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Review of Wanda  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This was a well written story. The only thing that would make it perfect for me is putting a line between paragraphs and choosing a larger font.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of MY OLD JEEP  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderfully written poem about the jeep. I really found a smile growing across my face as I read your words.

The only possible mistake is "Neighbors want me junk her"

Should it be " Neighbors want to me junk her "

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Noticing Newbies Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This story was moved along with good dialog and nice flow. I read through your well developed paragraphs that kept my attention.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Mystery Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of Diamond Slip  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good story written in poem form. I find it easy to read, and the flow kept my attention.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Mystery Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a unusual story. I felt that the descriptive wording left chills on my arms. The dangling eye was the best. The story was one that could be watched on the Tales From the Dark Side.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Puting my reviews on a static item to be able to see my reviews grow. I think that this is a neat way to watch the reviews both for re-reviews and unfinished reviews.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of The Calling  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that thisis a well written. You have written the story that we were able to see the story unfold. The dialog kept the story flowing well and created a smooth rhymthem.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
When looking at the updates on my page, I saw that my name was tagged in your item. I was all most in tears as I read your kind words. I know that most people do throw away the newsletters, but I like reviewing and telling others that they have been featured in the letters.

This time this one is on me. I am so happy to see my name here.

Thank you so much.
Ida


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Review of Gifts #3  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have never seen a story told so well with this much dialog. I have problems with conversation, but you use nearly dialog alone to tell the story. This is a well done story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was interesting. The changing of font, the size, and the spacing helps me to be able to see the words better. The flow was great, but the story was better.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love this. IT is a well written drama in just a few words you were able to tell us a secret in the story while filling in all the gaps.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautiful story. I like writing with the alphabet. It had to be hard to do this in such a manner. I wonder how long it took to write this?

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of The Brooch  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. I find that writting a story that is not from my time is hard, and yet you made it appear effortless.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Ida


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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This reminds me of my son's imagination. I thought it was well written. I found it sweet and funny at the same time.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is well written. The flow was smooth. I love the way you leave us hanging. We all think that someone else needs us more than we need them. This is a story that most can relate to.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As a mother, I have to give this a five. I seem to never solve any of the things that go on in this house. This is missing, but no one did it. That broke, but no one touched it. THis is a relatable story for anyone who is raising children.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow. I just learned something about WDC. I did not know that a person could add video. THis is an entertaining page. It has a little bit of everything. It was as if I was attending a party in your lobby.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I can always use a laugh. The title of this blog got my attention, and the relatable events kept me reading. I have to love this ongoing slam on what life hands us. I am glad that it made the down things worth laughting at. I loved it.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of Corrupt-A-Wish  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so much fun. It is different than other in and out story. This one has a cool twist. Like the mean genni that allows you to wish for anything, and he gives it to you with strings attacted.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Ida
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Review of Vernal Equinox  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very written poem. I could feel the excitement of the spring. I love the newness of the season. YOu captured the emotions of Spring well.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Ida


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Review of Awakening  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story is told and moves well with the dialog. THe spacing made it hard on my eyes, but this is a problem for me. The events are described well.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a story that I am fimular with. I really think this is well told in this poem form. I this is a wonderfully written story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Spiritual Newsletter (March 6, 2013)

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Review of Jessica's Cloud  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I still love to gaze at the clouds. This was so beautiful that I teared up. I love the format, the flow, and the rythem, but I love the picture that you described about the mother and daughter looking up at the sky the most. I did not see any mistakes. All that I did see I loved.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 26, 2013)

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Review of A name's worth  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a well written story that is told in the form of a poem. I think that it is straight forward. The meanings of the words are simple.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 26, 2013)

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First I want to tell you how much I like the picture. I love that it shows death as a dark spirit. It looks almost inviting. The poem was great. I love the format, and the story was well told with the words chosen.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 26, 2013)

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