This is a nice poem about a monopoly hat. The author recites it quite skillfully engrossing you in the narrative about his love for the hat. It is nice how he compares the hat to the character of Mr.Moneybags. The lines "And the playing pieces; the battleship and race car, The wheelbarrow, cannon, could it shoot very far?" are good. It is a good comparison of events.
This is a good account of a person's being haunted by the devil. The narrative is interesting. The story can be any reader's own experience. The author does not win the apprenticeship, which makes a sad ending. The flow is good, though the language and text could be better.
This is a good poem about the writing the author does at writing.com. The author tries at writing good poetry and is beware of critics. He says "Wisdom marked with creativity
And a well done sense of gravity ". This is what he tries to convey through his poetry (Wisdom and creativity).
This is a nice story about a man haunted by his past drunken endeavours. The author has a good narrative in place and the story is catching. But, there has to be more clarity in the narrative as events and people get mixed up as in the heart monitor part. With some improvements an engrossing story.
This is a good thought up story about Pikachu like features in a man. If one is a Pokémon fan this is bound to happen. The story of turning on yellow hairs is fantastic but too imaginative to be real. Still it is a good try at writing imaginative fiction.
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