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2,496 Public Reviews Given
2,658 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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476
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very funny little story. After hearing a story about toiletsflushing in E-Flat, a tone-deaf writer decides to test it out, using everytrick she knows, from trying to remember music lessons to seeing about playing songs that are done in E-Flat to see if the tone is right. Very funny.

Characters
The woman is very interesting, especially as she deals with the connundrum.

Plot
A woman tries to see if toilets flush in E-Flat. Very funny.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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477
477
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting little story that you entered in the Non-Humans R Us contest.

You have a young orphan woman who is turning into a dragon of some sort, just before her birthday. She ends up seeing a friend who suggests that she sees the great dragon at the end of a Celebration. Very nice. Also, you have a nice picture as well. No bonus points though. *Bigsmile**Laugh*

Characters
The young woman is highly interesting as she deals with her transformation.

Plot
A young woman starts changing and decides to see a great dragon for advice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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478
478
Review of Dragon Shower  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for entering the Non-Humans R Us Contest.

A nice little story about how a bully ends up recieving a taste of his own medicine when he ends up changing for no apparent reason. I think that a sequal of some sort could be in order. After all, I want to know what's going to happen to him.

Characters
The main character is a yong man who pick on others who have started changing for some reason.

Plot
A young man who bullies others for being different ends up recieving a taste of his own medicine when he starts changing.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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479
479
Review of THe Harvesters  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Now here is an exciting story. A man finds himself being attacked by some sort of insect, that keeps on taking tiny pieces of his body from him. Now he has to find a way to deal with it, and find a way to destroy it before it destroys him. Very thrilling.

Characters
The main character is very interesting, as he goes through the days, trying to find a way to deal with his bug problem.

Plot
A man comes under attack by bugs and must find a way to deal with them.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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480
Review of Noble.  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a young man, who has to deal with the aftermath of his best friend's suicide, all because of the fact that he was gay. Now he must find a way to deal with himself for not preventing his friend's death. Highly exciting.

Characters
The characters are highly exciting, and very interesting in their actions. In some ways, they are also highly relatable as well.

Plot
A young man must deal with the reprecusions of his best friend's suicide.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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481
Review of I Hope You Dance  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a writer from the site who goes to a convention with a bunch of other writers frome the site, to discuss things and to participate in activities with each other. Very nice to read,

Characters
The characters are a bunch of important writers from the site, and show off their true natures.

Plot
A writer goes to a convention with other writers and does fun activities.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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482
482
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I must say, this is a humerous, and somewhat long, story poem about a young man at a poetry convention, who decides to go to a hiden area and sees a remarkable sight, the poets from the past, all activily engaged in conversation and poetry. Very interesting.

Characters
The characters are highly interesting, especially the poets of the past.

Plot
A young poet ends up wittnessing a convention of the Poets of the Past.

Spelling and Grammar
I see some spelling and grammar mistakes, but those seem to be related to the type of poetry that the section is dealing with.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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483
483
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting little story. You have two people searching the woods when something startles them, and forces them to head back to their camp, following them all the way. Very interesting, I hope to see more.

Characters
Aundrea is discribed to be a woman with military training, and while her partner seems to have had training, I'd like to know more about both of them, like why were they in the woods in the first place.

Plot
Two people searching the woods find something unexpected.

Spelling and Grammar
I see what could potentially be a spelling mistake at the begining, the word tho. I think it should be "though".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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484
484
Review of The Lone Survivor  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A highly exciting story about a man, who survived an alien attack on a Mars colony, who ends up being drafted to participate in the 2120 Olimpic Games. Highly exciting.

Characters
Troy, the lone survivor, is interesting. Of course, I'd like to know more anout him. Perhaps a squal or a prequal might be useful, as I want to know what happened to him.

Plot
The lone survivor of an alien attack is drafted to participate in the Games.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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485
485
Review of Tennis, Everyone?  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting article about tennis and how it can benifite people, and towns, both in the physical department, as well as the financial department. It also tells of how one can get help in building tennis courts and restoring old ones. Highly informative.

What I think about this piece
While I myself am not interested in sports, including tennis, I think that this piece would be highly useful for those looking for help to build a tennis court in their area.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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486
486
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Here is a very nice poll that asks how one feels about Writing.Com. Well here's how I feel about the Site, I totally enjoy it. After all, this is one place where I can post my stories and they'll get read. Highly enjoyable.

Originality
Well, considering that this is one of the oldest polls on the site, I'd say that this poll is original. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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487
487
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice little poetry contest. Enter an item that has a 4.5 or higher rating and follows the rules, and seee if you could win a prize. Highly interesting.

Originality
Anything that gives people a challenge to write something they don't normaly write about is great.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest. May you have plenty of enteries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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488
488
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting Poetry contest using sonnets and Ghazals. Very interesting. I don't know if I'll enter, but I wish those who do the best of luck.

Originality
Any contest that challenges someone to write is good, especially if it is for something that one doesn't normally write about.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck with your contest. May you have plenty of enteries.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!

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489
489
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An intersting little story about a young woman that works at an art museum and ends up meeting with an artist who produces some exceptional works of art. Very interesting.

Characters
The young woman and the young man are both interesting as they talk to each other. Very relatable as well.

Plot
A young woman meets up with her client, a young man, and finds something out about him.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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490
490
Review of No Way, José  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very nice short Story about a man who goes to a party with an atractive young woman and meets up with her boyfriend/husband.

Characters
The characters are highly interesting, especially the main one.

Plot
A man goes to a party with a woman and meets up with her boyfriend/husband.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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491
491
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting start to what looks to be a good series. You have a group of children in a city full of death and destruction. However someone shows up, to give them help.

Characters
The children just pull out one's heart, and the woman makes you wonder what's going on.

Plot
After an attack on a village, only children and a thief are left alive.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!

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492
492
Review of Lullaby  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very cute little story about a bed asking a man to vacuum his own bed when he gets home. Very short and very nice to read.

Characters
The person and the bed a quite relatable, though I would like to see more about both.

Plot
A bed tells a man to vacuumhis bed at home.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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493
493
Review of Angel  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very nice little poem about Angels showing up to help relieve the suffering of the people who need them, and to give them strength to get through the day.

How I feel about this item
I thought that this is very moving, as it gives people the strength they need to get through the day.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems, though since I'm not a poet, I can't really judge on form and such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!

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494
494
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very interesting interactive in which the characters from Naruto end up turning into either animals or anthros, and get into a whole host of troubles, for one reason or another. A very exciting Fanfic.

Characters
The characters in most of the branches are nicelly discribed and writen.

Plot
The characters from Naruto end up changing into anthros/animals and get into a wide variaty of trouble.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some spelling and grammar errors, but that's what happens when people don't check their writing before submiting.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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495
495
Review of The Talent Pond  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Now here's a nice little group, one that helps other writers improve their skills an abilities. A very nice group.

Originality
While helping others is as old as time, it is always nice to see people help out.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

I wish your group the best of luck on your mission

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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496
496
Review of Let's Publish!  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A nice and very interesting group of people who try to help each other so that a person can get their items published in one form or another.

Originality
I haven't seen many groups that deal in helping people get published. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

I wish you the best of luck in your mission

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!

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497
497
Review of Mistaken  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An interesting story about a man who gets bitten by a venemous spider, and he becomes obsesed over the bite and tries to fix it. Quite frightening as well.

Characters
The character is very interesting, especially his reactions as he tries to deal with the bite. The store clerk is interesting as well.

Plot
After he is bitten by a spider, a man becomes obsessed with it.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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498
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now here's a very helpfull group. Giving out Upgraded Memberships, rewarding Reviewers, and more, this is one group to check out.

Originality
While the idea of helping others is as old as time, this is one group that goes Above and Beyond the Call of Duty. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or Grammar here.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!

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499
Review of Questions  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Now here is a very funny In-and-Out. Answer a question with another Question. A very fun game to play, and one that will make you laugh to no end.

Origionality
Tell me how often can one answer a question with a question? I wouldn't know. Do you? *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar, though I have to wonder what people are thinking when they ask their questions.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!

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500
500
Review of Amber's Gift  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A truelly saddening story about a woman who gets involved in an accident and tries to keep a young girl from dying from her injuries. To be honest, I had to stop several times while reading this, so that I could take off my glasses, and wipe something that was in my eyes.

Characters
The two main characters, the woman and the little girl, are well discribed.

Plot
A woman stays with a young girl in the aftermath of a terrible accident.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.

HOWLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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