I really liked this one. It flowed really well and the imagery in it made me smile throughout the whole work:) Please keep writing and I will check out more of your port later to see what else I stumble across. Again, great work and keep on writing!
This is good. The flow was a little bit hard to follow at first and suggestion to watch the spelling and punctuation in your writings just a little bit but the imagery was visible and I can see you growing as a writer. I will check out the rest of your port when have a moment! Thanks for sharing!!
This is really good. I know exactly how you feel when it comes to this subject. They say "The pen is mightier than the sword." and I have always found this to hold true, one of the nearest truths to my heart actually. Keep writing. Shall keep looking and find more of your work!!
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