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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
awww! I loved it! It was so sweet!
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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Aw. I really love your poem. I love the way it's a worded and just completely love it!
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Review of Child Fears  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved your....song I think is what you said it was. It was well worded except for a few typos here and there and was good overall.
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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love the wording in this and the ending made me tear up a bit because it was so sweet :') I love going to my grandma's house because she's always making something delicious and I know what you mean about how the house has a certain smell. I'm lucky enough to still have my grandma and her home-baked goods. You make me cherish this fact more than I ever have.
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Review of The Breeze  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awww. That was so sweet. I truthfully LOVE love poems even though I hide it from people but sometimes love poems can be a bit overbearing and mushy and just make me feel sick with its sweetness. This was not one of those times. It didn't have any of those super overused things like hearts and sweaty palms and that kind of junk. Your poem was beautiful and I really enjoyed.
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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now that was a twist that I didn't expect. Bravo :)
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Review of Selfless Bastard  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I understand what you mean. It seems like just yesterday that I was a little kid and now....I'll be 18 in 10 months. Time really does fly. And it sucks. Great job.
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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Write some more!
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Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OMG! This story is awesome. It gave me chills. How did she make everyone forget the kids? It was awesome because that part kind of creeped me out.
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Review of Over the Edge  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
awesome story. good job!
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Review of Blue M&M  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
that was awesome
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Review of The Long Journey  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved the wording and the twist. Haha!
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Review of A Ghost Story  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was awesome. It made a chill go down my spine. Keep writing Kerry! *Heart*
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Review of Fire in Podunk  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fantastic job. I feel so bad for Lucy and for Michael because now he has to live with the guilt that it was his fault that Lucy died. I can find nothing wrong with your story and I think you'd make a successful writer. Write on!
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Review of The Crime  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Aww. That was sad. But way to go Alli!
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Review of Prisoner  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved your story. It was really cool. Write on! :)
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Review of Bound By Love  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Love it! *Heart* Great job!
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Review of Nine  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I kind of liked the poem. I don't know anything about baseball and I don't really like rhyming. Other than that, thought you did a very good job with the poem.
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by mama umbridge Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was very well written. The author of this poem did a very good job. I only have one question about line 4 stanza 1. Is that word supposed to be grovel? If it is that would make a lot more sense.
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