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Review of Home Sweet Home  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy, you got A WAY WITH WORDS, my man.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
These words warmed my heart.

geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for your kind words about my stories. I see your'e hip enpugh to dig me. Your word here make me feel proud. I think you would like "The Most Beautiful Little Boy" in my port. I am looking forward to reading ALL of your work.

Thanks again

Geoff
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Review of 54 EXCUSES  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
#55 I didn't let him run a jump. Next week we drop him in for $10,000 claiming around two turns. He will win wire to wire. At 10 to 1 its called a home run my man...

Geoff
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Review of SUN SAILS  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
As a sailor yiur words feel like a warm breeze.

Check out "TALL TALE" in my port. I think you will like it.

Geoff
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Review of Bounty Hunting  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like your style, and I will read more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of The Blind Date  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You did this very well. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
As the years slip by you become more wise
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Review of Author  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked it...

Geoff
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Review of A Soldier  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
The words ring true.

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Anger  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A 100 words that hit with impact. Rage comes from when a soul catches fire.

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
You gotta take that leap to faith, my man.
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your style. Very visual, look forward to reading more.

Geoff
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Review of The Darkness  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, I like this my man. As the words creeped by, you had me looking over my shoulder.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great start. You have given me a peek into a mind. Let me know when you open it all the way up.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great job, she had no choice. All that she could dream of could only be realized in escape.

look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Hello Sun  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks, for making my day a little brighter.

Geoff
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Review of My Hero  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW,WOW,WOW, you are a talent. I WILL READ MORE OF YOUR WORK...

Geoff
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Review of Angel of Light  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job, not everything is a dream come true.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
American Mother. Sweet and beautiful words.

Geoff
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Review of Stairway To Hell  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Billy, Billy, Billy, WOW, WOW, WOW. There are so many great lines, this is one of your best stories, and that's coming from a true fan. What is going on inside the dark corners of your mind, makes me tremble.

" Hatch knew he had not gone home with death, but they had definitely been at the dance together."

Geoff


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Review of Ol' Fat Charlie  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy, I am sitting at work and the system went down. I went to writing.com and did a little editing and started looking to see what you been up to. Sure glad I did.

This is vintage Billy. I love the line "The old man spit, and then smiled showing teeth the color of bark and honey".

I have been so busy, two kids going to good schools, but I have made up my mind to get back to the thing I like most, read & write.

Great job my man...
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Review of The Well  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Billy, another great job. I like when you write about care free boyhood days. When what seems like fun truns into an adventure. I felt the dampness as my mind was lowered into the unknown.

I have been so busy I haven't had alot of time to read or write and I do miss it. I have decided that life is way to short and I am going to make the time.

Thanks for featuring JAKE in your next Action/Adventure Newsletter. Another part of his life "The Fight" will be posted this week.

Go your style to the max, my man.

Geodd



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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Twisty, its been a long time. Your way with words make me hope that my style is similar. I love the way the words to this story become so visual. Can’t wait to read more.

Check out “JAKE” in my port. It is the start of pretty good story. Let me know what you think.

Geoff
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Review of Death Chamber  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy, great job. I've got to know you too well my man. "Mr Frank you are on the sixth floor of a police station". I knew the deal, but I enjoyed the tirp to the end...

You are cool with the words, my man.

Been busy with one girl at NYU and my baby girl started her 1st year at Boston U. All work and no play makes Geoff a good dad.
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