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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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526
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story about how a woman and her family deals with a hurricane, and manage to get through the whole ordel and everything that came with it, including the destruction of their house.

Characters
The woman is deffinatly someone relatable to almost anyone who has gone through really bad storms, especially those that cause damage.

Plot
A woman and her family fight to protect their belongings from the ravages of a powerful hurricane. Nicely writen.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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527
527
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well it seems that the Manimal Sagas has yet another mission to go on when a plot to kill one of their friends is told to them. Also so of them meet up with old friends and new companions.

Characters
Very interesting, and highly discriptive in what they do.

Plot
The team learnd of an assasination attempt on their friends and must find a way to deal with the trouble.

Spelling and Grammer
Some minor errors, but none too serious.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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528
528
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An intereserting poll for those who like to write about dominance and submisive stuff, especially where it concerns the use of capitals for use in names and the word "I" for first person stories.

Origionality
Well I can say that I haven't seen a Poll like this on the site.

Spelling and Grammer
I can see no spelling or "grammer" mistakes, except that of the names. *Bigsmile**Laugh*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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529
529
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's not easy being both a mother and a writer, especially when your children are being very agrivating.

Characters
You have a mother who is trying to do some work while at home, and her two children are causing her some serious problems.

Plot
It's a tough job being a parent. Very humerous though.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling or grammer mistakes that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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530
530
Review of Canned  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh this is a funny story about a guy who had a bad day while he was at work. It took me a while to stop laughing so that I could do this review.

Characters
You have a young man who is just trying to do his job, but he ends up colliding with an old woman who just freaks out.

Plot
Guy has a bad day on the job. Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammer
I don't see any problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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531
531
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very funny letter to a former boss from an ex-employiee. I just have to sit back and laugh as I read this.

Character
You seem to have a boss who is fed up with his employee, who is supposed to have done various infractions and potentially illeagle things.

Plot
Guy sends a letter to his boss explaining the things that he did. Very nice. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammer
No problems that I can see.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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532
532
Review of Dry Food For Dogs  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting little comparioson between an office job and a dog pound and how they are related to in a sence.

Chatacters
No real characters except for the metionings of various dogs and what they are like.

Plot
No real plot to speak of except for comparisons.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be spotted.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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533
533
Review of Granny Fields  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An elderly woman has a talk with the police after she gets involved in the death of a young man. Nice story.

Characters
Wonderful discription of the old woman and what she says happened.

Plot
A woman has to talk to the police after someone attempts to rob her house.

Spelling and Grammer
No spelling errors but you seem to mention that the young man snuck up on the old woman twice.

Suggestions
Have some space between paragraphs and upping the rating from E to at least 13+ due to content.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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534
534
Review of A Wasted Life  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about an old cop close to retierment having to go on one last case and face some old enimies of his. An interesting read.

Characters
Very descriptive looks as to how the cop and his partner, and the gang members appear, and how they talk and so forth.

Spelling and Grammer
None that I can see, though I did have a bit of trouble keeping the names straight. Perhaps using just first names or just last names might be in order.

Plot
An old cop goes on one last case and faces old enimies. Very interesting ending.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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535
535
Review of The Watcher  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man known as a Watcher, and how he is always watching over the people in a city, never interfering in anything, yet watching for an unknown enemy. Interesting.

Characters
Interesting way of depicting the man and what he does on a daily basis.

Spelling and grammer
No problems spotted.

Plot
A man watches a city for signs of danger and finds some troubling signs. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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536
536
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. A young woman who is engaged to be married is staying in a lakeside house wondering about what to do. Also, the lake has several legends about people vanishing.

Characters
Nice discriptions of the woman and the man she talks to.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be seen.

Plot
A woman talks to a man about her wedding problems and he shares a late supper with her, and tells her what's happened. Very interesting ending, one that is begging for a sequal.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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537
537
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very funny and satarical what-if story about what could happen if the use of micro-chips is implimented on a wide scale and all of the potential consequences that could arise. Very funny.

Characters
No characters mentioned, except as "we/ they/ you/ I".

Spelling and Grammer
No problems to be found.

Plot
No real plot, but plenty of nice "What-If" senarios.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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538
538
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
An interesting story about a woman who finds within her the strength to take herself, and her children, out of a bad situation, and an abusive relationship. Very interesting.

Characters
Nice discriptions of Shyla, Jeev, Priya and Nobi, and how they treat each other.

Spelling and Grammer
I see no errors in this piece.

Plot
A woman finds a way to get away from a bad relationship. Nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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539
539
Review of Slider Exchange  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A nice little activity to get involved in. Dealing with the new feature known as "Sliders" this is a place where people can come and show off their "artwork"/"Magnetic poetry" to other people and comment on the slides that other people have made. A very nice looking activity.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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540
540
Review of A day in the Life  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting little story about the daily life of a man on another planet at some point in the far future.

Characters
Nice personal discription of the man's behavior, but I'd like to know what he looks like becouse it is mentioned that he might be the last of his race.

Spelling and Grammer
No problems that I can see.

Plot
Other then what this person normally does, I see no plot. Perhaps a sequal is in order.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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541
Review of Borrowed Time  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A very interesting story about four hunting buddies who meet up every year to talk about what had happened to them when they were younger and had been involved in a hunting accident.

Characters
Truely unique and indivdual personalities from all of them.

Mistakes
None that I can really see.

Plot
An interesting introduction of the four at the campfire, and a nice ending.

A very interesting story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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542
542
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A very interesting poem about the Phoenix, about how it is the everlasting avitar of the world, and what it does to make sure that it contenues to exist, by gathering up special materials so that the process can contenue. Wonderful use of colors.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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543
543
Review of The Bug  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story you have here. You have some sort of bug biting people and injecting something into them. The people then start to have some very serious problems and eventually start to biting others themselves. Very interesting. I hope to see more of it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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544
544
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting story. After being hospitalized due to a neck injury, a woman searches for a set of pictures that she'd taken as a gift for her mother and sister, because she believes that they might help her with her recovery, but she is unable to locate them. Then, out of the blue, she gets a phone call aboput them. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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545
545
Review of The Quills  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An interesting contest. Nominate a friend's item, or items, in the chance that your friend will win some very nice prizes, which include Merit Badges, awardicons, and Gift Points. A very interesting idea.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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546
546
Review of Daeva  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting story. You have a man who managed to escape from a massacur heading towards his home planet. When he gets there he sees a woman acting strangely. When he finds out why, he is shocked, because it is happening again. I hope to se a sequal of this story, as I want to know what's going to happen.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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547
547
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An interesting Chapter segment. You have two men out in the woods, cutting down trees and taking them home. The end up meeting with a stranger, who gives them an eirry feeling. Then when they get home, they end up in a fight for their lives. An interesting start.

A few suggestions, have some space between your paragraphs, as that will make reading easier. Also, use Word to check for basic Spelling and Grammer problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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548
548
Review of WINTER YEARS  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice short little poem about a woman in her later years and close to death. Her mind seems to wonder through her past, thinking about what has happened, and what could of happened. Very nice.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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549
549
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An exciting intro to what looks to be a promising story. You have a young man fighting in a gladatorial-type of arena using magic. However, his wife, who is watching the battle, goes into labor. He tries to forfite the match, but certain rules must be followed. He manages to get to where is wife is being cared for, but there is some very tragic news. Very interesting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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550
550
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A very interesting rant about baseball, and whether or not players who did drugs in the past should or shouldn't be allowed to be in the Hall Of Fame, as well as what to do with them. An interesting read.

Of course, I do have a suggestion, bump the rating up a bit, from E to like 13+, as you are talking about the issue of drugs in sports.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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