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Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem.

If only we cared less about what anyone else thinks, like the beautifully independent butterfly. But humans are not wired that way much.

This was my favorite part:

"like mystic rainbows of leaves
floating like majestic canopies
waving in peace from the trees"

What lovely imagery! You words are all eloquent and well chosen -

Bravo!

My reviews are typically reactions to what I have read and not meant to be detailed editing forays. I leave that to the "experts".

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Review of Sleep  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your poem.

This is a soothing song-like poem for baby. This is a 21st century baby, who might be dreaming of Trump Tower. I liked how you inject current events in here without taking a stand. It is refreshing not to read something political, but mentioning current events in a way.

What baby wouldn't be refreshed after such a nice poetic interlude.

I enjoyed reading it.

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Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option and it took me to your very short story.

Told from the first person, this is about a detective who wants to get away from the horror he has seen at a crime scene. There is no better way to do this than going home.

This seems like a good start for what will no doubt be a longer story solving the mystery in the title. I think you hook the reader in very well. You might want to eliminate the big bit of spacing at the bottom, but you have laid out the main character very effectively.

Nice work and welcome to the site!

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Review of Frustration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice Signature Made For Me by b.meridith!

What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* You sent me a very nice review so here I am to read and review.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* It is a very frustrating thing to want to help someone, especially when you are convinced you know what needs to be done.

The problem is that people like to handle their own things and resentment can come if you try to take care of someone for their own good.

I am totally on board with leaving it up to God.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Finally, there’s only one thing left,
And it stands alone as a solution.
One must resort to prayer,
And ask the Lord for a resolution."

My Aunt Virginia used to say that she would turn her troubles over to God and that helped her to not worry. It is an art to be able to do that - to let go, but you have to let people live and make their own mistakes. It is how we all learn and grown, especially kids.

Fine poem!
*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

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Review of A Matter of Faith  Open in new Window.
Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your item as a judge for "Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Your protagonist, Ted, is a mathematician, who also has a deep faith in Christianity. He has reached a crisis point where he thinks his faith is deserting him, so he engages in time travel back to the time of Jesus, to somehow bolster his faith.

The song, to me, comes in where he is begging his faith not to leave him and saying "Don't Go", whether it be Mexico or any other destination. It's as if faith is making the decision to pack its bags for imminent departure.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I thought the ending was poignant and so sad. What had to be was preordained and Jesus, himself, knew what was coming next. It was a matter of faith for him, more than anyone I reckon.

And, in the end, Ted must return, but maybe now faith is his lifelong companion. That's where I ended up, anyway.

Nice work!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews, especially judging for this month's official site contest. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your item as a judge for "Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Your protagonist, Daphne Snot is on the prowl for a new husband, after being widowed. She is participating in an on screen interview, which is something that has got her into a lot of trouble in the past. The interviewer has designs on her current target, so they spar with a battle of wits. Daphne is not armed well to proceed.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the details in this - of what she is thinking and of the surroundings. The asides about the late husband are pretty hilarious - lots of humor laced throughout. I like the way you incorporated the places from the song, also.

The title gives a hint of the hilarity to follow. Nice work!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews, especially judging for this month's official site contest. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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Review of Mexico Bound  Open in new Window.
Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your item as a judge for "Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Your protagonist, a female private investigator is determined to find a couple for her own reasons. She pursues them on a journey to many places that she knows that they frequent, being jazz lovers all. She finally catches up to them, but just locating the couple is not all she has in mind.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is a tale of relentless pursuit and revenge that ties in well to the song.

In the end, Victoria gets her way and a great deal of revenge also. Very intriguing tale with action and character revelations. Victoria remains a mystery to me as to why she did not know her quarry on sight, since in the end she obviously knew them so well.

Very interesting mystery to unravel. Nice work.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews, especially judging for this month's official site contest. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
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Review of Sands of Eternity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your item as a judge for "Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought of the Odyssey and of taking a journey with no guarantees at the end. Two people can love each other throughout time, but if they cannot be together than what is the point of living. This was a fantasy with battles that were nobly fought for sides that, at the end, have no real meaning. I took that as a metaphor for war and maybe the end of the world as we know it.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part that Kaye says ties in so well with the song:


"If you leave me, then please leave the World, for I cannot bear to be alone with you still in it."

The idea of her going far enough away to ease the pain is similar to what I hear in the song. Go far enough so that it doesn't hurt. That place really, in the end, does not exist, but the courageous friends carry on the best they can.

You have crafted a very moving and well written tale. Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews, especially judging for this month's official site contest. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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Review of All The Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your item as a judge for "Rhythms & Writing: Official WDC Contest" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think your poem is about a relationship where one was devoted, but now wants to find her own path away and in the country of her own choosing. She leaves and goes her way, only to be followed.

This poem goes well with the song, which is a big part of what I thought was indicated so fine work there also.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"Then I didn’t know
It was time for me to go
I wanted to break free
But this you didn’t see"

Sometimes, it takes a while for someone to even realize this within themselves.

To be free of control and manipulation is the ultimate and clearest freedom.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much!


*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews, especially judging for this month's official site contest. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
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Review of Cascade  Open in new Window.
Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice Signature Made For Me by b.meridith!

What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* I am doing the I Write in 2018 activity and you posted right before I did in the forum.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that the title fits perfectly.

I had not thought about the power of water and how it moves, but it can devastate the landscape. My niece lives in Houston and they had water come up through the floor in the last hurricane. I never knew it could do that. It shouldn't be allowed to to that because it takes away a certain false sense of security that I dearly want to hold on to.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

The words you use convey the power, along with the majesty of flowing water. I hope it never sets its sites on yours truly.

Great word choices to convey the imagery that is so powerful.

Well done!


*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

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Review of Veterans Day  Open in new Window.
Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your very moving story about two people who connected in WW II and never lost touch.

I was particularly moved by the reverence with which Pieter treated the tulips and how in wanting to be with the Americans, he found a way to be close to his friend again.

Very inspirational and well written story! It is amazing what has been written for Writer's Cramp prompts over the years. Well done!

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Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Nice Signature Made For Me by b.meridith!



What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* You have made a wonderful new campfire for us and I decided to send a review!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I am very much looking forward to this. I will be thinking about it today and writing tomorrow when I am fresh. For some reason today my thoughts aren't organized as I would want them to be. I am tired for some reason, but I hope to be fresher tomorrow.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

You always set it up so nicely. I love the quote you have selected and the fact that we can use each other's quotes or go for a different one. Now, I will be putting my thinking glove on. I use quotes a lot as a Writer's Cramp judge (for prompts) so this will, no doubt, help me with doing that.

Great idea for a new campfire, Megan! Well done! *Heartp*


*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

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Review of you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem.

The line in this poem that gives me pause is the second one:

"not like hers"

That says so much without spelling it out. The writer is getting over something and cannot help making a comparison. Even though "you" is the title and at first glance refers to the new love, that one line makes me believe that in the end, "you" is about getting over a difficult breakup.

Very powerful poem that is eloquent and moving. You don't have to use a lot of words in a poem or in its title to say a lot.

Well done!

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Review of It's No Secret  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem.

I read this as two people who are drawn to each other, but shouldn't be. The reason for the hesitation isn't spelled out, but it doesn't have to be. There is an attraction that cannot be hidden or denied.

This last section, though, is so powerful:

"We could never disguise this depth,
As anything more shallow."

Something so strong is dismissed here as shallow. It seems at first to be a contradiction, but then I read it as more resignation at what must be, but shouldn't be.

My reviews are reactions to what I read and are not meant to be detailed editing suggestions.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much and reflecting about it.

Well done!

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Review of Good Morning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Rate and Review option on the left side of the screen and it brought me to your fine poem.

Everything should happen with the ease and grace of the night turning into day. I especially like how you begin and end your poem with the same line - book ending it in fine fashion!

This was my favorite line because of the way it rolls off the tongue when you read it aloud:

"With much grace and perfect ease
The day rolls in on a gentle breeze."

Sounds like the perfect day in Spring or Fall. I'm ready for it!

Fine poem!

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Review of Overwhelmed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem.

And I would like to wave a warm welcome to the site to you! *Hand2*

I think a lot of readers will readily identify with this expressed sense of loss and the resolve to move forward and carry on. That is what is brave - trying again and picking up the pieces. No one has a perfect relationship, anyway.

This is my favorite part:

"Live day by day
Survive the storm
Fears to slay
Begin a new norm"

It is not an easy thing to do, but it's the only thing that makes sense and takes courage.

Fine poem!

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Review of The Fling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your aptly titled poem.

The relationships that burn the brightest at the beginning, have a long way to fall back to earth.

This passage sticks with me:

'A desire like dew -
Hanging onto the edge,
Waiting to sadly but inevitably drop.'

It is as if it is all preordained or something. The ending 2 lines is perfection, also. I bet that will have a great deal of meaning and bring pause to a lot of readers.

Splendid poetry - well done!

A Hand For a Ham
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Review by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review Option and it took me to your poem about not writing a poem. I guess this is what is called plausible deniability.

If they (assuming they are real) like it, you own it, if not, then no problem.

Love can make any of us crazy, but the desire to love and be loved is very normal. Still, it is good to put a sort of wacky spin on it at times.

This was my favorite part:

"You make me lose control
recalling darkness in my soul.
I see your face and call to you
but I don’t know your name."

It is all about control - getting it and keeping it ...well...controlled.

Very thoughtful poem. I am a hand now and not that bull.

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Review of Evening Work  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine story!

A jealous girlfriend (Gina) makes a couple of errors in judgment and ends up breaking in to spy on her boyfriend. She thinks he is cheating and wants to retrieve and delete an email she has sent in anger. Her anger is only increased by what she sees in his computer, all based on a certain number of erroneous assumptions.

Things get turned on their head when she realizes the true nature of her boyfriend's other relationship. The twist at the end was entertaining and unexpected.

Very entertaining story! You pack a lot into a very short tale!

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Review of Shrunk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem.

The title, "Shrunk" refers to what the individual does to oneself by limiting choices and exposure to the dangers of the world. The statement is made that this wouldn't be the person that the writer knows so well.

I thought this was very moving:

"When the possibilities become so few,
It can’t hurt -
Not that much."

Trying, knowing how awful the world's reception can be, is a very brave move indeed. We all wrestle with demons, but those who keep trying are a special kind of brave.

Very fine and moving poetry. You say a lot, using a few words.

Well done!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* I saw that your poem was featured in the Romance Newsletter that came out this past week. Congratulations on being selected to be in the Newsletter!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that sometimes the memory of love missed can be just as strong, if not stronger than the actual emotion of the moment spent together. You capture the feelings of longing and the pain of things not done so well.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Petals will fall
Wrappers askew
Scent washed away
Always thinking of you"

Sometimes being remembered so vividly counts for more than all the flowers that could be sent.

Beautiful poetry - well done!

*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*DISCLAIMER*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read.

*Leaf*END OF DISCLAIMER*Leaf*




Ta Ta until we meet again....

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Review of On the Wall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and it brought me to your wonderful poem. Two people connect because of a shared appreciation of Van Gogh. One longs for another who is already spoken for. That is a sad situation that can lead to all sorts of imaginings.

This was my favorite part:

"Although we never had
more than my heart's wishes
and your loneliness,"

Brilliant!

This is not an attempt at a detailed edit. Rather, my reviews are usually my reaction to the reading, which I have enjoyed.

Fine work!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I clicked on the Read and Review option on the left side of the screen and here I am.

This is about really finding a best friend. The speaker doesn't specify what they love about the other person, other than finding someone who cares for them. Someone to talk to is what it's about - talking and sharing.

This was my favorite part:

"In the dying light of the early night,
You hold my hand,"

Lovely phrasing there. I enjoyed reading this and wave a warm welcome to the site your way!

My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be detailed editing forays.

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

*Cow**Balloons*



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You referenced this wonderfully imaginative story in our campfire and so I came to read and review.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how Mr. Darcy is reverting to some of his old ways. It doesn't bode well that he is keeping things from Lizzie.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

Maybe Darcy will learn to soften toward his other sister and forgive his father and Mrs. Reynolds. This seems like there will be more to come in the adventure.

Fine story! *Heartp*

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

*Cow**Balloons*



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I saw you had added so I came to read and review.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Your town characters sound interesting and different. Zola sounds like one to stay away from.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

Is your post office nice and small? The first time we lived here, we had a small one nearby and they were so nice. Now, we live in the city and the one I go to always has a line and different people.

I envy you your peaceful space. Even in the city, I don't feel like I know a lot of people, but that's okay.

Nice work!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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