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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2037796

The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

This choice: go to clothes store  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

A married couple

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you spot a young couple browsing through a clothing store. They seem to be in their mid-twenties, clearly enjoying their time together. The man, Danny, is tall with short, neatly trimmed hair, wearing a casual button-up shirt and jeans. The woman, Jenny, is slightly shorter, with long, straight hair, dressed in a floral summer dress. They look like any ordinary couple, but something about them catches your eye. You decide they’ll be your next test subjects.

You focus on Danny first, imagining him with the personality and mannerisms of a clingy, bubbly, attention-seeking high school girl. Danny’s demeanor shifts almost instantly. His shoulders relax, his posture becomes more fluid, and he starts giggling softly as he twirls a strand of his imaginary long hair around his finger. His voice rises an octave as he turns to Jenny, his words dripping with excitement.

Jenny, meanwhile, has undergone her own transformation. You’ve given her the personality of a calm, steady, and boyish high school boy. Her shoulders square, her stance becomes more grounded, and her voice deepens slightly as she responds to Danny with a laid-back, confident tone.

The transformation is immediate and striking. Danny giggles, twirling a strand of his hair as he picks up a pastel blue dress from a nearby rack. “Oh my gosh, Jenny, look at this! It’s so cute! Don’t you think it would look amazing on me?” he squeals, his voice rising an octave higher than before.

Jenny, now the picture of calm confidence, raises an eyebrow and smirks. “Danny, you do realize that’s a women’s dress, right?” she says, her voice low and steady, almost teasing.

Danny pouts, clutching the dress to his chest. “So? It’s cute! And I think I could totally pull it off. Don’t you think?” He bats his eyelashes dramatically, his high-pitched voice dripping with playful insistence.

Jenny chuckles, shaking her head. “Alright, alright. If you want to try it on, go for it. But don’t blame me if the salesperson gives you a weird look.”

Suddenly Danny take another clothes. “Oh my gosh, Jenny, look at this dress too! It’s sooo cute too! Do you think it would look good on me?” Danny squeals, holding up a pastel pink sundress with frilly sleeves. His eyes sparkle with enthusiasm as he flounces over to a mirror, holding the dress up to his body.

“Yeah, sure, Danny. If you like it, try it on,” Jenny says. She watches him with a protective, almost paternal air, her expression calm but attentive.

Danny claps his hands together, his excitement bubbling over. “Yay! You’re the best, Jenny! I’m gonna go try it on right now!” He skips off toward the fitting rooms, the dresses draped over his arm, his giggles echoing through the store.

Jenny shakes her head with a small, amused smile, her demeanor steady and unflappable. She picks up a plain gray hoodie from a nearby rack, examining it with a practical eye. “This is more my style,” she mutters to herself, holding it up to her chest. “Comfortable, no frills. Perfect.”

As Danny disappears into the fitting room, Jenny continues browsing, her movements deliberate and unhurried. She picks out a pair of sturdy sneakers and a simple black t-shirt, her choices reflecting her new preference for practicality over fashion. Meanwhile, Danny emerges from the fitting room, twirling in the pink sundress, his face lit up with joy. The dress fits him surprisingly well, though it’s clearly designed for a woman

“Jenny, look! What do you think? Isn’t it adorable?” Danny asks, striking a pose. His voice is high-pitched and effervescent, his energy infectious.

Jenny looks up from the hoodie she’s holding and gives him an approving nod. “Yeah, Danny, it looks good on you. If you like it, get it.”

Danny squeals again, clapping his hands. “I’m totally getting it! And maybe this matching headband too!” He grabs a floral headband from a nearby display and places it on his head, tilting his head coquettishly. “How do I look now?”

Jenny chuckles, a deep, warm sound. “You look great, Danny. Really.” Her tone is steady, her confidence unwavering as she takes on the more assertive role in their dynamic.

The two continue shopping, their interactions now a playful reversal of traditional gender roles. Danny flits from rack to rack, drawn to the most colorful, feminine pieces, while Jenny sticks to the basics, her choices practical and understated. They look more like a teenage couple on a date than a married pair, their new personalities infusing their relationship with a fresh, youthful energy.
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