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322 Public Reviews Given
322 Total Reviews Given
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I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review of The Shop  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Duane;

I enjoyed reading your story " The Shop". It was very unusual but It was written tastefully. It had the element of surprise and it w as short enough not to get board. This is a good scary story for Halloween. A job well done .


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of THE BOTTLE  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nhlanhla;

I read your story. It really did move me. You are really good with emotions. I liked the story, but I thought it was a little bit sad, Life is not always happy. You do have a unique style. I liked the end of happy ending. You do have all the tools to become a great writer, Please keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Valleyboy;
I read your story "The Telephone Conversation" I must say this was the funniest one I have read in months. Your story was unique. It was very original. Your story made the reader to follow through with passion. It made me laugh, which I needed badly. Please do accept a Gift Point that I am sending your way as a token of appreciation. You are the first person in a long time that I am giving Gift Point.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Porch  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aimee;

Your story "The Porch" is a very emotional one. I liked the style of your writing. It seems that you are thought about it. I also lost my dear dad recently and I felt the pain you are going through. Altogether this is a nice story for all generations to read. You did a great work.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Cheshire Logic;

Your story "A Secret of the Women" is very delightful to read. I do agree with you. Women around the world must be united for their cause to make the world a better world for live for all mankind. Women have endured many hardship and achieved many successes in the world of men but it is not enough. We as softer gender are not opposite Sex's enemies, we would like to build a better world to share it together. I liked your short story very much. It is well written and it does come from the heart. It motives the reader to follow through. Well done my dear.



Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Rant about Spidey  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Poisonivy;

You story "Rant about Spidey" is very delightful. It made me laugh very much. I have a friend that her brother is on line all the time and tells her sister I can do that and that on line and when he needs her she is the sweetest sister on earth. Your story has a lots of truth in it with people being addict on electronic gadgets. It is well written. It is very original and very funny A job well done. I voice my opinion as a reader not as a English Teacher.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Btigxx;

I remember that when I was growing up my parents would drive my to school and continued doing so even though I was going to college. I was mad at them. Now after reading your story I realized how wrong I was. kidnapping happens to all ages but its is worse when there is a child involve. Your story "Kidnapped in Daylight" is an eye opening for the future generations and must be read in school. I liked the suspense of who done it. It liked the double spaces as well. Good job my dear.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Megan ;

I am not going to correct you grammatically because I believe we are all here to learn and criticism does kill the desire to learn. However, I am going to let you know my opinion about your story. I had a chance to read "Dancing on the Mountain". It is short, sweet, and well written. It does take me back on my younger days when my family and I used to claim the high mountains and enjoy the view looking down and fell free. It is a job well done my dear. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Nixie;

the story about your cat "Dr. Zhivago and the Cheesecake" was very delightful. I just lost my dog of 12 years and bought a puppy and the new puppy is making my life full of laughter.
The story is well written and right to the point. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Pink  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jordi;

I read your very charming story "pink". It is an very suitable for the young teenagers. It is well written and short enough for a fast reading. I thought that it would have been nice if you would have extent the story. A job very well done my dear. I liked it very much.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Joy;

the title of your Ballad caught my attention. I found it quite charming. Honestly I did not have a clue what a ballad is and your information was very helpful. I liked the style of your writing. It was a job well done. I do hope to read more of your works soon.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kotaro;

I had a chance to read your story "The Universe is a Rubik's Cube". although you wrote you for a much younger generation however, I fell any adult must read this. It shows that you have put lots thought in writing each words. A very well done job my dear. Please keep on writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of An Exotic Pet  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Allenalien;

Your story of "An Exotic Pet" was a remedy for my wounded heart. I lost my beloved Lucky, a Maltese of 12 years. He was not hideous and did not smell but your pet and mine have one thing in common. We all miss them once they are gone .
Your story brought back the good times that I had with my Lucky. It is well written and the reader wants to know what is going to happen next. Well done my friends.
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Review of Shaky Marriage  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Candie;

I read your story "Shaky Marriage which you have put into words beautifully. I liked the story that very much that unfortunately happens to majority of people around the world these days. The followings are why I like it.
1) Interesting title.
2) It address the modern day life marriages very well.
3) It is well written.
Good work my dear.

Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi J;

I read your "Constructive Conversation issues". You wrote well. People do like change because of fear of getting laughed at. In any conversation that I had with my friends when I mentioned something is unseal like a bit coin or the possibly of using some type of Tesla technology soon , I found out that people look at me like I am some sort of lunatic. It seems that most people from childhood have been conditioned to accept blindly what is been told to them as absolute truth.
I enjoyed reading your article. It was short and sweet and to the point.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com.
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Review of MAD Flute  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Scobin;

I saw the title of your poem"MAD Flute", It sounded very interesting. I found the followings.
1) Nice title
2) It is very funny.
3) It is well written.
4) It is short enough for a fast reading.
5) It is suitable for any age.
6) It does have a good rhyme.
All together you have done a great job with this poem.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaara;


I read your "A Pearl in an Oyster". It is beautifully written. I liked it very much because, It is short and sweet. People these days do not have time to read a long story. You have kept it very simple. You have mentioned the problem with working a trouble manger in the work place well. Good work my dear.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of GOOD STUFF!  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joy;

I was in mood to read a comedy. The tile of your story caught my attention. I started to read and from the very begging I found out " GOOD STUFF!" to be well written. short enough for fast reading. You made all the problems into a very funny story. I liked it very much. Please continue the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Always  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Alexandra Lizzi;

Your story "Always" is a sad one with a great possibility of these types of events in the near future. Nightly programs such as Coasttocoast A.M have been warning the public in years in advance of biological, nuclear, and some strange weapons for de-populating humanities. I must say that you did a great job on showing the dark side of the war. Your powerful story makes the person to go through and wondering what will happens next. It is a job well done.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of My Wife's Escape  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Simple Dykie;

The title of your story caught my attention. I decided to start reading it immediately. The followings are what I have to say to you.
1) The story is short enough for a fast reading.
2) the story has originality, something that is rare these days even in Hollywood movies..
3) It is very funny.
It is very well written. I did like it very much. A job well done.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Gym Split  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Than Pence;

I was looking for something not only to read but also to cheer me up too. Your poem Gym Split" did just that for me. I just imagine the scene and could not stop laughing. I liked your poem for the following reasons. Nice title. The just was original. It was short for fast reading. It is job well done my friend. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of The Playground  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jess Reid;

You wrote this is your first attempt. Vow you have done a great job. Well done my friend. I wish I could well as you did with your first poem. I read and enjoyed every word of it. You do have the right material to become a great poet. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of First Fool  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Mike;

I read your story " First Fool". It is very interesting. It proves that what goes around comes around. Your story is very captivating, it is proper for teenagers that go through a lots of things like these. It is well written. And if you like, you can expand on that. I did like it very much. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there Duane Engelhardt ;

Your short story took me back years ago when I was back in school. I guess it does not make any different which country one comes from , there is always some trouble maker everywhere. I like your story for the following reasons. It is short but to the point. It tells the story of all the generations. It is well written and is entertaining. It is a job well done. Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dragon;

I read your "Finding the Black Sheep". Your story has all the quality of good mystery. I must say that the reader would like to continue and find our more about the datives' investigations. You could elaborate more if you wish. It has interesting start. it is original and I liked it very much. Please do keep up the good work.

Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing. com
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