|I like the soul behind this, the actual emotions and idea are great. The grammatical side of it is not so great, but that's not a big deal. You can tweak it and make it a better piece of writing pretty easily. Instead of pointing out errors individually, I am going to show you how I would have written this. If you want more information on the specific reasoning behind these choices, feel free to message me. I do like the power behind this piece and my edits are just what I personally think would make your presence shine through brighter. I would also add that you might want to try to add some metaphors and a little more imagery to your piece, but these are very stylist and can change or add to the emphasis and meaning of a piece, so I am not going to regurgitate my personal style all over your work. Sorry for the ramble, but I really am just trying to help you out, hope I at least succeeded there.
(Mostly just grammatical and flow changes, hope this isn't intrusive too intrusive.)
None of this was supposed to happen.
I never meant for all of this; the bloodshed, death and chaos. I was just a hungry girl --desperate to survive.
Yes I stepped one foot into the wrong road. Does that give you the right to blame me? I'm not saying that I should have done it. I know I shouldn't have. Even so, wouldn't you have done the same? Seeing your brother, sister, and even your parents starving. Watching as they slowly slip away, right before your eyes.
I could have been the hero. The girl who saves her family from starvation and even death. No, I could never be the hero. You must know that I never meant for everyone to die like this.
In one way, it seems like I caused all of this, and in some ways it's true, but does that make me a villain? Am I evil? No. No, not to me. All I did was save myself from this swamp that I was slowly sinking into.
For once you won't be reading about the perfect hero who did nothing wrong and swooped in to save everyone. You won't be meeting the celebrity everyone loves, has loved and always will love. No. You're stuck with me. The girl who just made a mistake. The girl who everyone says is the villain.