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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A feel good poem in a world that is all too often rife with toils, troubles, and foibles.
The form and structure are structurally sound.
The rhyming is impeccable and leads the reader smoothly along the path.
Disneyland, that magical place, lends an opportunity to see real love in action in the end.
The pace is slow and sensory filled. Imagery teleport's the reader to that magical kingdom.
Thanks for sharing your memory and closing with a fabulous message of love.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of THE DREAM  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
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Life between the lines is not the same as the "wish" of life.
The form and structure are present.
The rhyming scheme lends a march like cadence to the piece.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
There is nary a jot nor tittle that has gone awry.
No suggestions for improvement are needed at all.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
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Reunions are signs that life is happening.
The attendance of one is always an adventure.
There is emotion within this reunion.
The reader is able to see the humor, the mundane, the sublime.
The form and structure are consistent.
The flow is so smooth.
Rhyming scheme is impeccable and improves the over all pace of this piece.
The absence of misspelling's is a relief.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Final Warning  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your consistent rhyming scheme keeps this poem moving smoothly along.
Your imagery brings the reader into step with the three characters you grow along the way.
The form and structure allow for an organized pace and sense of purpose along the way.
The pace is gentle and the absence of grammatical snafu's delays the need to offer any suggestions for improvement.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Two Family Haiku  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
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I don't where you're from now.
But I do know that your mastery of the haiku is uncanny.
Imagery pops off the screen!
That's what leads the reader into your world.
Flow is as smooth as a rock garden undisturbed by feet.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
The absence of any grammatical snafu, only enhances the overall good feel of this piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Building Castles  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an intense battle against the elements.
The child seeking to build and in the end the inevitable razing of his/her efforts are accomplished.
Yet the child is undeterred. He/she continues trying, growing, maturing, and returning to the endeavor to create the greatest of all lives.

At least that is what I got out of this.
It's not often that a poem evokes so much from my mind.
Which is indicative of the strength of your piece.
It is full of emotion and imagery that transports the reader into the scene.
The rhythm appears to be what keeps the flow.
The flow is further enhanced by the absence of any grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow and sensory filled, as you can tell by the impact it had upon this reader.
There can be no suggestions for improvement, therefore you are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A joyful poem celebrating good winning over evil.
The form and structure are booming!
There is a rhythm to the piece that keeps the flow smooth and easy on the eye.
The pace is rapid, but little is lost along the way.
The absence of grammatical snafu's is indicative of making the most out of the words you chose.
Nary a suggestion for improvement can be considered in this piece.
Thanks for sharing!

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-03-16
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A fully developed story from such a small prompt.
The human emotion is palpable.
The human nature is also visible.
There is a sense of a need for change to occur, and sadness to see the reversal when a "pandemic" threatens the population again.
Form and structure are solidly in place.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow and steady on. No hesitance in the reader, as the story keeps his/her attention from beginning, to middle, to end.
Suggestions for improvement would be nil. Thanks for sharing and,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Monster  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Emotionally charged and gripping from the get go.
Full of human nature, good; bad; and down right ugly.
That's imagery and emotion that keeps the reader riveted to the page.
The form and structure are firm foundations.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled, keeping the reader on point.
The absence of grammatical stumbling blocks, prevents the need for suggestions for improvement.
Overall you have a 10 star piece and hopeful this is a work of fiction and not pieces of actual events.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of A Zephyr's Kiss  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow, I got lost in this piece.
It's a love story right?
Or is it a fantasy from start to finish?
Inquiring minds want to know.
The form and structure are solid.
The flow is a smooth.
The pace is slow as the reader considers the words proceeding out of your heart.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's, therefore no suggestions for improvement are needed in this case.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of The Windmill  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

There was much emotion within these lines.
The reader was taken the full gamut of feelings here.
That's imagery that transports the reader into your tale.
Form and structure are okay.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and there is no evidence of grammatical errors along the way.
Please keep sharing!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Gentle Warrior  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Speechless.
You create a world around mamma bird and her babies.
The reader can see the growth, feel the care and concern. That's imagery that sings!
Form and structure are apropos.
Rhyming scheme is stellar!
There is a song that can be sung within these lines.
Flow is as smooth as a well worn path.
Pace is slow and sensory soaked.
The reader is thrilled!
Grammatically speaking, your item is flawless.
Suggestions for improvement: Speechless.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Soul Wind  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a wondrous poem.
The imagery transports the reader.
The rhythm is that of a waltz, the horse cantering and dipping hither and yon.
The flow is as smooth as the rocks that have been worn down by this magnificent steeds ramblings.
The pace is rapid and visually stimulating along the way.
The absence of grammatical issues, is indicative of your attention to details to a T.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of One Summer Dream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06-29-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

An emotional piece evoking happiness, sadness, and hope too.
Form and structure are significant.
Rhyming scheme is consistent.
Flow is smooth and effortless.
Pace is slow and thought evoking.
Grammatically speaking there are no visible snafu's to speak of.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Acrostic Angel  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06-29-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

One thing: An acrostic typically opens each line with the letter of a word or the topic. Like "Angel", which your title suggests.
Form and structure are consistent,
Rhyme scheme is excellent,
Flow is not so smooth,
Pace is a gallop from one subject to the others.
Grammatically, no snafu's were found along the way.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of The forrrest  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 06-22-16
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A knights last stand and his squires final acts of bravado.
The concept is good and the story is potent. There is honor in these men and it serves them well to the very end.
The emotional pull is present. The reader feels the tension, fear, and exhilaration throughout the tale. Even the deer senses the magnitude of what happened.
The flow was slowed by a plethora of misspelling. It causes the reader to pause and consider what should have been said there. One example is included for your consideration at the end.
The pace was rapid and the intensity shines through the grammatical stumbling blocks found along the way.
One example is found here:
"At first it was one ridder, coming down the hill." Ridder should have been rider Please consider editing this anew because it is such a compelling tale which can be made better when cleaned up a little.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of I Can Hear You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 06-22-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Welcome to the WdC!

Compelling!
Riveting!
I was captivated by this piece from line one.
The emotional factors within resonate and makes the reader "feel" the plight of this "nurse" in a coma.
The flow is smooth as silk, enhanced by a seemingly flawless grammatical offering.
The pace is slow at first, as the scene is set, and picks up in the last sentence as the wonder of reemergence is seen before the eyes of the reader.
I'd give this a 20, but alas 5 is the highest within the confines of the great WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 06-22-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Welcome to the WdC!

A wonderfully poetic love letter to your beloved.
Describing the emotional and the physical with ease.
Rhyming is impeccable which helps with a remarkably smooth flow.
Pace is slow and steady as the reader grasps the intimacy of the poem intended for your beloved.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle have gone awry.
Thanks for sharing!
Write on!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 06-22-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Welcome to the WdC.
Your story is a bit rough but the message gets through.
The world is about to be taken over, but first the future top dog wants to have some fun.
There is some emotion within that the reader picks up on. A lot of anger to be sure from the "alien."
The flow is slowed by spelling errors but overall the story maintains a good pace.
Suggestion for improvement would be to use the spell checker. This helps keep the reader on track and not having to find out what is meant in one point or the other.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 05-04-16
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Wowsa! I wanna see the lilacs now!
You know what would be a great thing is an image of what you so wonderfully describe at the bottom of the piece.
You take the reader on a sensory journey that is full of so many emotions. Imagery that pops and creates an amazing scene in the mind of the reader.
Form and structure are superb.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by your grammatically flawless acumen.
Pace is slow and sensory intoxicating.
Man I'm glad it's may. Maybe I can find a lilac and drink in it's wonder.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 05-04-16
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This contest is clearly defined and laid out.
The reader knows in the end if he/she will participate. The flow is quite smooth.
The pace is slow and steady on.
There are no obvious signs of grammatical snafu's.
The incentives are well worth the effort and the rules set the groundwork soundly.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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Review of At the Root  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The closing entry in this NL.
Interesting to say the least.
It's as if you are in possession of these magical weapons, but in reality they are buried until the day when they shall be reunited with the owners from centuries ago.
Albeit brief, your piece has powerful imagery.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is rapid.
The content is interesting.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's and therefore no suggestions for improvement can possibly be considered.


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Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Awe inspiring.
Imagery that lifts the reader into the scenes.
Passion that draws the reader through the the stages of your poem.
Form and structure are marvelous.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a pristine grammatical landscape.
Pace is slow and sensory flowing.
Proud of your faith declared so wonderfully in the heart of this piece.
No changes can be recommended, for you have created a 15 star piece on a 5 star site.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
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Personally, I just pray and ask the Lord's peace to fall fresh on me, and in faith I know He does because the anxiety is soon erased.
I like the way in which you present your meditative adventure. Your imagery throughout transports the reader to the different layers of consciousness and through it all the readers attention is maintained.
That's a sign of the good flow you have going on. So smooth and seamless. The transition from one part to the next is flawless.
The pace is slow and sensory captivating.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's.
Thank you for sharing your journey in such a vivid way.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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Review of Turn on the Radio  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 05-04-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow!
The reader is tugged along on your dance of healing. There is so much imagery, the reader sees so much with every line you delicately create.
There is a sense of "euphoria" in the midst of the activity you do describe. Not sure why that word fits, bit it surely does.
Flow is smooth and emotionally charge.
Pace is slow as the reader drinks it all in.
Grammatically speaking; no visible snafu's are espied.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON by reviewing for her group
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