This is a good poem of a place where the world bleeds white. It is short and sweet. The lines "I inhale the fragrance of your passing" is significant. It tells us how we can smell others presence. The color of blood is white in this place and it makes us think why.
This is a good prose about the author's search for the real person inside him. He compares, analyses and thinks how he fits into the slot of people. It is thought provoking and makes us think how we analyze ourselves. A good psychological introspection of the self.
This is a good poem titled e-motion. The screen is the focus of the poetry and the emotions felt by the poet is the poetry. It is up to one's imagination to feel what one feels about the actions one sees on the screen. The poetry is well written making one think about the way the screen makes us think. A very deft handling of words to describe emotions.
This is a good poem about being downed at 18. The poet shares her views about approaching the eighteenth year and the challenges it brings along with it. The freedom it brings along with hardships. Also, the possibility of a job can make a person go down at 18. The writing is skillful and full of meaning.
This is a nice story about an event of a girl in a store. The short story is well crafted. It keeps the reader riveted and wanting more. It could be a part of a bigger story with more characters. The author should try to write more. The reading of the letter by Lydia makes things clear to her and she tries to save her mom from imminent danger.
This is a nice entry for dialogue 500. The conversation between the person and his death is very descriptive and makes good reading. Death can be scary and uninviting. Dealing with it in a profound manner in a conversation tone makes it interesting and thought provoking. The author has handled the conversation well.
This is a nice story about a boy and his digimon. The interaction with his school buddies is interesting and riveting. There is suspense as one reads through the story. Devon is a hero and can be an inspiration for readers. His friend Dillon is also interesting. The first day in school is captured well and is graphic in character.
This is a good account of a man and his encounter with another man who lets him work on his house. It is written skillfully and to the point. The description is exhaustive and looks a good one for an entry to the writer's cramp. The writing is also good to read for reader's and is enjoyable.
This is a good story about a person visiting their grandma. It is vivid and very descriptive in its content. The elaborate explanation of all details have to be commended. It reminds of a writing in a professionally written fiction novel of a good author. The author should try his hand at professional writing.
This is a nice prose about being confused with life. Life can be confusing, flabbergasting or ridiculous at the same time or at different times. The lines "Going all cranky , throwing things up." make us think why we act the way we act sometimes. Patience is required at such times. A nice article about life and a good read.
This is a nice poem about a person missing his mother. The poetry is simple and to the point. It is written from the heart and is thus full of true meaning. The lines "I look up at the stars and think about what you are doing, and think of you.I wonder are you looking up at the Sun, and thinking of me." are good.
This is a good prose about someone looking into the mirror. It says "I look at the mirror and see a man with a curious brand of casualty". This is a way of looking into a mirror with casualty. The fear of the unknown is also what catches the author unaware. He is aware that no one will ever tell him, he is doing it right.
This is a good rhyming poem about going on in life. The lines "Time to use some Godly sense
Need not cry for recompense." give it a good start. The lines "Children scream for much more love
While lousy bullies give a shove." are also good. It gives us hope to keep going on in life.
This is a good poem about hope in despair. The poetry is written in standard poetry style with paragraphs and rhyming. This makes it nice to read and gives a sense of satisfaction to the reader. The lines "My story unfinished, my dreams half-baked, My broken sense of self, my days long and drawn, " are good.
This is a good account of a man rising from the dead in different incarnations. It has overtones of the spiritual as we do in real lives. We have many lives too. The writing is interesting and keeps the reader interested till the end. Casper Montgomery might not be alive, but we all shed our bodies and get new ones like him.
This is a good account of the author's encounter with an incident in the Delhi metro. It teaches us to be tolerant towards others and be patient with people around us. The writing is nice and simple. By using more complex words it can add more meaning to the words and make it more interesting to read.
This is a good poem about the events of growing up in the summer. The poetry is well written and is strong in wording. The words chosen are good and convey good meaning. Only, paragraphs would have helped the writing better. A good poem nonetheless and more can be expected from the poet.
This is a good poem about orphans being taken away to another country. The flow of the poem is nice and makes reading good. The lines "Broken rooms now echo With fear and tears. Souls still linger," are good. They make you feel for the residents who lived there.
This is a good poem about valor and honor. It talks about the serving men and women in the armed forces. The lines "On this Memorial Day 2013, with so many Discouraging battles and conflicts All over this tattered and turbulent globe," indicate how the globe is torn with conflicts and battles."And all of its fallen heroes,Courageous armed forces men and women" also show how the dead are honored.
This poem is special as it talks about the personalities a person might have in the closet. Its different and makes you aware of the personalities you have other than you know. People discern you differently and that makes you a fake, ironed or fancy personality. We all need to clean our closets from time to time.
A good poem about the workplace and what goes there in. The rhyming is good and makes reading fun. There is an emphasize on the boss being on the scene. Productivity is the goal of the worker and we see it in all offices. The lines "Work as a team, live for gains you can reach, And with each opportunity, struggle to teach," makes it interesting.
This is a good article about a precious gift. The child is the precious gift. It harps on the virtues of god's gifts, which we take for granted. The prose written in paragraphs makes reading enjoyable. The subject is to the point and keeps the reader interested.
This is a good poem about the grave warden. It tells how he wants to preserve the memories of the dead. The flow of the poetry is good. The lines "Their names to be blasted into granite." are nice. A better assembly of words makes better poetry. Rhyming is also important.
This is a good article about the author expounding about being encouraging to other writers on writing.com. The article is well written and is exhaustive in content. Doing unto others as we would to ourselves is one the things it brings to light. The quotes from other authors such as Ralph Waldo Emerson and Matthew 7:12 are inspiring.
This is a good account of Sally Caverly as she carries out her art career. It seems more biographical and is descriptive of the person in question. It could be good pitch for someone who needs exposure in the arts world. Also, it could be a propaganda document for someone looking for sales deals.
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