Nicely written details and a woman running from someone following her who might kill her. You can feel the fear. Some good drama and suspense. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and the ending, the person behind her was running, too. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like this is about physical scenery mountains as well as emotional mountains. Sounds like the scenery is nice and peaceful. A good style and easy to follow. You can make it. We have to believe that. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Welcome to Writing.Com Nicely written details and sad when you try to make friends and sometimes people aren't interested. Sounds like the rest of your life was good. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Enjoy writing. Always: Megan
People tell us things and get us all misconstrued. I hate when things get weird. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. We can never have too many pockets. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Martians wanting to upgrade us. That would be nice. Hopefully, it would be for the best. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Some food for thought. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good song lyrics. We do struggle in life. Love versus hate equals war. Life is a precious gift. Sometimes we do get fed up with things in life. A hint of a rhyme pattern. Creative and colorful with a good style and nice flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We live life one day at a time, one step at a time as we make plans in life . A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Cherished moments ate nice to behold. The future is uncertain. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate when pets get old. Good descriptions and some sad reflections and happy memories. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. I wish our pets didn't have to get old. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I feel we shouldn't eat wild turkeys. They are to be admired. I hear they are tough. Domiscated turkeys are good for eating. Nicely written details and creative. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
A short passage but this tells about a romance and a good marriage. Sounds like the wife was feisty but it all worked out. Easy to follow and a good word flow. Nice style. Being in the navy. I didn't figure out what was removed but it all worked out. Thanks for sharing. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. You like writing about love with your special someone. Nice romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Some lovely reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seeing a pretty white bird darting out of the bushes that looks like a silver arrow. Heat waves are bad. The bird talking cute. A dream. You need a bird bath. This is enlightening and entertaining. A good presentation and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and love is hard at times. It is easier with the right person but life isn't perfect. Food for thought. Easy to follow and a good style. I was thinking this might be song lyrics . The rhyme pattern plays out well and this has a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, it is hard at night when things are on your mind. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in play and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and two siblings planning a Birthday party for their baby sister. Metallic confetti exploding out of a blender. Happy baby sister. Unhappy mother. Easy to follow. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining and colorful. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is always amazing what we can do in the summer. Easy to follow and this is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Lovely reflections and this poem is cheery. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I think we were all happier before Covid. I know I was. Nicely written details and a good word flow with sad reflections. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. You did a good job of expressing your point of view on things. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out nicely. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we want to be remembered for the good person we were in life. A good style and easy to follow. The cat who loved you and loves his human. Some good reflections and some sad ones. We do cherish good memories. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I enjoy trains and I love military planes. I love Top Gun for the military planes action and not the romance. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easy to follow and a good style with nice descriptions. Creative and colorful. I like your enthusiasm about trains. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I used to watch Miami Vice but I am a bigger fan of CSI:Miami . A video game like Miami Vice. This sounds interesting and I like the song list included. Looks like you spent time with this. Nicely done with a good style. Thanks for including the video song. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details with good romantic sentiments and overtures. A nice tone and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we do need God's bright light in our life. A good style and this is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good style with words of wisdom. May our light always shine bright. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It would be nice to talk to baby animals. A baby elephant. Tiger cubs. Snowflakes. Nature. A good style and nice scenario. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together, puts them in focus and sums this up. Cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is interesting. Sun and moon briefly touching. The moon still bathes in the sunlight. Good concept. I think that happened last week . Easy to follow and this is uplifting and inspiring. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I wasn't sure who or what eas in the water. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest . Some good descriptions and neat imagery. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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