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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is so cute to have the twist of the spaceship. I like to think of the beings on the planet as humans. This story is very vivid. I could feel the observer's pitty to the natives of the Earth. YOu captured the emotions well. I find my self feeling for the people on the planet that are about to loose it all.

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"Fantasy Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" 

Fantasy

 This week: Going Under
  Edited by: Lost in February Waltz (225)
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527
Review of Fallen Angel  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The most beautiful picture of an angel. I like to draw angels. That being said, This is a good story told in poem form. The flow made the read easier (once I took my eyes off the picture.) I found myself lost in the story. I would like to see a fictional short story using the story behind this poem.

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"Drama Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" 

Drama

 This week: Animals in the Drama Genre
  Edited by: Kittiara - is an Auntie! (244)
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528
Review of Reflection  
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Rated: 18+
I think that this is a story told wonderfully. I loved the vivid decriptions that you chose to use. I love birds, and you captured them nicely while talking about a woman. I can see your character's confusion in the story. The length of the item makes me want to know the rest of the story.

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"Drama Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" 

Drama

 This week: Animals in the Drama Genre
  Edited by: Kittiara - is an Auntie! (244)
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529
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good story, but I don't understand where I found it. I must be missing something. I read it twice and missed an animal. Don't get me wrong this is a vivid and wonderful but this is where I found your item.

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"Drama Newsletter (February 12, 2013)" 

Drama

 This week: Animals in the Drama Genre
  Edited by: Kittiara - is an Auntie! (244)
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530
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is well written. The story runs smooth. The paragraphs are well formed. I did not find any mistakes, and I try to notice verb tense because I have been having problems with this skill. I see that you are able to capture it. Your description is a plus.

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531
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. I lived in an area like you described. Though your story was good, I think that I like your description best. I can see your dog protesting going out for his very early walk. I love the passion in the last paragraph. Though it is of warning, I find it nearly funny.

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532
Review of Book Bites  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this story. It should be one of this sitcoms. It would fit in well on a show like the Dark Sides. I found it to be descriptive. YOu chose a catchy title and introduction that would call in nearly every possible reader. This is well written. My only complaint is that I wish that the font was a little bigger.

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Horror/Scary

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  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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533
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We have something in colmon. I love to read the Poet Edgar Allen Poe. I can see his enfluence in your poem. I love the flow. The rhyme is second to none. I can feel a little of the Raven in your words. This is well written, and a great read for the Poe fans.

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Horror/Scary

 This week: Horror As The Alter-Ego of Love
  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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534
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think this is a well written story. The message is strong. I really found this to be a well descriptive. I find this has well formatted paragraphs. I found this to be a wonderful read.

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Horror/Scary

 This week: Horror As The Alter-Ego of Love
  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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535
Review of Conscience  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis was well written. The flow was one that created a smooth read. The story line was sad I can see someone being that crazy in love. I know that it isn't as much as in the old days. I know that I have loved that strong, and all that saved me from going that direction is the help of God. And the distance that he moved the ex husband.

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Horror/Scary

 This week: Horror As The Alter-Ego of Love
  Edited by: Kate~Rune Writes & Reads (207)
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536
Review of The Blind Date  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I think that you did a great job. This is a catchy story. I really think that it is both funny and fluent. I am happy to have found this. I have entered this contest once. However, I have problems allowing dialog to flow with the story.

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Comedy
 This week: Comedy As A Genre
  Edited by: SoCalScribe is almost 10! (509)
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537
Review of Trip To Pavandong  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First i want to welcome you to the writing.com family. As you continue here you will indeed see that this is a family of encouraging writers and poets. I enjoyed the flow, and the paragraphs were well formed. I noticed that you have a handle on the verb tense following through your work. This is a skill that I am having problems with.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Secret Doors & Passageways

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538
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the color coding of the stanz. The flow was smooth, and the message is one that can be related by the reader. I wonder if the form without capitalzation and punction is called. I really enjoyed this poem. I am glad that I found me.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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539
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the rhyme. I think that the flow is second to none. The story line was cute. I like the mention of West Virgina. I am from Kentucky. I love the description that you chose to use. I found this to be a good read with no errors. I was able to picture every statement in this poem.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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540
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
THis is a cute story in poem form. I found it well written. I liked the beat. The flow created a easy read. The message was one that made me smile. I like a good dig on the man in our lives for all the little ones that they give us. I am glad that I have found thi poem.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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541
Review of White Horses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. I love the rhyme. I loved the flow. I really enjoyed the story line.. I think that you were free of mistakes.

I found this in a news letter. I have tried to get a link to it, I hope that I found it.

I found this poem in a newsletter titled Poetry: Nicholas Vachel Lindsay

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542
Review of I Saw a Dragon  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story in a poem format. I love this my husband out of law loves dragons. He collects all kinds of dragon pictures and figurines. This was a smooth read, and the rhyme was good. I think this is one of my favorite that I have read about the dragon.

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543
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful. I think that memories of being together are what life and love are made of. My ideal valentine would be to snuggle and watch a movie., any movie. I love just being held.

That being said, you poem has as smooth flow. The message is well received.

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544
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the poem. The flow was smooth. THe rhyme was such that it created an easy read. This I find more than true. I like the introduction with advice. I think that this is well written, and I love the little self reflection on how the flowers makes the giver look at his wife's work.

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545
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful rhyme. I love the story. It made me smile. I live in the sunny Sarasota Florida. Here we don't really know when the groundhog sees his shadow. I love this because it gave the character that I have know since childhood a personality.

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546
Review of The Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good of a well written third point of view story. The paragraphs were well formed. I found no spelling errors or grammar. This is a good story that kept my attention. I like the comparison of living to existion. I think that the statemtn is one that needs to be though about.

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Short Stories: Finding Your Passion
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547
Review of Routine  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
First I want to welcome you to the Writing.com family. I see that you haven't been on here long. First thing that I can suggest for those of us that have a hard time reading is that you create a larger font and put a line between paragraphs.

Speaking of paragraphs you have created well formated sentences. The flow was smooth.

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548
Review of Too  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to rate this a five. I know that we have all been there. Not only other people judging us but we have a bad habbit of doing the same. I like how the poem ends even though it is a type of judging. I am glad that you covered a subject that a lot of us have experienced from childhood.

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549
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I found this in a newsletter:

Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

The emotion was strong. The characters were interesting. Paragraphs were well written. I loved reading about found treasures so to speek. I have found so many things at my mom's that could supply me with memories for years.

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550
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting story. The dialog worked well with the message in the story. The characters were introducted well to us. I like the conversation with Annie. She seemed to be the anchor in this story. She knew what to say, and she did so in a way that was just conversation.

I found you story in the newsletter Spiritual: February 12, 2013 Issue [#5507]

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