Nicely written details and a young boy being sent to camp. He plays volleyball and meets a young girl and insults her but compliments her at the same time. He likes her. Some good characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like things are going well for the young man. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Magnus Opus. He sounds interesting. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. Well chosen words. This is enlightening, uplifting and inspiring. Creative and well defined. Spiritual. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and kids have suggestions for entertainment when they get older. A good style and showing the kids things on a ride in a car and some scenery. A good style and well rounded characters. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Design moments. Designing can be fun no matter what we decide to design. Me. It was scrapbooking. A good style and I thought of The Midnight Ride Of Paul Revere as I read this. Kegs and Easter Eggs. Good call. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up nicely.
I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good advice. Youth and energy will score points. Always take light when soul searching. Tge problem isn't the problem- it's the reaction. Grandparents and aunts and uncles are special. Words to live by. A good presentation and words to live by. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Fearless. It would be nice to be fearless. A good style and easy to follow. We do get afraid of things. Some good reflections and food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections. Neat imagery and a good scenario. Light of time. Good call. Moving toward the light. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Well defined. Always: Megan
A good outline of characters and dragons are mentioned. Interesting character names and neat chapters. Sheridan keeping notebooks. Good themes. It would be nice to read the storyline for this. Creative and some good goals and guidelines. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hear GPS aren't reliable. I have to listen closely when I turn on GPS. I hate detours. I only drive 40 minutes to go somewhere. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and quite an adventure. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a sweet tale of a picnic. S road trip. Children and monkeys as guests. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and cheery. Monkey thiefs. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I am not a fan of zombies but this made me laugh. These zombies went Trick er Treating. They had lunch at the cemetery. I had to laugh. Creative and colorful. Looks like this was fun to write. A good style. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ritual. Missing someone who died. Sometimes, we forget. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Some sad reflections and some good ones here. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A seance it seems. Experts who are fake mediums. They know how to fool people. A police officer is impressed. Creative and this draws the reader in. Handy magic tricks. The ending. A real paranormal person. The fake mediums are scared. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Thinking of books and movies we love makes us happy. The feeling doesn't last forever it seems. Books arr nice while they last. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. When I went to school, I didn't like teachers but I respected them when I grew up. Now, I wish I would have been a teacher. A knowing kind. Good title. Easy to follow. Well defined. This holds the reader's interest. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and being outside watching squirrels play. The cat Oscar and his antics. A cold winter day. The person watching this and feels warm. Good descriptions and neat imagery of a backyard. Good characters. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Saying you are being blackmailed. A note saying they saw what you did. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like there could be a part two the story. Blackmailed at a job. She see the boss. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and three young ladies didn't make it to the Halloween party. Parts of them found and a purse. A murder on Halloween. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad when humans don't know where their next meal is coming from. It is sad for abused animals, too. I pray for animals and humans both. Easy to follow and a sad prose. Well defined and creative. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Two boys arguing about cupcakes, muffins and chocolate. The one boys family is organic and the other boy is allergic to chocolate. A teacher is trying to sort this out. Cute. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good children's Bible lesson. Using pictures helps the children learn. A good style and this is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Children can relate. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sharks. They are evil. Humans should just stay out of the water and they won't bother us. I don't like sharks but they have their space. A good style with true reflections. Creative and colorful. Well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We always wonder what if. Separate universe. Like parallel time. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. The mirror is like another life. Some good reflections. A good presentation. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a encounter with a witch. A sacrifice. A cut on the arm from the witch. A neat autumn night. Some good reflections. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. What ever the purpose, the person came out unharmed. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A little boy looking for Santa by looking up the chimney. A commotion. Some drama. Looks like the little boy wants t see Santa. Drawing a reader in hoping for a good story. A opening teaser. Good call. Cheery. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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