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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Posperous Snow,
My friend, your poem reminds me of getting caught in a thunder storm, without an umbrella. I enjoyed your words you used to write it with.

Listen to raindrops splash.

Childhood memories flash.

Through Oklahoma rain I dash.

Finally I'm home.

Then the thunder clash.

I vow never again to roam.
Queens
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Review of A Midnight Stroll  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (3.5)
PBCurtis12,
My friend, This is a well worded poem with the words you chose to write it with. The last lines are the best.

Your poem flowed good.

It brought nature alive.

It speaks of forbidden.

I enjoyed the read a lot.

I found no errors in its entirety.
Queens
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Review of Why Poetry  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Prosody,
My friend, Yes, poetry is the basics for the use of beautiful words in the alphabet, my friend.

Your poem was well metered.

The rhyming was very good.

One line complimented the other.

It has a fluid flow to it.

I enjoyed the last stanza the most.

A well written piece of poetry.
Queens

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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Neva,
My friend, Thank you for your knowledge in writing different forms of poetry. I guess you are never to old to learn.

Your thoughts were well thought of.

The last line intrigue me.

I found no errors in its entirety.

A nice lesson in poetry, my friend.
Queens
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Review of None.  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dev Fine,
My friend, I'm sorry to hear you are down in the dumps with your depression. Yes, sometimes we have to go a little farther to overcome life's adversities. but, with God all is possible and likely to carry you along with Him and give you the help you need.
Queens
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Review of Hay Fever  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lexi,
My friend, I'm sorry for your pain and hurt over this lost individual. I hope you overcome it all start back on a path of recovery in your heart. Usually God is the answer to help you over life's burdens and obstacles. May God be with you, my friend.
Queens
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Review of Risk  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
MontyB,
My friend, you seemed to be a brave man you take the bull by the horns. I like your philosophy in life and what you believe in and about other people. Thank you for the nice read in your poem about taking some risk and chance in your life, my friend.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
AmyD23,
My friend, I guess we all need to loose weight if you think about it. Sorry to hear about you losing your job over nothing. Hang in there and you will prevail through it all and good health. Thank you for telling us your sad story about losing your job.
Queens
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Review of No More Winter  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
WhiteWolfGirl,
My friend, I read you story about the wolves, Ajax and Cassandra and their ordeal in the cold. Ajax must be a mean wolf because she ate the Groundhog just because she wanted it warm. Thank you for sharing this story with me here on writing.com.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Umayaal,
My friend this is a beautifully written article, my friend, true, true, true, as the day is long. If only people practiced what you have said, in life what a wonderful place it would be.
Thank you for the nice and beautiful read. I found no errors in its entirety.
Queens
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Review of The Lost Eskimo  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
LittleLambie,
My friend, Yes, the Eskimo is like the American Indian, lost in their own land. The only critical difference is the weather and its bitter cold and discomfort. Thank you for sharing this poem about people who get very little respect by others.
Queens
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Review of Recovery  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Connieann,
My friend, Yes, do you know what the Native Indians call the wind? Mariah. This is a short but, well worded poem, my friend. You declare what you want and that is all you want to write.
Thank you for sharing this with us here on writing. com.
Queens
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Review of Love  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Amrita,
My friend, Let me tell you that true love does exist. I been married for 52 years to the same man and we are still in love. I was 16 and my husband was 22 at marriage so love does exist.
Thank you for your input on love though. Thank you for sharing this story with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Jace,
My friend, you are never to old to learn, my friend. I dabble in poetry but, I can't say I go beyond the typical poems such as rhyming quatrains usually four of four in a stanza. This poem has its good points it certainly is easy to read. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bumblegrum,
My friend, this poem is well worded with unique words that speak your feelings and intention. A nice read for someone who likes the older English written in a poem about the sea. Thank you for sharing this poem with me. I found no errors in its entirety.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
AmyD23,
My friend, I feel for you having to get everything ready for cleaning. On a Sunday night that makes it bad as for time to prepare everything for Monday. Thank you for reminding me about when I had to work. Thank you for sharing your story with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (3.5)
Empalgarse,
My friend, I don't know anything about a playwright or plays. So I will review you on your words you have written. You told the other person what you wanted and I guess you done it. Your write was short and I found no errors in its entirety. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (3.5)
jardane,
My friend, Your story of James the football player and the shortest player on the team is interesting. I bet James tried harder to play than anybody else on the team, too? Your story is good to read for young players who feel insecure about their abilities.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.0)
Empalagarse,
My friend, I can think of a few times I've thought of that, my friend. Time and redheaded women make the world go around. Not blondes, but redheads make the gentlemen take notice. Thank you for the nice uplifting poem about women. I found no mistakes at all in its entirety.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Empalagarse,
My friend, the words in this poem are beautiful especially the way they are written. I must admit that I didn't understand all of the poem per say. What I did understand was very interesting and well written. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Krysha,
My friend, this is a beautiful poem about the desert, my friend. Some of your definitions are well written and presented properly to the reader. I enjoyed reading your poem it flowed good and I never found any errors in its entirety. Thanks for sharing with me.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
G.B. Williams,
My friend, Yes, if the truth were known we would all be thanking the Lord for our blessings. All we have to do is look around us to see so much suffering especially by kids. God be with you, my friend for your faith in the almighty and love.
Queens
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Review of Primal Sense  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fyn,
My friend, This poem is wisely written with its great mention of strong feeling. In a way it seems like it is an old Indian poem speaking of the earth. I enjoyed reading it and it flowed good with no mistakes. Thank you for sharing it with me, my friend.
Queens
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Review by queens
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
JessCarsen,
My friend, I can imagine what that guy thought when he walked bye after seeing you all. Sometimes you get caught up in a situation that can't be corrected. I would imagine you guys all having backpacks also raised suspicion. Thanks for the read, my friend.
Queens
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Review of Ariadne Precious  
Review by queens
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cynaemon,
My friend, I'm sorry for the hurt you must be feeling over your kitty. I recently had to put my dog down after having him for 14 years. So I know how it feels to loose an animal. I hope you find a way to overcome the pain of loosing it. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Queens
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