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Review of Echo Beach  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (4.5)
hi sir/ma'am, I like all the metaphors and perceptions of time (a very mysterious and interesting thing, time), and you made it long enough to allow all the nooks and crannies of the feeling to wind their way out

iv read so many poems on this site and elsewhere that felt to be a fraction of what the author was feeling and thinking. a think maybe a lot of writers are afraid readers will lose track or interest if a poem is too long


Namaste ~*~ a wilder moon
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Review of Recognition  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (4.0)
possible is like one of my middle names

it sounds like it was a beautiful autumn day with a wonderful dog, on an easy casual walk!

mind warping metaphors slip through my brain with this


namaste ~*~ a wilder moon
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Review of Breakdown  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can relate to this a bit. A few years ago I was woking endless 2nd shift overtime at a factory in Iowa. A little over a year into it my body and brain were so pumped on adrenaline I had some seriously bad sleeping problems. It was the first time I experienced hallucinations from sleep deprivation.
Thankfully I'll never have to go through any of that again.

I described (very metaphorically) my recovering from the sleep disorder it after I quite that nightmare in a poem called "broken flowers"



namaste ~*~ a wilder moon
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Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this stirred me deeply in my reflections emotions of my own writings and traveling searches for truth and understandings of what I need to do for myself and the world and universe for the spirit and soul to thrive and evolve! :;.. where my life is going

living life moments and heartbeats at a time; having spaces in the togetherness:, its a beautiful way!


namaste ~*~ a wilder moon
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Review of Prisms  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
coolest! .;, hello good madam, I believe we may share some functionalities in some part of the neural networks

perhaps you can work some magic end for following adventure! (might not show up correctly constructed on your end)

a Mount i Sing

The Valley Forged

Choose you’re own adventure chords



Time the boulders roll Slowly
c down the valley chord
e — holding the Forge
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g the softness
Singing the river waters with the pines
a gently breeze i
bristling the flower people
h


Flute songs of the Gentley rocking
h praire grassets fold softly
e over the mossy rockings
— flutter bees in Fantastic
mirrors sWinging dance
o there
u mighty shadows in the flakes
n n f h
tain e e
ling dancing snow children

Glassy in the colliding scopes
h u
of e
village of Minerals
Forming in the hole below


Rainer Mist in the eyes of the
u a Cavernous fog Whisitling
Rumble s through the canyon
R b i — monuments in Haze
O l v
A e they Speak the languages
R of before …; o
R lASH you with their mighty
N winds
Grip
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Review of Strange Mind  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
hello good sir... If you find yourself thinking its not easy being me, you're not alone .. DID i say i'm schizophrenic (extremely misunderstood) autistically brilliant humility here on my end *Smile*

I think you'll find this wonderfully stimulating. I am very very sensitive to chakra energies in many forms
from my recent brief phase in psychiatric care with practitioners who understand spirit very poorly unfortunately :~/



9/circa13/2021

they pain, they pain,
whey they rain ,whey
they rain. , . Because
able to release from its the old game weiagyt
this craziness, ,;., if you feel our pain
insanity & cruelty we all might be

the screams we scream -;~ because eyes wide open
silently ... why?? of walks of wild wanderings
the patients asking.. why,? -:~ words of what the hell is
am I here. goin on!
The hospital crawls around
in projection quivers



ghostly's Spirit SZewn :;~ we LeveL cWwazZy


Authors note; post script; memoir of a memoir ., choose one that sound right *Wink*
I had speak a half truthful lie to those of narrow mind. an animal being here who has chronic anxiety and got released 2 days 2 late ,. 4 days post I'm leveling out now very well!



Namaste
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Review of Writing in Snow  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
hello sir, or ma'am *Smile* ,.. I have authentically lived this perspective for several months winter last year. had some deeply wonderful thoughts swim outa me watching the beautiful snow shine. greatly joyed knowing someone else understands the divinity of experiences this solitudic scenery.

my foresight and reflections of past lives is coming through now in almost bone chilling clarity, and throat chalkra even translating dialogue, my spirit from an Arapaho woman life

beautiful passage of wisdom..., and my wisdom to you, my meditating too much on a poor diet (hugely improved) put me psychiatric care for 2 solid weeks ;-!/ oops lol


further suggestions from your portfolio?
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Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
wonderful bummer :-;/

I seen one cat on americas funniest that liked a good bath but that may have been a bunny its a little funny now


me and my mama had a big mellow orange cat for 20 years that didn't much like the presence of another Little rambunctouus painfully playful kitty so he found homey welcome a walk through the woods for few months
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Review of Who am I?  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (4.5)
I, a humosapien... am, very very close to writing that... on all applications in future... for what race? I already said.
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Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good!!!
I got sucked right in!!

I will be reading more!
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Review of State of Mind  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the this is presented. The first two sections immediately reminded me of what Levar Burt said of his mother's approach "to give her children children the best education she could not afford.

I started less is more years ago and became a minimalist in Colorado and I'm very ok with that hahahah

An idea came to just last night about this philosophy
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Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again.. first.. my standing rule on this site is get a review give a review to the same person.

The ending of this cracked me up!
Dreams are a very interesting thing. I've read a bunch and watched all sorts of docu stuff about dreams and the mind and brain.
And holly freak'n molly sleep is so undervalued in this country!
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Review of Fill  
Review by WindSpirit3
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again. I read a bunch of your poems, and got me thinking of 2 things: a couple months before left my factory existence to travel the greater Yellowstone 4/2018-6/2018, some of the guys thought I was nuts, like "how could I possibly live without this day job (2nd shift:~{ ): I was not okay with existing there (pointless); and then when I was talking to the case manager for my disability claim, I told him I'm working towards living out of a small travel trailer spending a lot of time rec camping (activities) deep in the mountains and if I have to work a part time odd job to maintain that the rest of my life... I've made my peace with that.... message of happiness living outside a tiny valley town.
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