Nicely written details and false teeth are scary. I worked in a nursing home and I had to wash them up at night. The man loses his teeth and forgets where he put them. His granddaughter finds them and screams. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this sounds like a scary thrift store. A breathing baby doll. Being chased with knives. A little boy doll holding a fish that stinks. Blood coming out of the vents. Other dolls winked. Hrumpy fur ball cats. Scary. Good descriptions and dramatic. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like Granddad lived through a lot. Too bad you didn't get to meet him. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Jimmy and Sally babysitting. Someone on the phone gossiping already. Typical. A good style and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I wonder how bad the little boy being babysitted was. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word. Easy to follow and who writes poetry? Those who love it and have the gift to do so. A good style and well chosen words. Looks like you put some thought into this. A good style and a neat rhyme pattern sums this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a boy dreaming he is sledding and is froze to death. He falls in a trash bin and he is pulled out and wakes up to find his parents and sister are with him. This holds the reader's interest and is easy to follow. A winter nightmare in a dream. I enjoyed reading this. Always: megan
Nicely written details and quite a journey for you to find your way here. You like The Hardy Boys. I love Nancy Drew and you like Raggedy Ann and Andy. So do I. This holds the reader's interest and I appreciate you mentioning me and my Merit Badge. Well defined and a good presentation. Thanks for sharing your story. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and selling lemonade and a duck wants grapes. The girl told him she didn't sell grapes. They went and bought grapes and had a nice talk. She didn't see him anymore. Her parents didn't believe her but she liked the memory of her and her duck friend. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Minnesota, here you come. A folded up map. Land of a thousand lakes. Sunday morning suns. St. Paul. Pencil lines. I was in tune with this. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. Cheery and happy. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I have been trying to find my marbles for years. I guess I always will. I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this poem took us places. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word. People mind their own business and still have issues and problems seem to find them. A good style and easy to follow with well chosen words. Seeking forgiveness. Some food for thought. This is uplifting and well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Remembering having a paper girl instead of a paper boy and things never went well. Like leaving the paper in the mail box. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It's raining men. I liked that song. A good style and a nice word flow. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I remember basketball from high school when I watched the games. A good style and some good action words. Anxiety. March Madness. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and sums this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and s blind woman meeting a soldier in France and they change their lives briefly. A good style and well rounded characters. An interesting story line. The light in our life. We always hope it will be good. Interesting characters and a nice storyline. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. The man is a healer. Good men are hard to come by. This holds the reader's interest. Good characteristics. I was in tune with this. Sometimes, we need to discover our true self. Food for thought. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some heartfelt words. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. It is always good to give thanks. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details. A little boy asking questions. Cute. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Kids ask a lot of questions and do a lot of talking. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A nice presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Inflation blues. They happen. You don't know what bills to pay or what is always important. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Trying to be a good person and a good citizen. A good presentation. Hopefully, things will get better in life. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, a person is an outcast and is misjudged. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words. This is creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a ghost in a hotel room. This holds the reader's interest. Traveling around the countryside. Good call. Visiting old forlorn places. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Interesting. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it seems like we solve a problem and then get another one. Always something. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Getting dirty from puddles. Sitting by a warm fire and getting a kink in your back. I appreciate the humor in this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a baker had an order for 50 loaves of bread from a high society person. The electricity goes out and he worries the lady won't get her bread and it will hurt his business. She calls and doesn't need it for two days. A relief. Well rounded characters and anxiety for a minute. A good presentation and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details and the weeping willow. Makes you wonder if a weeping willow is real and is real. A good style and good descriptions with a neat scenario. This holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words. Kingdoms. Sparrows. A neat scenario and I like the imagery mentioned. Always: Megan
Some good details and sounds like a romance went bad. Loss of color. Some different descriptive words to describe a ill fated romance. Well chosen words. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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