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872 Public Reviews Given
875 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I don't like using a template. I don't like correcting spelling. I don't like correcting grammar. I don't want to be your editor. I enjoy discussing what I have read. I am very happy to tell people what I have liked and what I have disliked. There is not a lot that I dislike.
I'm good at...
We shall see!
Favorite Genres
Most everything
Least Favorite Genres
Non-Fiction, unless you lead me to believe that it's fictitious.
I will not review...
Anything I don't feel like reviewing.
Public Reviews
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi - Nice to meet you - Welcome to WDC! One word missing in line 2 of 3rd stanza. Very nice poem overall. I will be looking forward to reading more of your works.
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Review of reality  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi. Nice to meet you. I cant't say I know how you feel. Everyone feels differently. I've lived long enough to have felt many different ways and many times I have wished that I would never feel anything, ever again. It took me about 60 years to become truly happy. It was worth the wait. Maybe explaining how you feel through your writing will help you make contact with yourself and others. You appear to be a very good writer. There are lots of people to talk to on WDC and I will be around.
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Review of Sally saw  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely story Minnie. The best stories are the ones I can identify with - yours is excellent! I sometimes see empathy as a curse rather than a super-power. Welcome to WDC!
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Review of Leave Me Be  
Review by Geoff
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I can identify - even though I'm old enough to be your grandfather. Nice to meet you. Great poem! I will be reading more of your work. Welcome to WDC! Oh, by the way, I sure am glad I never killed myself!
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Review by Geoff
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
WOW! Nice to meet you Nicole! I like that piece very much. Wonderful imagery and emotional content. That story could go on and on - an emotional, poetic, autobiography. Welcome to WDC! ( I really identify with it)
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute poem. I like to think that the people in my head are really there. I have met some! Then sometimes people I really know get transformed in my head and become better people for it in real life. Schizophrenia is an amazing and fun thing! Seriously though, nice poem and welcome to WDC!
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are some problems with switching from first person to second person, (unless you are doing that on purpose, I do sometimes), and some word usage . like "circles of death stopping falling" instead of stopped falling, (unless your doing that on purpose). Anyway - I love it! I bet when Nuebert gets a little older he will be able to trick the gods into giving him whatever he wants.
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Review of Home  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thought provoking.
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful. I cried.
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (3.5)
Interesting. I'm thinking about it.
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Review of China Shop  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (3.5)
I don't really feel qualified to review a song. I would have to hear you sing it. It is a cute poem though.
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Review of Patricia  
Review by Geoff
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Excellent Richard. Those feelings and memories are very familiar to me. I enjoy reading literary fiction which portrays emotions which I think are REAL, rather than a sensationalization of reality.
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Review by Geoff
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Fantastic Eliza! I can see that as the beginning of a great children's book or series of children's books, I have read many published ones which were no where near as enjoyable to me. I didn't see very much I would change. Maybe some word usage but that would just be my opinion, which sometimes isn't all that great. Keep up the good work!
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Review of Shadow  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Mmmmmm. Candy you make me hungry.
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Review of A Penny  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.5)
Extremely well written and quite intriguing. I run. I have spotted a lot of loose change.
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Review of The Lamp  
Review by Geoff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Very nice Eliza I liked it a lot. You have a lot of talent.
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Review of In The Heart  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely. My heart is a little compartment in my mind. A mental treasure box.
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Review of The Family Ring  
Review by Geoff
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I enjoyed this, but in my opinion this genre is way overdone and I have started losing interest in it. I like to see some more unique things pop up. It is getting harder to surprise me.
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Review of Would you Listen?  
Review by Geoff
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Sorry about not getting to this. Very well written Joe, but I'm afraid I am getting kinda tired of this genre of fantasy. The originality seems to be pretty well played out. That is just my opinion of course.
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Review by Geoff
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Nice historical fiction.
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Review of Life Goes On  
Review by Geoff
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good Sunny. I can identify with the poem very well. I judge literature by the amount of emotion I feel. I am an emotional junky. It gets difficult to count the goose-bumps sometimes. I'm thinking about getting a scream/cry - ometer! Seriously though - I love your poem.
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Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very touching,
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Review of Superhuman  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. Sounds like my thoughts of 50 years past.
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Review of Puddy tat  
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (4.0)
We are all Pudddy Tats in one way or another, but some day I hope to be a lian and then I can say, "Take it or leave it damnit!" Welcome to blogging and WDC!
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Review of Blog?!  
for entry "The Meet Up" 
Review by Geoff
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hahahahahahaha! GREAT!! You are soooooo clever!!!
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