unbreakable and intolerant.

Great work!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mother - an Almighty that one can see, experience her magic called love. No one can equate a mother's love, care, affection, emotion, sacrifice, nurturing and much more. She is the only reason of our existence, evolution and sustainability.
No amount of words can describe mother.
Lovely read.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful work.
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Review of What have I done?  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The title is so heart touching and the poem does apt justice to it.
Pain of losing a loved one because of uncontrollable circumstances is excruciating. The helplessness followed by it is like a huge mountain of guilt.
The theme and rhyme is good.
An emotional read for this day !
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Review of Splash  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a sweet vision. Innocence bathing under the watchful eyes of endless and selfless love.
A beautiful connect establishes between three kids and their mother through a weekly ritual which is fun filled and soothing.

I do this with my daughter too. Small things like these mean the world to me as a mother and means the universe to my daughter.

Lovely read for this morning.
Very candid and heart warming poem.

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Review of Form  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Snow shower is what I can picturize from the poem. It is required by all. Plants and humans, rivers and mountains. Sleet or blizzard, the form is not important. It is the mother nature's cycle to shower snow for some very good crops during harvest.

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