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Review by Bob
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Intriguing, the best way to start a good story is to leave the reader looking for the next page. Good work.
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Review of Excerpt  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
A story that starts like this one can end up any place. It will be nice to see what happens down the line.
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Review of The Cowboy Way  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
Been there, done that.
Love it.
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Review of A Dog Tale  
Review by Bob
In affiliation with The Sci-fi Writers Guild  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some times truth is better than fiction. In this case it is.
Very well written.
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Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
If you haven't set that to music then you need to.

Fellow Holy Roller
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Review of Thirty Minutes  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
If cheese can be sweet that was.
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Review of Blank  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
We've all had it from time to time.
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Review of Family secret  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
Reads like a true slice of life, and that's the way good writing should be.
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Review of No Work No Pay  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (3.5)
If you put it out there, some lovely girl who is 5'9"
may reach out and grab your poetic heart.
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Review of 'Dark money'  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
While I do not write with a political agenda, the right of free speech still exists in our constitution. So, I defend your right to express your opinions whatever they may concern.
Well written, well expressed.
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Review of Clash (Our story)  
Review by Bob
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great first person pov monologue/dialogue. Makes the reader want to know what goes next. And that is super important.
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Review of Ethanol  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good essay. Great subject. Be careful to line edit your work that it does not sound repetitive.
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Review of Lost in the Words  
Review by Bob
In affiliation with The Sci-fi Writers Guild  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are a poet and a writer.
Super good.
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Review of Synchronicity  
Review by Bob
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sci-fi lover here: This is a fine piece of work. It works on a professional level. Publishable, I think is the proper word. It would make a fine first chapter to a larger work. The plot is totally feasible to the reader who is science minded. Keep up the great work.
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Review of Deserve it all  
Review by Bob
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I've discovered over the years, that our writing sometimes reflects what is going on deep in our subconscious. Or it is like poetry it helps us express ourselves. That is why writing is so much fun. I like your work, whatever the reasoning behind it. I once wrote an entire novel just to discover I had a rant against racism. It surprised me when it came out on paper.

Keep up the good work, and write on.
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Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not qualified to judge poetry. BUT, I like this, and I like the question.
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Review of Not Today  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good stuff... Well written. Reminds me of East Texas.
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Review of Levirate  
Review by Bob
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was scary good! I wouldn't change a thing.
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Review by Bob
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
That was some weird horror. Well written.
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Review by Bob
In affiliation with The Sci-fi Writers Guild  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I am so sorry for what you and many other helpless children have gone through. It is awesome that you were able to open up and tell about it using the written word.
Keep on writing. It is good for the soul to express your hurts.
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Review of High Violet  
Review by Bob
In affiliation with The Sci-fi Writers Guild  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poignant!
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Review of Book of Hebrews  
Review by Bob
Rated: E | (5.0)
WELL DONE!!! You have spoken within the confines and harmony of the scriptures.
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Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
I always appreciate a creative mind. Really good work
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Review by Bob
In affiliation with The Sci-fi Writers Guild  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Definitely has the flavor of the down under. Good work.
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Review by Bob
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello:
I am your new member. You ask for a sample of my work. I could not refer you to anything related to Sci-fi so I posted nothing.
Now you will find the first chapter of a novella I wrote many years ago and lost in a computer crash. It is #2256726 in my portfolio and is called The Music Tree.
Thanks, Bob
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