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Review of My Angel On Earth  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, the thing that attracted or interested me the most about this poem was the allegory or metaphor of an angel on Earth. I guess the philosophy is on how there are people out there who means a lot to us and are actually really kind. Sure we live in a cruel world, but there is some light on Earth.


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Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
First off, I think this is a pretty neat spiritual successor to the Guillotine. Though I felt that this story is the same except it has a different weapon. However, it's still good on it's own and it is interesting. Good job on what you go so far, man.
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Review of Heart Attack  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
Now that's what I call dedication. When I read this, I felt as if they protagonist is madly in love with whomever she is talking to. The descriptions of this poem does a good job emulating those feelings. At least that what I think this poem is telling me.
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Review of His Kiss  
Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well one thing I praise you for is to show how much this character really love this person. The biggest strength of this story is the description as it goes in deep detail of how this character feels. Because of this, readers could understand the character's feelings.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well like the concept of the story, you did a fine job giving some big meat to the chapters. The problem I have in this site is that some chapters seems pretty small. From what I found in your story so far, it's plenty to read. I praise you for doing that.
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Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, this idea is kind of strange and unique. Like what happens if a character does cheat death and has to change his or her identity. I think that what this is about, but either way it's a pretty clever premise from the way you describe it. Good job by the way.
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Review of The Smiling Rope  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well I personally think that this is a pretty good poem. I felt a good rhythm when I was reading this. Also, this poem is also kind of sad as I think it's about a guy who hung himself. I give you props for making this creepy without being so straightforward. Just wow. Good job.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The best way I have to say about this is that this story is pretty strange and new. I know people often have these kinds of things happen to Pokemon, but one dedicated to one Pokemon. I'll give you this, the choices you offer are pretty big with some variety. I personally think that it's strange, but you manage to do something good with it.
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Review of Shut up!  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, this shows a new perspective about pride. Everything we or others do now or before is kind of pointless when what really matters is what we should do for ourselves. We have achievements in life, but that won't last long if you think about it. We would either do better or worse. You did an awesome job at showing a new idea about pride.
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Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
I felt that there is strong message in this poem, but I can't seemed to think what is it really all about. From what I can think of is that life can have some rough current, but we are just human. We are bound to face some problems and that's just life. All we can do is overcome it.

I think you did a good job overall.
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Review of Birthday Party  
Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I think that this is how birthday party are like often when family gets involved. I think I can relate to this story as every time I go to a birthday party that has family involved, it's kind of more chaotic. Good job on making this very relatable, my good sir.
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Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.5)
Could this be a poem or story about denial? I guess since this is what I can interpret so far. You did a good job on making the armor have some strong symbolism as we can have this outer layer that hides our feelings instead of showing the truth. Overall, I like the symbolism.
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Review of Mother Nature  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
To be fair, you do a good job on showing the beauty of mother nature. The poem feels kind of okay, but the part where it says,

"The world goes on….
……….and on…..
……………and on….."

is actually kind of unique. You did a good job overall.
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Review of Why, It's Us!  
Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well that is a big shocker. I did not think that the United States causes so much trouble. The country had it shares of problems, but I cannot believe that it was much more bigger. I praise you for your use of political satire in this poem. Good job sir.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think your use of multiple perspective is kind of unique as we can get a new insight of how these characters feel about what's around them and their emotions. At least, that is what I got out of this I think. Overall, I do find these multiple perspectives to be unique based on how you use them.
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Review of Stars  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
I sense a strong message of desires that are out of your reach in this poem. I think that is what this is about. You did a good job by the way. Sometimes, things are out of your reach just like stars. They can be goals, your important valuables, or people you care about and like stars, they are so far way.
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Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
I do not know if I am right, but I feel as though this poem is trying to convey the idea of hope. I get this hopeful feeling when I read this as the beggar has something that is willing to help him. Even from all the dangers and terrors the beggar face. You did a good job overall.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Wow, this does give a perspective on the memories of people. I think that what it's about. Anyways, I feel as though that the memories of people we never get to see again are pretty strong if we cherish it. your poem or story conveys that idea, I think. Great job.
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Review of What's In A Name?  
Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well this is a new perspective about names. Sometimes your name mean something bigger than you think or someone with the same name as you did something awesome. From your story, names not only give us an identity, but some symbolic meaning and a form of strength. At least that is what I think. I might be wrong, but I had that feeling that it's about how names are more than meets the eye. I just find this story unique with the idea.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, I do find the lore of this story to be interesting. For some reason, it feels as though there is a mystery as whether or not the myth is true or not. The last question gave me this unnerving feeling that something paranormal is happening with this lake. I felt that this story offers a good mystery.
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Review of My big dream  
Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, this was terrifying, but at least there was some relief for the main character and she has a bitter sweet end. The thing I do not get about child abuse sometimes is why would they even have kids if they don't want them. If anything, they should have used birth control. I personally think that if you are going to have a kid, it is your job to take care of them. I just feel sad when I read this.
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Review by Joe
Rated: E | (5.0)
For some reason, I felt that there is a strong message in this, but I just cannot put my finger into this. I would say that this story is very different than the ones that I have read so far. It's very unique and it felt as though there is a strong message in this. My guess is that it's about the changing world and how we now have the first black president and soon to have the first female president.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
For some reason these characters remind me of the Three Stooges and that's a good thing as it does feel kind of funny and genuine. Though that is just my interpretation. To be honest, I kind of like this story just because it has that vibe of the stooges. That is what I honestly think and it's not a bad thing.
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Review of The World's Gone!  
Review by Joe
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm guessing that this story symbolizes how sometimes we feel as though we lost everything. Like when I look online, I felt like I got nothing to do when there is lots to do. It feels as though it conveys a message of emptiness. That is just my interpretation and what I think. I do like how this story makes me think.
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Review by Joe
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well I really like the Elderly woman in this story. She is so outgoing and unique in comparison to other elders and is just flat out likable. Everything that I learn about her is so interesting as she looks like she is capable of taking care of herself.

Overall,I really like the character for her strength and personality.
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