I love the story behind the poetry. This is a great flowing peice. The end takes me by surprise when the grandmother is said to have lied about loving grandfather.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
The story had a great flow. The paragraphs were well formated. Characters were well developed and introduced. The events rolled well with the pace of the stories. I like the use of dialog. I have problems placing min in just the right places.
Thank you for entering my contest. I thought this was funny even with a head ache. I like that it is written in poetry format, and about the problems fighting grammar rules. It tells the story well about the drama of trying to get published.
This was fun. I would like to come back and read it a couple times a month. I think that it would be fun to see how it changes the story all together. I entered my three words, and found this to be fun.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a wonderful. It was well written, and the emotions in it were easily felt. I have times that I must do things over and over by habbit due to a compulsion. The paragraphs are developed without mistakes and flow well.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
The story is great. The flow was perfect. I find that you had wonderful use of dialog that helped the story line make since and flow smooth. The descriptions were written well, and the characters were introduced in such a way that we feel that we got to know them.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a great story. The paragraphs are well formed. I was taken into the story by your imagery. I really found that your dialoghelps the flow move smooth well. I have a problem with dialog from time to time so I notice good dialog easily. I think that this is a well written story that made an enjoyable read.
If I am not mistaken, I feel anger in these words. The poem is well written with a smooth flow. I enjoyed the emotions in teh item. The only thing is that you give me a larger font. However, the line spacing made it so much easier to read the smaller font.
I think this is a very interesting. The flow was smooth. and the beat was easy to read. The stanz flow off the eyes. I did not find any mistakes. I just would suggest that you use a larger font to make it easier on the eyes. The message was on that a lot of us can relate to.
This is so cute. I was looking for contests and such for children or about children to review. I miss having my children being small. I hope that this is not a trick question. I will answer the question from Nick.
Very well written story in the form of poetry. The rhyme is good and the flow is excellent. I loved the imagery that you captured. I enjoyed this poem. I was brought into the read by an interesting title. I was kept reading with a beautiful poem.
I am sorry for bonbarding you with all these reviews, but they are listed one after the other. I can see real talent and poetry skills. I can vision this story. I know people in these situations since I moved to FLorida four years ago. I didn't see any in Kentucky. I find that they are some of the kindest people i could ask to know.
I have seen you everywhere here on Writing.com. I have one question, that is how did I miss this one. I have added it to my favorites. I am going to come back and work the lesson. I think that you are one of the most helpful persons on this site. I am happy to have found it.
This is well written. I love the way you have used letters to tell part of your story. It was a smooth read, and the message was one that I enjoyed. The paragraphs were well formatted. I think that this is a story that I would turn into a book. It was enjoyable.
I thik that the story should have a larger font, and the paragraphs maybe be easier for me to read with a space between each.
My eyes are not so good. This is a well written story. I love the way you used description. I enjoyed the read, and the flow was smooth.
First I wanted to tell you that the introduction paragraph is a little hard to read. I might suggest a different color and a larger font. That being said I really enjoyed the story. It has a smooth flow, and I could see that it is a great example of your lessons.
This is another wonderfully usefull page. I am glad that I am using the news letters to do reviews now because it is how I found this. Is there a way that you can send me alerts when you have a lesson entered. I would like to see one on verb tense. I am having such a problem following the same one through out one item.
I love your pictures. This story in a poem form was fluent and smooth. I find it hard to write a story in poetry form, but you made it look easy. The story line kept my interest, and the words rolled from my eyes without stumbling. I think that it is interesting where we get our inspirations.
This is well written. The story unfolded flawlessly. If there were any mistakes, I did no notice them for being caught up in the story. Your paragraphs were well formed, and the story could become a great mook, possibly a sitcom. I know that my sons would love it they are fans of the Fantacy story.
This is so cute to have the twist of the spaceship. I like to think of the beings on the planet as humans. This story is very vivid. I could feel the observer's pitty to the natives of the Earth. YOu captured the emotions well. I find my self feeling for the people on the planet that are about to loose it all.
The most beautiful picture of an angel. I like to draw angels. That being said, This is a good story told in poem form. The flow made the read easier (once I took my eyes off the picture.) I found myself lost in the story. I would like to see a fictional short story using the story behind this poem.
I think that this is a story told wonderfully. I loved the vivid decriptions that you chose to use. I love birds, and you captured them nicely while talking about a woman. I can see your character's confusion in the story. The length of the item makes me want to know the rest of the story.
This is a good story, but I don't understand where I found it. I must be missing something. I read it twice and missed an animal. Don't get me wrong this is a vivid and wonderful but this is where I found your item.
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