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Review of A Dreamer's Web  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina and I found your beautiful poetry here at Writing.Com and by our weekly News Letter. I would like to say, Thank You for letting me review your item and also congratulation in being featured into the newsletter.

Looking at almost any kind of style of poetry I'm searching for ryhems, poetry patterns, flow, rythem, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Repetition is in the sounds from the letter S. The fourth paragraph is very strong and visual. You can tell the style of poetry that writer is capable of writing creative works art. This poem was truely a work of art and can tell how any reader would enjoy reading such a visual piece of art.

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Review of Silent Rain  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, My name is Tina and I found your beautiful poetry here at Writing.Com and by using random read. I'm part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  I would like to mention I'm glad I came across your poetry and the mood was pleasent for me.

Looking at almost any kind of style of poetry I'm searching for ryhems, poetry patterns, flow, rythem, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Interpt the poem to be about the rain and when one person is alone while it is raining. I particularly liked that you mention stomach being hungry in comparison of the rain. I personaly can relate to the poem feeling alone, single and broken hearted. I did liked the comparison you used with rain in your own emotions.

There was no ryhems but a whole lot of patterns wich makes the peom looks good. Overall, I liked how the poem made me feel and enjoyed reading a piece that was emotional.
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Review of Love  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Bob, I'm Tina part of the WDC Power Reviewer Group and came across your item by random read. Overall, I found the item very interesting. The choice to interpt of what we feel on this passage is what I liked that you shared with the readers here. Second paragraph you used some unique phrases such as living cell loves life and seeks immortality. This is the first review I have review a Thesis and I liked how you use interesting phrases through out the thesis. The complexity of sentence structure and intelectual word choicing was great for your piece. In conclusion, I enjoyed reading your piece.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
You go girl! I needed something to read and glad I got to read about Jesus. Thank you for sharing cause I need to feel close to Jesus too. Have a warm and beautiful day. May God bless you. Lots of Love Tina.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like how you create a scene to let me take in a mental note and give my thoughts a run of being self aware. You get that interptation in the second paragraph and it really emphasis between 11th and 12th sentence. Anytime a poem gets me to think instantly I'm a fan. This is one of those poem that does.
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Review of Master  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Looking at a poetry I'm searching for ryhems, poetry patterns, flow, rythem and style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry. Definatly there is flow, meaning, and style. I like that the poem point was true abrupt. The writer got strieght to the point and that is another method of poetry. My overall impression the style is flawless and the meaning was well understood.

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Review of Of Dogs and Days  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Laugh* This is to unique and so classy. Like that sentence when the dog has finnished it's fight and that you used center alignment for the poem. Not all poems have to be hard to understand. You made it really easy to interpt. The message was clear and was consider to be inspiring message. An idea is make the text yellow. That is just a suggestion of taste and you the writer may feel different you may so go grey with it. Either way hard to compete with something so perfect. Love it got it stuck in my head *Coffee*
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Review of The Monk  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's funny *Pen*when you read at the top. In the top when you start off to read, it stops with the words being short and the flow shuts off, but it does have poetic flow. In poetry I try to pay attention to the objective the writer is feeding to the readers, poetry flow, rythem, ryhems, grammer, and the writer visual concept. My overall impression is that this was a really cute story and liked how you listed it poetry biobgraphical. There were not many errors but in this sentence here the word eat may should be replaceed with the word ate ...had met to chat and eat. Looking for the best describtion to describe "The Monk" that it's strong with narrator story telling with poetry.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good job on the choice to capitalise Hand. The style and grammer are two things I would like to bring up in your review. One is the grammer and sentence stucture. The second paragraph really does point how writers, students, or anyone who is learning to write, to form poetry with a method using the nouns to tell the poetry. In the second paragraph you notice that the words ryhem and that it has does have flow. Good job on that and felt like it also had words that ryhemed and gave it style there. Good poetry and enjoyed it *Smile*
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Review of Arendelle  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wanting to do a second review after eating chocalate candy and after reviewing one your's before, felt like I wanted to read more of your stuff.

One thing about a poem that is you get to see the different style that poets will write in. I like that you used moonlit and "Oh Arendale." Using the wooden Oak Door difinately drawl out imagenary for the poem. That is so clever and creative for the writer to write it in this poem-Good Job-Again, vales and glens sounds again. You difinately gave imagenary prospective how a poem should be wrote. Good Job!
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just wanted to take a glance at your port. Figure out why come you have a yellow a brief case. Boy when you write you can write "Don't Ya" Took a look to find an item to read and in your port you had a bunch of items created. So, I figured since I knew your name real well upon WDC that I come across and take a minute to read your stuff. I knew I always liked yah. You got always some burning when it comes up with creativity. (so ya know in case no one has ever told ya *Wink* KC) First when you read into the first section you have intrigued the readers to wanting to read more of your story. This is the perfect story I was needing something sweet so I could muster up tender spirit the soul. Eigth and nineth part is strong sentence sturcture and show that you have narrative skills for story telling. Overall I loved this story *Smile* It unique cute and deserves award for it.
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Review of My Fairytale  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
The word stuper in your poem makes the poem stand as a poet who know how to write poetry. This is about how you mind jumps into reality exspecialy when we reather be in the fancy world or the dream part of our mind. Do like that you mention stallions and brining the towers and fairies into the story. It really does sound like you are a princess in this story. Coming across the fifth and sixth sentence it seems as if something is missing. However your peom is unique and very creative.

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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Taking at look at your port and reading your bio block it is well presented. *Smile* On the subtitle you wrote no repeats? Does it mean not a word can be repeated in your entry? Reading further noticed that you did do a good job not using any of the words twice. The lines or marks such as these {color:r}---- questioned me is to wondering why you have it to be choiced to be part of the item in your writing? However the exhange using to tell the story is very creative *Smile*. Very cool about the character and husband exchange conservation in story telling. Classy, Cute and Sassy. *Smile*

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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I was looking for something to read that would give me an outlook and for some inspiration in what direction to look towards to. So opening up to your poem here I wanted to read something sentimental and that might could spread some joy within. That is what I like about reading here and being able to have an oppurtunity to read in your port. First thing I noticed when I opened up your port is that it was very interesting as well as presentable. Jumping to a poem that is relating to your family was something I was eagered to explore. I dont know why I could not see the image displayed that goes to your poem? I know I can see other images from other members even if my membership free basic membership newbie. (Been a member of WDC before and came back so I'm a newbie again..... Anyways back to the peom here. Ten little fingers and Ten little toes sounds like something you would here off of the Today Show on NBC television. Kind of creative as a start-off.
The first thought is everything ryhems and it is sentiment. Second thought is that I like the type being in blue and the title is underlined. The impression is the ending of the poem was emotional an overempowering. Final take is I really like the poem and that it is really special. The last part of the poem is really powerful and it emphasise the point of the poem. Your poem looks really neat.
Also liked that you wrote S.R Hawkins year and how many lines at the bottom. All of it looks neat. Good job and keep writing.
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Review of Standalone  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
You know honestly I wanted to read something that pertain something about the homeless. Anything of that nature that pertains to a person loneliness. Here in this sentences does explain a person action easing the weight they bear. while explaining the nature of person well being in an emotion state. Resolute and rushing are very good r's in this poem to add to a poem form. Ignorant of causing hurt and being unjust, isn't that not the truth. That is how must humans who have compassion about themselves not wanting to hurt others in the future. What makes us humans but also can be a regreated mistakes if we choose to make a pattern out the behaviour. Not one to be talking but I can say that the words chose to make this poem is good and expresses state of feeling very well. Pretty good.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.5)
cornering it they would club it to death with stones That is a very strong sentence. Can tell that you are not a dumb person and that you can write literature with proper grammer sentence structure. Here is where there is an added space between the words. and sometimes they suffered . they ofter grew to a, Often is mis-spelled in the sentence. Noticed here that you used good describtion to use in your story. be over fifteen seasons old. This line right here Also, with a large body he was nice to sleep with being so warm. really does mention to the reader how the cavemen survive during the winter. That is a very important line in the story because it goes with you discussing the caveman in your story. You did a good job explaining who "Thug" the main character in your story. Telling about Thug in the story I felt you did a good job. His wife you did great explaining who she was and what was her role to be with her being his wife. That you can read and tell in your story. With that also you did an awesome job. My overall impression of the story is that you did a wonderful job telling a story. What I would have liked maybe is a little more of extended vocab words used in the story to make it sound more of a story but again the story grammer and sentence structure is very strong here. Enjoyed reading your story about Caveman and thank you for sharing it.

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Review of Book of Poetry  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like your first sentence where starts off as God where do I began? I've said that a couple times myself *Laugh* and thought of it many times before. Do like that you mention proverty of ones' person low - income, the passion deep felt with the Lord, and of course that you choose to express your love strongly with the Lord at the end of your poem. When many people do jump to our precious thought we forget that it is precious. The poem is very beautiful and I would like if in italic writing. The parts in the poem that I do like is the first line and should be pointed out by being in bold that mention the rest perhaps rest of it in italics. Again, that first statement is a statement and is a first thought should be in bold.

Beautiful peaceful peom.

Great Job. Keep Writing.

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Review of The Shining Blade  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The clear water sparkled in the dark of the silent night... You usualy think as of finding the sparkles of love shimmering to the surface with speaks of glimmer. Right on the tenth or eleventh paragraph was intense. Matter of fact the whole poem was intense. I liked that there parts that ryhem and more like it because it dicusses intense feelings. The text in italics and blue makes it beautiful. What a great poem.
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Review of Your Today  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In the same dreary appoach, finding an awakenig point and now being cheerful as I began to read this. Although you can feel pestimistic one person words written can come back with positives feedback. Short poem but had a positive feel. With that being said, in my opinion was a classic with a bit of poetic touch. Would have liked it more if it was longer but if it was it might have ruined the conclusion. A very good and orginal poem. The peom interpretation displays well as what a person should and not pass to what we have in the present.

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