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322 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Whitemorn;

It was a very unusual and type of comedy that I have ever read. However since it was different I liked it. It seems you do have a natural gift for writing comedies. Please do continue. It made my busy day which I actually did not do much expect going to garage sell and buy unwanted items that other people did not want anymore.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Who Am I  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Brian;

The poem "Who Am I" is very delightful to read. It makes one to pounder about the meaning of life. Who we really are? What have each accomplished? We all are born, grown up, and left our family to start the second part of our life with someone special . Is this really all there is to life to get old and people ignore the old timers. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of 'Me' Time  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Someone Famous;

I read your short story "Me" Time", It is a well written piece about the office work and brainless female employees having a job just because of being easy. I must say that it is not only the office. I know of someone dear to me that he married with a young woman from Morocco thinking that his wife is the ideal housewife and mother. On the contrary she neither cook, clean, or taking care of their 2 children. The 2 year son is always with wet diaper and 4 year old daughter is on the diet of chicken an potato for every since she could eat. The wife is on the Facebook chatting with other men and using F word all the time. When I read your piece it remained me that unfortunately two many easy women have ruined the name of good , decent, educated young ladies with families to take care and great inspiration for all the humanities

Your piece was a perfect example of women demonize. A well done job

Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rosie;

Your short story made me look into my own handbag and the items are: Cell Phone, House Key, Pens, Papers, small calculator, 2 notebooks. I guess I am different than other ladies. It is a very interesting survey. I never thought about it. Thank you for sharing with us. It is very original.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi sqwhirl;

The story that you wrote can be turn into Science Fiction movie. It touches the soul of the reader. Being surpass by some elite force is nothing new , but you have put it into words very beautiful. Our civilization has existed so far because of someone's heroic act. I liked your story "Exile and Death" very much. A job well done. Please continue.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Picky Reggie  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Teargen;

The Poem "Picky Reggie" is a delightful one to read. I thought that your the subject is very original and your style is unique. I did needed to read something funny and your poem was the right one. I believe eila,that you are going to be a very good writer. Please do keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of THE BOTTLE  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nhlanhla;

I read your story. It really did move me. You are really good with emotions. I liked the story, but I thought it was a little bit sad, Life is not always happy. You do have a unique style. I liked the end of happy ending. You do have all the tools to become a great writer, Please keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Valleyboy;
I read your story "The Telephone Conversation" I must say this was the funniest one I have read in months. Your story was unique. It was very original. Your story made the reader to follow through with passion. It made me laugh, which I needed badly. Please do accept a Gift Point that I am sending your way as a token of appreciation. You are the first person in a long time that I am giving Gift Point.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Porch  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aimee;

Your story "The Porch" is a very emotional one. I liked the style of your writing. It seems that you are thought about it. I also lost my dear dad recently and I felt the pain you are going through. Altogether this is a nice story for all generations to read. You did a great work.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com



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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Summer Wind;

I read your beautiful story "Magical Love in Dumpster", it is very charming to the point that one will believe in love and things that really thins happens for a reason. I liked your style of writing very much. It I unique ad I think you are a vey goo writer. Please do keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Cheshire Logic;

Your story "A Secret of the Women" is very delightful to read. I do agree with you. Women around the world must be united for their cause to make the world a better world for live for all mankind. Women have endured many hardship and achieved many successes in the world of men but it is not enough. We as softer gender are not opposite Sex's enemies, we would like to build a better world to share it together. I liked your short story very much. It is well written and it does come from the heart. It motives the reader to follow through. Well done my dear.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Rant about Spidey  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Poisonivy;

You story "Rant about Spidey" is very delightful. It made me laugh very much. I have a friend that her brother is on line all the time and tells her sister I can do that and that on line and when he needs her she is the sweetest sister on earth. Your story has a lots of truth in it with people being addict on electronic gadgets. It is well written. It is very original and very funny A job well done. I voice my opinion as a reader not as a English Teacher.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Btigxx;

I remember that when I was growing up my parents would drive my to school and continued doing so even though I was going to college. I was mad at them. Now after reading your story I realized how wrong I was. kidnapping happens to all ages but its is worse when there is a child involve. Your story "Kidnapped in Daylight" is an eye opening for the future generations and must be read in school. I liked the suspense of who done it. It liked the double spaces as well. Good job my dear.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Megan ;

I am not going to correct you grammatically because I believe we are all here to learn and criticism does kill the desire to learn. However, I am going to let you know my opinion about your story. I had a chance to read "Dancing on the Mountain". It is short, sweet, and well written. It does take me back on my younger days when my family and I used to claim the high mountains and enjoy the view looking down and fell free. It is a job well done my dear. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Nixie;

the story about your cat "Dr. Zhivago and the Cheesecake" was very delightful. I just lost my dog of 12 years and bought a puppy and the new puppy is making my life full of laughter.
The story is well written and right to the point. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello DoIIU;

I read your story "Three Things I Should Have Said (?)". I am very glad that your grandmother is an open minded lady. Your house is in middle of nowhere as you mentioned but it is a castle for you. Many people have lost their houses and even animals and are out in the street because the big company pushed them out of their residence. You must be happy to have a roof over your head.
I do agree with you. You must say things that you believe in them. I recently lost my father and now I sit and think I wish I had said this and that. But to late he is no longer with me.
I liked the honesty I saw in your writing. A job very well done.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Pink  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jordi;

I read your very charming story "pink". It is an very suitable for the young teenagers. It is well written and short enough for a fast reading. I thought that it would have been nice if you would have extent the story. A job very well done my dear. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review of Elijah  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Calvin;

The title of your story was very interesting to me so I had to red it. I always liked old mysterious Old West. The plot was very charming. I could not stop reading it. The reader would like to know what happens next. The fact that the ghosts can come to life and disappearing is very difficult but now I believe people who die tragically do travel between dimensions. You did an excellent job of presenting it. Well done my friend.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Joy;

the title of your Ballad caught my attention. I found it quite charming. Honestly I did not have a clue what a ballad is and your information was very helpful. I liked the style of your writing. It was a job well done. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kotaro;

I had a chance to read your story "The Universe is a Rubik's Cube". although you wrote you for a much younger generation however, I fell any adult must read this. It shows that you have put lots thought in writing each words. A very well done job my dear. Please keep on writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of An Exotic Pet  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Allenalien;

Your story of "An Exotic Pet" was a remedy for my wounded heart. I lost my beloved Lucky, a Maltese of 12 years. He was not hideous and did not smell but your pet and mine have one thing in common. We all miss them once they are gone .
Your story brought back the good times that I had with my Lucky. It is well written and the reader wants to know what is going to happen next. Well done my friends.
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Review of Shaky Marriage  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Candie;

I read your story "Shaky Marriage which you have put into words beautifully. I liked the story that very much that unfortunately happens to majority of people around the world these days. The followings are why I like it.
1) Interesting title.
2) It address the modern day life marriages very well.
3) It is well written.
Good work my dear.

Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of No New Mail  
Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Elle;

The title of your story caught my attention. I must hand it to you, this story shows that you do have a very strong imagination. I must say that I felt I must read it through. I felt so sorry for the lost Email. It is a very beautifully written story. I really liked it. A very well done job.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Cube  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi EvilDawg - Vigilante Ranger!!;

the title of your story caught my attention. I started reading and I must say that you are a very good writer. The way you wrote made me want to read more. Your story had the element of surprise and sorrow. I like it very much. Good job my friend. Please keep on writing. I do not have any choice but to give you 5 what else.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com

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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi J;

I read your "Constructive Conversation issues". You wrote well. People do like change because of fear of getting laughed at. In any conversation that I had with my friends when I mentioned something is unseal like a bit coin or the possibly of using some type of Tesla technology soon , I found out that people look at me like I am some sort of lunatic. It seems that most people from childhood have been conditioned to accept blindly what is been told to them as absolute truth.
I enjoyed reading your article. It was short and sweet and to the point.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com.
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