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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jen:
This is a Raid! This is only a Raid! This is a Raid of the disAbility Group, and thanks for asking me to review this amazing poem.

Why is it amazing?
Because the imagery is dazing.
The form and structure are uniform,
The rhyming makes the lines conform.

The flow is just like a pond.
Filled with water and rippling on and on, making the reader grow fond.
The pace is slow and that's just right.
For from top the bottom there is so much of a sight.

Not leaving emotion from this review,
Every line brings nice warm emotion too.
The reader cannot help but to be enamored,
Because with your heart his poem is armored.

Even grammatically speaking, errors or snafu's, this reader was seeking.
Nary a jot nor tittle were found to go astray, and thanks for giving the reader such a free flowing array.
Write on!
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a Raid! This is only a Raid. This is a Disability Group Raid! Had it been an actual raid, you might have seen the scorch marks on every line.

This a fantastic poem, Fran.
It is a romantic poem, madam.
It is a declaration of love poem, lucky person who is the intended.
It is an imagery filled love poem. One that keeps the reader riveted to the lines so well thought out.
The sunset, the waters, the ripples, all just pop for the readers imaginations. Mind blown!
The flow is smooth and sensory filled.
The pace is slow and emotionally charged.
Grammatically speaking; no visible stumbling blocks are perceived.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary, for you do such a fine job letting the reader into the heart, mind, and soul of this author.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very inspiring poem.
You use the skill you have to display a great result.
The reader can see your struggle, your intensity, and your success.
This is imagery that keeps the reader aware and on point with the piece.
Prosaic in nature is a good ideal, as it affords more freedom to add the emotional and personal tags that keeps the readers attention.
The form and structure is good and conducive the a smooth unhampered flow.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by a low degree of grammatical missteps. None of which takes away from the message but if you'd like to hear more about them, I'll be happy to help you in an email.
One example is "frate" rather than freight.
As I said the grammar does not take away from the message of your piece, and should not be taken as criticism. Just a suggestion to help improve your piece that can be done in the editing item section of recording it.
The pace is slow and emotionally charged as the reader sees the strength you do display in order to let others know what you have to say.

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Copenator out!
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104
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a raid! It's a raid! I disability group raid!
Not the bad kind, here, just a good review for a good little poll.
This actually pulled on my heart strings.
1. It's about volunteering and I've done that in the past.
2. The last time I volunteered was in the Food Pantry at our church and while I had a car I was there for at least once a month in the past 6 or so years. I lost my car and have not yet been able to get back into the food pantry and soup kitchen was the closest to Food Pantry you had.
I liked the options you did have. It seems like you have a heart for others and reflects in your choices.
The form and structure of your introduction is strong.
The flow is smooth and the reader knows what to expect and what he/she can/cannot do within the parameters of the poll.
The pace is not too fast as one pores over just the right amount of considerations.
Overall impression: you have a good well rounded poll and the results seem to reflect the compassion and care of those who responded.

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Copenator out!
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Review of Beautiful  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey what an uplifting poem you have here.
And that's not just following up on your "clinch" word here.
You see the gloom, the yuck, and you choose to go the other way.
That's encouraging to the writer and he/she is able to feel that.
Emotional power found here to be sure.
Form and structure are appropriate for this piece. It lends a platform from which to dive.
The flow is a go. Your word handling skills you do show.
The pace is just right. Starts off slow, speeds up and rockets to the awesome conclusion.
Prosaic nature is the right way to go here. The key word "hey" keeps the readers attention; rather than possibly boring him/her; it has fire power to it. Almost a staccato flair everywhere.
Grammatically speaking this works for you. Without even a hint of a jot or tittle sneaking off and being naughty.
Don't change a thing, is my advice for this piece, cause it's a masterpiece from which your awards can hang. Your many reviews from before, really missed the mark with a mere four. Here you get 5 and if possible even more!


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Review of random puzzle:1  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
1 and 6 across have me stumped.
1 and 2 down quite the same.
Your crossword is a good challenge.
Your clues require the reader to think.
It's cool to see the check marks and the erasures of the ones you got wrong.
Also cool that you can keep working on it after you submit. Most on here don't have that feature.
Thanks for sharing your puzzle and look forward to more challenges in the future.

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Copenator out!
remembering Lynda Miller with each association.
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Review of If I could walk  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are worthy of His Great Love; Marcia.
His love is unconditional; much like yours for your children.
His love is everlasting; much like your faith in the King of kings.
Your worries, fear, hopes and dreams are what make you unique.
They are the launching pad from which you sky rocket to the moon, as you dream and look to the future that God has in store for you.
This emotional response brought to you by the emotion and imagery you so strongly display in this grand poetically formatted short story.

The form and structure are uniform and lends a natural and unforced flow to a well organized piece of literature that is truth.
The pace is not a race. The reader is taken in by the subject matter and is not in a hurry to reach the end. That's thanks to your riveting words and flair for reaching the heart strings just in time. Grammatically speaking; through this writers seeking; nary a dot nor crossing of the T is missing from here.
Suggestions for improvement are in no way necessary, for you have constructed a top 10 piece this day.

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Copenator out!
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A sad state of affairs indeed.
The origin of your handle is handled with care.
The emotion; upon hearing of the plight of so many; is real and steeling.
Your compassion and care for others is clearly on display here.
It makes the reader thankful for the water he just used to rinse out his glass with, and that's the truth.
Form and structure of this piece are strong and well formed. Each line, paragraph, and jot and tittle too are there to tell the tale with grace.
Flow is smooth and paced at a slow steady motion.
Grammatically speaking you have a flair for detail to attention. Because nary a jot nor tittle was found out of place, and your story ends with just the right period.
Suggestions for improvement are nil. Because what you have to say is clearly and articulately displayed.

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Copenator out!
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Review of Gate Keepers  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Cat got your tongue as far as the lass?
It's quite common, let me assure you from the past.
The reader could feel the nervous tension here,
That's imagery that the reader can feel and hear.

The form and structure is uniform and has flair,
This helps the reader move from point to point.
The prosaic nature of this piece works quite well.
As the subject matter; the truth; is quite swell.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of any grammatical snafus to act as stumbling blocks.
The pace is slow and steady as the reader grasps the lines stanza by stanza and digests the messages there.
Suggestions for improvement cannot be made; I say;
for clearly your intellect is here on display.

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Copenator out!
remembering Lynda Miller with each association.
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110
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We had a cat named Prince whom I still miss.
Feline leukemia claimed him, but he knew he was loved, even when a mess.
He rescued us and that's the truth.
Never failing to respond until the disease stole him, so uncouth.
A reminiscence created by your imagery and humorous chase.

The adventurous kitten giving quite the chase.
In a tither it would seem, but really in control.
Rhyming scheme is performed with such grace.
Emotional tags keep the action on a roll.

The flow is enhanced by the rhythm created in your rhyme,
The pace is rapid and down right hilarious through and through.
Grammatically, nary a jot nor tittle awry can be found this time.
Suggestions for improvement, who can make, you have a super 9 woo hoo!

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Copenator out!
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Review of Zealots  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Zealots are filled with zeal for a cause and in the end they get corrupted and programmed to be the killing machines their "leaders" want them to be.
Your emotional tags prompted this opening slavo.
Form and structure are impeccable.
Rhyming scheme is flawless, and leads the reader on a journey through the varied zealots on display.
The flow is so smooth, enhanced by a flawless grammatical presentation.
The pace is not a race. Just right and the reader is able to digest everything you have to say from stem to stern.
You have a well rounded poem here that the reader can wrap his/her mind around easily. Well done!!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Resolutions  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Jenny:

Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-28-16

I like a lot about this, but the first thing is the rhyming scheme. It's interspersed but works to keep the reader on the right page.
Your lines with all the images are a hoot.
The reader sees it all and turns away from Tesco, cause this writer will never drink, there's too much to keep one's senses sharp for in this world.
See that the emotional tagging your piece creates.
The flow is smooth as a baby's bottom.
The pace is not a race, as the reader perhaps linger on his/her favorite parts.
Grammatically you have a pristine piece, and that's a great way to keep the peace.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Neva:
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-28-16
I see you too participated in Stormy's Contest. I often try my hand at it but have yet to receive a win, place, or show. I won't give up though, and that's the truth.
Elevens lines of imagery raised greatness.
The reader can see it clearly, as if they are there.
The free verse is the bomb.
There is a melody to this piece to be sure.
The flow is even and smoothly penned.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's and that's worthy of 92 stars!

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Carly:
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-28-16
This writer want's to know. Did you win, place, or show in Stormy's Contest. I've often entered, but to date not gotten any place. I will continue to try though, that's for sure.

Your use of the prompt words is remarkable. You've created a stand alone work with so few pieces from which to ply. That speaks of your creative writing skills for sure.

Found a slight bump in the road where a word is left out. "As find myself" in line 2. It feels as though you are missing "I" here in my opinion.
The form and structure are cool.
The prosaic nature lends a melodious timber here.
The flow is smooth,
The pace is slow and steady on as your poem does progress.
With the exception of the afore mentioned road block, the rest of your piece is grammatically pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
CountryMom:
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-28-16

Your poetic prowess is on display.
Every line, every rhyme is a big hey hey!
The form and structure are whiz bang,
The flow is smooth as silk with a little twang.

The pace is not too fast, nor too slow.
It's just right don't you know.
Grammatically speaking,
there's no mistaking.

Suggestions for improvement,
No one can make a movement.
Cause you've got the fixings,
For a putlizer prize winning mixing.

Write on!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Marilyn:

Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-28-16.

Awesome write!
It's got right!
There is human emotions,
There are new notions.

You cover the gamut of considerations.
Your imagery makes them more than apparitions.
The flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
The pace is not too slow as we do your dance of three.
No suggestions can be made, because personally this is a top shelf item!

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neva:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 12-28-16

Amazing!
Dazing!
Uplifting!
Praising!

The faith in the Lord shines through.
His action upon the earth oh so true.
The emotional tags are impact-ful,
The reader is left with a heart full.

Form is apropos.
Flow is also so.
Pace is not a race,
As the reader takes in the grace.
Grammatically speaking,
Nary a jot nor tittle is leaking.

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Review of Story for Steve  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in the " By Online Authors" section on the right hand side of the screen. Hey that's free exposure for your stuff. Which is always good because some of the finest gems are there, and they might otherwise go unnoticed.

Your's is a gem, to be sure and I'm glad I clicked through to find it. Apparently you were on a quest to write something before 3 P.M. One would wonder how much time you had before 3 P.M.
I like what you wrote. It worked well even with the crossovers from Batman to the latest Star Wars movie. The shifts were not forced at all and that helped keep the flow a smooth trek through the lines.
The pace is slow and steady and sensory filled. The reader could feel emotional tags all along the story line.
Grammatically speaking there are some hiccups along the way but hey you were on a time limit and to see a complete story with an ending promising more, you still earn 5 stars.
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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There is a lot of good in this piece.
You have a good premise. A ghost story that starts with a truth or dare game.
You have a good main character; Jason; who unfortunately is the newest ghost in the house.
You have a good background where you tell the tale of the family that was slaughtered and the killer ending his own life.
The form and structure are adequate.
The flow is somewhat choppy; partly due to the word placement and spelling matters.
The pace is slow and steady on to be sure.

There is some bad in this piece that hampers the progress of the reader. One part is the grammatical matters. I recommend you read back over this and see if you can pick up on any, or run it through a spell checker. One example is found here: "giving off a load creak. Load should be loud. There is an online spell checker as well as one called grammarly that helps you with ways of making your piece read more smoothly.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Found your item in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 12-14-16
The strong beginning is steeped in emotion the reader feels. The even better middle maintains that emotional tug that keeps the reader attuned to your story. The ending leaves the reader wondering what's next and that's what a good story is all about.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and detail filled. The reader is invested in the story by this time and cannot stop.
Grammatically speaking you have a clean piece and in the end the reader wants to know what's next.

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Review of When Autumn Comes  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Brian: A second piece is found in the same NL!
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-14-16

I feel deep seated sorrow.
A loved one has been slain,
your sorrow here is lain.
The reader knows the heart that wrote this.
Thanks to the imagery you wield in this piece.
Flowing smoothly.
Paced at a slow resolute step.
Embellished with an immaculate grammatical outing, your reader can but marvel at the piece you need no alteration to.

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Review of The Marsh (Haiku)  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm always fascinated with the Haiku.
Reading this one gives me a sense of peace.
That's imagery that touches the readers psyche. Well done!
I like the staggered spacing of each stanza,
the way you repeated the right lines.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and senses absorbing.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's and that's a good thing indeed.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Brian:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 12-14-16
It's about love,
that fit's like a glove.
It's about an end,
one to heaven we do send.

The emotional tag, to my senses is remorse.
The imagery transports the reader into the scene.
The form and structure lend a consistency to it all.
The flow is quite smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically speaking you have a flawless outing.
Overall there a sense of rest at hand.

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A love that was strong is coming to an end.


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Review of Prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neva:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 12-14-16

Spectacular.
Awe inspiring.
Marvelous.
Wow!

From stem to stern the acrostic is an inspiring piece on prayer.
The form and structure are suited for this piece.
The prosaic nature is just right.
The flow is like a dance on a newly polished dance floor.
The pace is as slow as a waltz, savoring each sensation as the dance goes on.
There isn't even a hint of a jot nor tittle stepping out of line and that's worth a big ten!
Your mastery of the acrostic makes this reader thankful.

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Review of Moonlight  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Finch:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 12-14-16
What an awesome pair of couplets.
The rhyming in both is top drawer.
This can be sung and that's the truth.
The imagery enables the reader to see, feel, and smell the snow and moonlight beaming down.
The flow is smooth as silk.
The pace is slow as the reader savors the sensory show.
Grammatically your piece is just as solid as the form and structure.
Nary a jot nor tittle is awry and that's worth 5 stars alone, as it helps the readers journey be that much smoother.
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