♥Hooves♥'s (4provinces) Reviews

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In my view, the primary focus should be on encouraging the writers to write. I do not review items I don't enjoy anymore because I see it as a waste of my time. So, if you get a review from me, I enjoyed reading your work. The amazing thing about this whole process is that reading an inspiring review usually leads to me reading more of a reviewer's work also. So, it's a win-win.

I'm good at...

encouraging others to write because I love to read.

I will not review...

something I do not like. I do not enjoy writing hyper-critical reviews. I do NOT believe that "honesty" is a synonym for "mean." If I see someone being "mean" here on the public reviewing page, in group behaviors, or just acting as a bully I will not send them my reviews. The only exception to that would be judging a site contest - there all items get honest (and hopefully diplomatic) reviews of the work from me with no exceptions.

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#4413306

Review of That old thing

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Something to do with a favorite Television Series on BBC/Netflix

A YaHOO Review from HOOves!!!

What brought HOOves to meander and glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Thanks for entering!

I am reading and reviewing your item at 9:32 AM, WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

This is done so that I can give the next prompt at noon and announce the winner as close to that time as possible. I also like to send out reviews to all the entrants when time permits, so it gives me the morning to do that, also.

What does HOOves think about and contemplate while perusing your item?

I think your story is a good one about trying to find a use for a family heirloom that is obviously important for some reasons as it is a connection to a post wartime event or decision. There is the hint that the decision might be based on something triggering in the wartime service. That is a good premise.

Your story is a lot less than 1,000 words. It is okay to do that, but you need to provide the specific word count. To get the specific word count in the future, click on the gear in the top right of your item, where you also have the edit choice. You will see "word count" there as one of your options. You can click there to get the specific number. Most contests require that you provide the actual word count, rather than a range.

Also, with the item number. To post as required you would type the following {bitem: 2158098}, but leave the space out between the : and 2. When you do that it gives you:

That old thing

(E)
A Writer's Cramp entry about a family heirloom with some complicatins.
#2158098 by Steve Joos

What does HOOves applaud and moo about while reading your item?

I like the premise for your story and you have written a fine flash fiction story that effectively introduces a family of characters who have high regard for a family heirloom. At some point you might consider expanding this to a longer story.

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves, sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing."

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#4413305

Review of The Mystery of the Heirloom

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Based on a television series on BBC/Netflix

A YaHOO Review from HOOves!!!

What brought HOOves to meander and glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Thanks for entering!

I am reading and reviewing your item at 10:18AM, WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

This is done so that I can give the next prompt at noon and announce the winner as close to that time as possible. I also like to send out reviews to all the entrants when time permits, so it gives me the morning to do that, also.

What does HOOves think about and contemplate while perusing your item?

A family passes on a tradition of seven virtues. The requirements are met in various ways including the saving and care of an injured kitten.

What does HOOves applaud and moo about while reading your item?

Your language is eloquent and moving, especially this passage:

"Words can paint pictures, and art is where the heart is. Patience is how we deal with discovery, even if it’s not what we set out to do."

A family can retain connection to each other by focusing on the development and nurturing of such virtues. Things like greed and intolerance are no where to be seen.

You did a nice job with the prompt - well done!

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves, sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing."

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#4413081

Review of Smart Guy

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your hilarious flash fiction story!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

HA HA HA HA!!!! Well, it sounds like he learned his lesson. What was the man thinking? LoL

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is so true:

"Adjusting to retirement is like getting married all over again. Suddenly there is a person around that you love, but are not used to having around all the time."

I will remember this if anyone around here criticizes my dust! This made me grin and laugh so hard!

Thanks for that and for writing such a wonderfully entertaining story!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4413078

Review of Diversity in SF and Fantasy?

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review and it took me to your article.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I think that there is a basic common denominator about readers in all genres. They like characters that project things about themselves. I don't want to read about the perfect person doing something for very long because I can't identify with that.

Heroes come in all sorts of forms.

One thing I have noticed is that there is a scarcity of original stories and characters. Hollywood tends to go with what has worked in the past and they refurbish old things a lot.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

When writers and creators think outside of the fences they have built for themselves, that is when a great story is born with characters that are more real than what has been thrust out in the past.

Taking chances and pushing boundaries is not safe, but it's where brilliant creativity resides. I bet this was an interesting thing to have attended.

Nice work with the reportage!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4413071

Review of A Special Devil's Food Cake

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

created by marphilhearts & gifted by siscok

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on the Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your wonderfully amusing story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I have to confess that Martha is a hero of mine, but I do think she is funny in this way at times.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

The ending was hilarious! I enjoyed her little surprise. I especially like how you don't spell out what is in the cake. It is left to reader's imagination.

You have captured Martha's diva routine to a "T".

I thought the whole story was very entertaining and I could picture every minute of it in my mind.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4413070

Review of Contest and Challenge Checklist

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

You have done a super job with this list and thank you for sending it to me! My goodness you have accomplished a lot and observed a lot - that is a lot of writing and supporting others to have done in less than two years. I like the way this is set up so that you can click on the links, also. I am doing that I Write in 2018 activity so this will be an invaluable tool for me in finding places to write. My go-to is always The Writers Cramp in order to support it, but it is good to try new things.

Excellent list! Well done!

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#4413068

Review of Christmas Ritual

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the page and it took me to your fine poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

It is always good to remember the fallen. You have done so with eloquence and reverence. A poem to be proud of is here.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"A gentle wind is faintly heard.
It seems to command, “Carry on!”
Perhaps the branches have been stirred
adorned with dog tags of those gone."

Carry on is a great legacy. What other course of action would honor them quite so well?

Brilliant poem with a wonderful message. I wouldn't change a thing if I were you. Bravo!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4413066

Review of Memorial Day Memento--1000 Words

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen. It took me to this wonderful and inspirational story you have crafted from a Writer's Cramp prompt.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

A young person gets more than they bargained for while helping grandpa to do a good deed.

I remember being that young once, way in the past and I was equally clueless.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

A day spent paying it forward is never wasted. There are too many days in youth that are wasted, but that's what its for (youth I mean). Military experience brings a few home truths to bear, but we all learn things when we are meant to learn them.

Grandpa teaches a good lesson by example.

Wonderful story - inspirational and heart warming that there are those who do this sort of thing as a natural part of living their lives. Bravo to grandpa!

Well told!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412885

Review of ghost; defined

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

Hi Fivesixer

!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I noticed you haven't been here for a while so I was looking in your portfolio and I found this. Hope all is well with you, my friend!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This reminds me of waking up in the middle of the night in a panic. It is the kind of thoughts I have then, but maybe everyone has them. I try to be busy enough to push them away most days. Just putting one foot (or hoof) in front of the other can be a scary proposition at times.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Living in a shell
of self...a blanket
of clouds shroud you out
and away...where you end up
isn't always
where you want to be,
but so what?
If you're somewhere, then surely
you must be someone...
says anyone. "

The mention of clouds struck a chord with me, it all did.

Again, I hope the world is treating you well and you are just taking a little break.

This poem is remarkable and moving to me. Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you, as always!

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#4412671

Review of Seven things

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the page and it took me to your wonderfully inspiring article.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This is a very well written and moving list. I do believe that happiness and living well are choices that we make every day. It does take a lot of something to keep trying and keep working at things.

Lots of things in life happen where we are taken for granted. But as long as we try not to take ourselves for granted we will be okay. We can't control anything but us. I think you get that point across very articulately.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I was particularly impressed with this part:

"Saying that your life is out of your control is a copout – it’s what other people want you to believe so that they have an easier time getting you to do what they want you to do."

And we all run into those vampires who angle for control. No one is that important, though, you are so right.

I thought this was something to keep in mind on hard days especially.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412481

Review of SNOWSTORM

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on the read and review option on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your wonderful poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

Today is going to be a very hot spring day. But you brought back the chill of winter and a reminder that weather can change so much in just an instant.

It is nice to think of last winter in the rear view mirror as it lasted way too long and brought late frost to tender vegetation.

Finally, now I review this from the relative comfort of Spring - with a high in the 90s today. What a change!

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"The sky is grey and overcast with anticipation,
Soon we'll see some sort of winter precipitation.
The clouds have decided it's snow they are throwing.
Fast and furious ghost flakes, twirling and blowing."

The rhyme is very well constructed and I love that imagery of the clouds throwing that snow! Lovely to think of in the past this year!

Fine poetry!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412478

Review of A Beautiful Wedding for Less

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Rate and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your well written and informative article.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I think you have compiled a comprehensive list of practical and affordable suggestions for planning a wedding that people can live with later on, as far as expenditures are concerned. I have never thought that putting on a big party was worth going into debt.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I particularly like the barn idea and working with family to make it a meaningful event for all. When people contribute their time and baking and that sort of thing they feel more a part of the festivities. You give a lot of good, common sense advice that young people don't always come up with.

I had a small wedding and I never regretted it. Everything was affordable and the marriage has lasted. I was more interested in being able to travel to Ireland later than having an expensive dress or huge party. It is interesting to me that all of my contemporaries who had huge, wildly expensive weddings didn't have marriages that lasted.

Mine is (knock on wood) into its third decade as I write this.

Great ideas for a memorable and enjoyable event! Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412465

Review of The Weekend Getaway

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Lovely Image Regarding My Favorite Author

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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I gave the prompt in "The Writer's Cramp"

earlier in the week and was interested to see what you writers would do with it. I was not the judge of it, but I was interested just the same.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I like the idea of two friends meeting up in their favorite city. They don't live in Milwaukee, but they love it and appreciate getting together there all the more.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

Maybe this is the best way to enjoy a city, knowing it is a favorite. The two friends appreciate their time there more, living away, and they don't take anything (especially the friendship) for granted.

I enjoyed reading this very much. I took my favorite city (my home city) for granted while I was there, but now I appreciate it so much.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412464

Review of The Point

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I gave the prompt in "The Writer's Cramp"

earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but was interested to see what you writers would do with the prompt.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This lovely poem expresses a heartfelt attachment to Pittsburgh, the place you feel is your true home. It is the way I feel about Washington D.C. and Arlington, Virginia at times. One wants to be at peace and at home when that final journey arrives.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"I've asked for my ashes
to be scattered from here.
I'll see you in Pittsburgh
when my end draws near."

Very eloquent and moving. I almost moved to Pittsburgh for a job when I was in my 20's. IT was a turning point, that decision because I stayed in D.C. and met Mr. HOOves a month after that. Well, that was a long time ago.

Great poem!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412284

Review of MEMORIES

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

You sent me a nice review so here I am to read and review.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

What an awesome tribute to a beloved family member. I once knew a kitty cat named Mittens who was very beloved. This reminded me of her.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I think it is a strong love indeed when you do something for their sake and for the best that you know will break your own heart. It takes a lot of love to let go sometimes.

This was lovely and brilliant and very well written!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4412276

Review of My World Of Hopes, Dreams, Fantasies

for entry "Stressed Out Song"

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I saw on the Newsfeed that you entered for the prompt activity.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I think you did a fine job with this.

Those guys in the video are at the age where they care so much about what their contemporaries think. So, they are dictated by fashions that are ever changing.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I am with you on the music. It all sounds the same to me and I don't know quite what to make of it. But that is what my Dad used to say about the Beatles. It all sounded like noise to him.

Still, you did a fine job with this and I hope you get the nice music badge.

Being retired is a good stress reliever. I would not want to be young in current times with all the communication going on. It is too much for me.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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#4411875

Review of Savior Jesus, Only Jesus Christ

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your fine song you wrote for the holiday season!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I think that this poem is a well written affirmation of faith. I know the tune well and it is an upbeat one which goes perfectly with the words you have written.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Tiny baby born for one and all.
But this tiny baby
Is who frees us.
For whomever seeks His heart
And hears the call."

Wonderful work here! I enjoyed reading this very much!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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#4411868

Review of Tough Luck.

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A YaHOO Review from HOOves!!!

What brought HOOves to meander and glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Thanks for entering!

I am reading and reviewing your item at 9:53AM WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

This is done so that I can give the next prompt at noon and announce the winner as close to that time as possible. I also like to send out reviews to all the entrants when time permits, so it gives me the morning to do that, also.

What does HOOves think about and contemplate while perusing your item?

I think that the birds bad luck is good luck for the ants. Someone's tragedy is always another's positive event. It's the way of the world, natural and otherwise. I like how you have used the prompt line and summarized the way of the world so accurately and succinctly.

What does HOOves applaud and moo about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Juicy red liquid sugar plopped in droplets down to the ground,
enticing ants who marched in a row to slurp such a sweet treat."

When there is spillage, ants usually find a way to capitalize, don't they?

Very eloquent and well thought out.

Nice work!

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp"

. Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves, sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing."

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018!

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#4411831

Review of Ramada

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

You sent me a very nice review so here I am to read and review your writing.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I like how this progresses from passive - being moved by water and controlled by forces beyond one's control - then it moves to taking charge at the end by being the one doing the forward movement. No longer a passive observer of one's own fate, positive action follows.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"I was moved about too many places
Each time struck with a new view of mountains
Mountains I could never reach to climb"

Breaking out of the frustration is a metaphor for taking charge of one's life.

I like the way you transition forward without being explicit about what is happening. At times that is exactly the way life treats us.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018!

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#4411651

Review of Fantasy Love Not Meant To Be

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your fine poem. I missed this somewhere along the way.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This is a love that is destined to be and that lasts beyond life. I sense Mr. Depp is the model for the hero.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"You can see them on a moonlit night,
A mermaid swimming and a pirate ghost
who are together at last.
Who says their love wasn't meant to be?"

Very romantic and ethereal. What a lovely dream of being together in the great beyond.

Well done, as always, Megan!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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#4411644

Review of Once Upon A Time, Chapter I

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review on the left hand side of the screen and it took me to your story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

It sounds like Joe was doomed from the beginning. Well, they should have investigated more thoroughly before going on their tirade. Sounds like Sergeant Piper was too busy with his vanity and pride.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I particularly admire the use of alliteration here. It's a sad commentary on the judicial system when form triumphs over substance. I gather that is where I am supposed to go in my thinking but I am very amused by the Sergeant's word choices.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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#4411637

Review of A First Date

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

You sent me a nice review so here I am to read and review your story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

A young man goes on a first date to a friend's house and gets more than he bargained for.

This starts out being told from first person than switches to third person. I don't mind that sort of thing, but thought I would mention it in case it was unintentional. You still get all of your points across very well.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like how Sean rolls with it when the evening goes in a different direction than what he intended. With all of this religious help, it sounds like the relationship is off to a good start. Things that are quirky are endearing to me.

I enjoyed reading your story very much.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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#4411624

Review of The Battle's Blaze

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with I Write

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

You posted before I did in the I Write in 2018 activity so it is my pleasure to read your poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

You decrease your syllables with each line as the form dictates. In addition to doing this, you provide a story of the battle between fire and water. This is not an easy thing to do, but you do it very well.

From the title one might think that fire is the victor. Indeed, it seems to have the most power at first blush. The fire causes the battle's blaze.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked how you ended and that water won out in the end. This poem could be a metaphor for life itself. It is water, the manipulator playing with fire's breath, that is in the ultimate driver's seat and n control.

I enjoyed reading your poem very much - well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2018!

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#4411514

Review of Trump and White Racism in America

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on Read and Review and it took me to your poem about the history and politics of Racism in America.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This is a long and detailed poetic history of bias and problems that you site. I think that it has alienated so many people, this wicked behavior on the part of politicians.

I don't see a lot of difference between the Democrats now and the Republicans. They all make promises to get elected and then back out of them or spend the next few years trying to justify their inaction.

Do you really believe that racism is still as rampant as it was in the 60s? I don't believe it is. I think people tend to be more fair in their judgments these days.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I think that we are where we are now because the Republicans had no clue what they stood for and Bernie Saunders should have been allowed a fair chance at the nomination. I do believe that he could have won the election.

I don't see President Trump as a racist, though. I see him as a non-politician who is trying to keep his promises with no help from his own party. I wouldn't be at all surprised if he doesn't switch to Independent or Democrat eventually.

To me, the Republican Congress is worthless, but not racists. I think those days have come and gone.

Your poem is well written and researched and your rhyme is well constructed. I don't agree with everything, but I respect your opinion on the matter.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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#4411477

Review of Reviewing: Why I Enjoy This Activity

Review by ♥Hooves♥

In affiliation with Paying It Forward

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

I clicked on the Read and Review option and it took me to your fine article about reviewing.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

I think the main thing is, as you indicate, to give the writer what you would want if you were in their shoes. Of course we are all different so different people will want different things. But, this is a good hashing out of the thought process that goes into making reviewing fun.

I enjoy it when I do, just as you say. I write a review that I would want to receive.

At some point you might want to run spell check or read through this again to proof read. I am not a proof reader and I don't enjoy nit picking. There are errors here, but it's more that you were in a hurry to get your thoughts down. I certainly understand that. You get your point across very effectively to me as a reader.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like your standard, which is a lot like the Golden Rule with Do unto others being the guide. If I had written this article, this is the kind of review I would like to get - where the reader/reviewer lets me know they have read and it and appreciated the point that's being made.

Writing and reading makes for great reviewing. In this realm, it is quite true that practice can only help us in these endeavors.

Very fine article here that will, no doubt, inspire others in their reviewing efforts.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference On Review at a Time in 2018!

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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