I found this piece and curiosity set in. I thought you did a wonderful job and I have to agree. It was excellently written and selfless wishes. It's a dream and a hope I think many of us share. I hope one day your wishes come true.
I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent writing.
Thanks to someone else's review, I chose to check this out. I thought you brought a wonderful question and one that I constantly remind my daughter of. I could go with a couple of answers combined.
You made me think and consider what would best suit me.
Keep up the great & Wonderful writing.
Kris
Absolutely a beautiful and heartfelt piece. I absolutely loved it. My heartbroke thinking of my own children. Perfectly written and well deserving of the trophy you've been given.
I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have absolutely no suggestions to make. Excellent and perfect work!
Another well written piece. Makes you think and wonder, makes you laugh and smile at the very least. I enjoyed reading this piece and I hope to read more of your work.
I did find in the third line and extra space after Two. Other than that, it was perfectly written. Great job!
Excellently written. I thought you did a great job describing those missing items. I always come across this happening and sometimes I have to wonder if I counted correctly or not. Nothing else ever comes up missing except those socks. You do have to wonder where they went.
I did find in your fourth line you had an extra space after though. Otherwise it's perfect! You did a wonderful job. Thank you again for the smile.
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Now for your review....I had to laugh when reading this piece. I honestly have to say, I started writing as well when I was 13 or there about. Something about English class grabbed my attention. WELCOME to WDC! You can ask anyone a question and if they don't know, they will be sure to point you in the right direction. Hope to see you around the site and find a moment to check out your work!
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece and I didn't find a thing to make note of. You did a great job encouraging a person to keep going on the road to quitting.
I came across this piece and thought you did a beautiful job. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have absolutely no suggestions. I honestly enjoyed reading this and thought you filled it with heart and memories. Excellent work & Keep up the wonderful writing.
I honestly don't know what to say to this. I understand where you're coming from and my heart goes out to you and to others like you. You again filled this with honesty and heart.
I feel this is good therapy for you and others like you. Writing down your feelings no matter what they are is great therapy and seems to help in some cases.
I know loosing weight is extremely difficult and I find myself in this perdicament now. However, I do it for myself and no one else. I am unhappy with me and I will fix it for me. Not for my fiancee or my children, but for me and me alone.
Again, I thank you for sharing and think you did an awesome job sharing those thoughts and feelings.
Good luck and I'm always near by if you should need someone to talk to or share with or to read for you.
Kris
I love reading your work and this was no disappointment. I thought it was well written and I enjoyed the prose included. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.s You did a wonderful job on this piece and I wouldn't change a thing. Excellent work!
I truly enjoyed reading this piece. I enjoyed the second to last line. I thought it was perfect. You did a wonderful job describing the seasons. I thought it had a nice flow and brought a smile to my face. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work!
Well, I must say this is short and to the point. I thought it was cute and perfect. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. I did like the second line the best. You did a great job describing a crystal vase.
I came across this and simply had to read it for the title alone. I couldn't believe this is happening. It's truly ridiculous and stupid. I commend you on sharing this with us and sharing your feelings. I for one agree completely with you and going to check out the site you listed.
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Now for your review....I honestly have to say this is great. Very inspirational. You did a wonderful job reminding one to remember their dreams and to never let them go. At least it was for me. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Great Work.
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Now for your review....Great Job! I enjoyed reading this and found myself making comments at the end of each line. Thinking of my children and them growing up. Learning to find that they don't have to be like others. They are their own person and they can and should find their own ways in life.
I found nothing wrong to make note of, but I would recommend deciding on whether you're going to capitalize each line or note. You don't and then you do. I think it would look better if you chose one way. But that's up to you.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this piece. It's packed full of information and reasons. I would recommend however that you break the reasons out into three paragraphs and make sure the first paragraph is spaced from the next one.
I found nothing else wrong to make note of and I have no other suggestions. Please remember this is only my opinion and you are under no obligation to make changes to your work unless you choose to.
Nicely done. I had to laugh at the end. Knowing how most of my days are, I wish something nice would come out of all the chaos other than another chaotic day. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work.
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Now for your review....I found this piece on the Read a Newbie page. Interesting and well written. The only suggestion I have is to put a space between the paragraphs. Makes it easier to read, right now the words run together. Please remember this is my opinion and you don't have to make changes to your work unless you want to.
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Now for your review....I thought this is short but sweet. Everyone should always know for sure and never question the other and if you have questions, you should ask them and the other should honestly answer them. Nice work, I truly enjoyed reading this piece.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I would recommend breaking this down into stanzas. Or per line. I think it would make it easier to read and neater. Please remember this is my suggestion and my opinion only. You are under absolutely no obligation to make changes to your work unless you agree. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I would recommend putting a space in between the paragraphs though. Makes it easier to read. But this is just my suggestions and you are by no means under any obligation to change your work. You did a great job sharing your thoughts on writing and yes sometimes it can be tedious writing about writing. I know I have thought about it since I've seen so many people give their opinions on it. But still haven't done so yet.
Another wonderful piece. People just don't realize the power of a word. It can make or break a person. It can destroy and it can heal. It's truly sad when people use words as weapons. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work!
A few different thoughts came to mind with this one. But all revolved around my fiance. Nice thoughts for so early this morning. I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece and I found nothing wrong to make note of. I also have no suggestions.
Raiding your port, I found this piece to remind me of the wall I've built around my heart and how my fiance is the only one who ever bothered to get in around it and even tear it down. I thought of his smile, his jokes, his laughter and you brought a smile to my face again, so early this morning. Thank you for a great piece.
Keep up the great writing!
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But all revolved around my fiance. Nice thoughts for so early this morning. I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece and I found nothing wrong to make note of. I also have no suggestions.