Nicely written details and a good word flow. Longing for slumber and longing for peace. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Easy to follow. Moons brightness. Drenched by the ocean. Davy Jones locker. Some well chosen phrases. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Here. You can write a story a day or a poem or a Blog entry. You can post in the Newsfeed. Some days, you may not write anything. Nicely written details and some good views. Some good intentions and nice reflections. This holds the reader's interest. Do things at your own pace. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. There is pollution out there. Sad. The world and politics. A good style and easy to follow. Some well chosen words. Creative and colorful. I was in tune with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Polar extremes. Santa is always busy at the north pole. A busy poem but easy to keep up with. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful and this holds the reader's interest. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is hard when a best friend leaves you or no longer wants to be a friend. Creative and colorful and well defined. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and neat scenario. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and food for thought. I don't trust scientists when it comes to God and religion. I trust God not scientists My theory. Faith. I am a Christian but I struggle. I pray for strength and more faith. I appreciate your views and your reasons for your views. Creative and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be nice to wash away the problems of everyday. We go forward and pray as we hope for good days. Looks like you spent time with this. Constant. Life is a constant turmoil. I like how this was written with well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be awful to live the same day over and over like Groundhog Day. A spooky Halloween with creatures of every kind. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Creative and colorful. I was in tune with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Trial maker. The mountains would be nice. Some good reflections. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern here and it is hidden but a couple of words rhyme. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I would love if a Jane Austen book came to life and we could have tea and adventures. I do enjoy Medieval books. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We wonder about God's plan. We pray and try to live a good life. Thus is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. The Royals. Big Ben. Scenery. God is with us every where. Good call. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Life is about change. So true. Hair color. Boyfriends. Me. Changing schools when Dad was in the Air Force. Life changes all the time. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style with some good reflections. I like that attitudes were mentioned. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A day at the cemetery. Not the most fun place in the world. The little boy feeding ducks and a thunder storm and the uncle being a grouch. The boy falling in a pond. Good scenario. The mother was home. What a relief. A good presentation with interesting characters. Q good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. A man making a hole on the side of his house to spy on his wife. A man he didn't know came to his house and had built a special surprise for the main character. His wife's gift to him. An escapade. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Shopping for a wedding dress by the cashier who was just dumped is giving the bride second thoughts. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Attitudes of sales people didn't help. A good style and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the characters working in a book store. One finds a universal remote and points at the ceiling light and they are in a Scooby Doo cartoon. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Cool story line. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we need to be careful how we treat each others. We never know when we will see them again and how things will end. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful with a good story line. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Hope. We always have hope and prayers. A good style and easy to follow. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat flair and a good scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I hope we don't have an ice age.A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest and tells quite a tale. Some sad reflections and storms. They aren't always pleasant. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I am hoping to greet summer. It is trying to be warm in Indiana, USA. Nicely written details about autumn with good reflections. Some neat vibes. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up with a good flair. A good presentation and lovely reflections. Always: Megan
A dying sun. I hope you don't mean the sun died. I hope it is just the end of the day. The orange colors are pretty. Nicely written details and some good reflections. This is easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation and nice scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a person sneaking in, in a house and Molly the dog welcomed him. The man was Molly's former owner. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Heart touching. A dog doesn't forget their former owners. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I think our ancestors would be disappointed in us today. The way we handle things. Food for thought. Gun laws are insane like you said. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and nice presentation. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and easy to follow. Hold his love, keep him near. Moon retreating. Some good reflections and some sad ones but we have hope. Some food for thought and good words of wisdom. This is uplifting and inspiring. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
My father loved clocks and had ones that chimed every hour. I took one home but it doesn't chimed. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easy to follow and a good style. A neat scenario. Well defined and well chosen words. Clocks making noises aren't fun. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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