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Review of When you need me  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mystic Sierra,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your poem, "When You Need Me", for the First People's Review Forum. First, I would like to say that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard any portion that you see fit.

Overall Impression: It is so true that we all need a friend in tough times as well as in good times! I enjoyed reading your poem. The rhyming couplets was a good choice. It was brief and to the point. The rhyme scheme worked well!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I hope that you enjoy the time you spend here at WDC! Since I joined in June of this year, I have become addicted! I have met many wonderful writers and have entered lots of contests! I have found the prompts to be.challenging! If you have not gotten involved yet, you might want to check out the great contests and activities found here.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Vindication  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Kristi, Hello, I am here to review your poem "Vindications" as part of the First People's Tribal Review forum! Please remember that this review is only my opinion. Please use or discard any of its content that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good form! Very creative. It flowed well, and was an interesting form! I enjoyed reading your piece about overcoming xenophobia.

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None. I am not sure what you could name your form....but it is catchy!

I always enjoy reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Regards,
Singing Bird (aka Nani)
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Review of Dare To Be  
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Ken!

As the mother of two daughters, I can really appreciate your lovely words! You are quite right, though. When they are young, we plant seeds, that we pray will come to fruition when they are grown...and, we hope that any weeds that we may have sown, will not take root. (lol).

Thank you, for sharing this piece. And, as always, please continue to write on!!!


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With love in Christ,
Dianne
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Review of Dark Lullaby  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Harvey,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Dark Lullaby", as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your free-form style is full of great imagery. It tells a tale of sadness and dismay. I hope that you do not write this from experience.

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Vixen Sykerd,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your poem, "My zip won't do up" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you may use or disregard any portion of it that you choose.

Overall Impression: What a dilemma! It is a part of Murphy's Law that if anything can go wrong, it will! *Smile* I certainly hope the young lady in the poem got her problem resolved before the job interview. It was a light hearted free-verse poem about an event that can be extremely stressful!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Campfire Creation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Duane Spanel, Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Campfire Creation", as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your free-form style is full of great imagery. I can almost smell the smoke and feel the warmth of the campfire! Good job!

Suggestions: Please don't think I am being critical, but in the last line of the first stanza, there is a "typo" - "enchanting" is misspelled. I often have trouble such as this, when I am typing on my laptop! *Smile*

I hope that you enjoy the time you spend here at WDC! Since I joined in June of this year, I have become addicted! I have met many wonderful writers and have entered lots of contests! I have found the prompts to be challenging! If you have not gotten involved yet, you might want to check out the great contests and activities found here.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Forevermore  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear S. Lucas Lloyd, Hello! I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece "Forevermore" as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Reviews. Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

First, I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

Overall Impression: This is a free-verse poem that flows smoothly.

Suggestions: Please don't think this as critical. Check your usage of the word "confine" in lines 16 & 17. Did you mean to use the word "confide"? I think it would possibly flow better if you used "confide". (But, that is only my opinion.)*Smile*

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!


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Review of Season Opener  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Qwestion Evrythng, Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece, "Season Opener" for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group! Please remember that this review is my opinion only. Please use or discard it as you see fit.

Overall Impression: A very humorous look at watching your favorite team and being a fan even when they lose! Good job!

Errors:I noticed no grammatical nor spelling errors.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! As always, please continue to "write on"!!

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In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your poem as part of the First People's Group.
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Thank you for sharing your work with all of us here at WDC!

Please remember, the content of this review is only my opinion. I am by no means an expert! Please use any of it that you feel has worth and discard the rest!

Overall Impression:I enjoyed reading your poem! Owls appear to be such pompous and wise old birds! You have caught their "personality" perfectly!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None. It is great like it is! The imagery is wonderful!

It is pleasure to review your work! And, please WRITE ON! *Pumpkin*
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Review of Whispers of Love  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Rosie! I am here with a review for the First People's Group!
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Thank you for sharing your work with all of us here at WDC!

Please remember, the content of this review is only my opinion. I am by no means an expert! Please use any of it that you feel has worth and discard the rest!

Overall Impression: A lovely and emotionally charged write! Your words create beautiful imagery.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: I wouldn't change a thing!

As always, it is pleasure to review your work! And, please WRITE ON!*Pumpkin*
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In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Oldwarrior! I am reviewing your poem as part of the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, I am not an expert! The words of this review are my opinion. Please use anything that you feel is of worth, and discard the rest!

Overall impression: Chilling! Great imagery! Good ending!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions for Improvement: I wouldn't change a thing! It is great just as it is!

Thank you for sharing your work with all of us here at WDC! I enjoy reading your poetry! Please keep on sharing with us!

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Best regards,

Dianne
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Review of A Child  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Chrisna, This review is in connection with the First People's Group. Let me begin by saying that I am not an expert, by any means. This review is solely my opinion as a reader on this site.

Overall impression: I enjoyed reading your poem about children! I have six grandchildren that I love dearly, and could relate to the words of your poem!

Errors in Grammar/Spelling: None noticed.

Areas for Improvement: No suggestions.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us here at WDC! Please let me encourage you to "write on"!

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Review of One's Purpose?  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I am reviewing as part of the First People's Group! First let me say that I am not an expert, by any means, and this review is only my opinion. Please feel free to use any part of it as you choose.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed reading your poem. I found it to contain some real life truths.

Grammar/Spelling: I noticed no errors.

My only observation is that some reviewers on this site, might comment on the fact that you capitalize each line. It is my personal preference to do so, but I have found that some of the reviewers at WDC don't like that style, and think that capitalization should only be used at the beginning of a sentence.

My favorite part was the second stanza! Some people really don't want to accept their calling in life. How true!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us at WDC! Please let me encourage you to "write on"!

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for entry "First Kiss" 
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Feather Duster, I am reviewing this as part of the First People's Group. I enjoyed reading your piece. It is very reminiscent of my teen years, when I fell in love for the first time! I thought the poem to be very well-written. I saw no errors in spelling nor in grammar. I can not offer any suggestions for improvement. Thank you for sharing a lovely trip back in time!
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Dianne
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In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, SummerLyn! I am reviewing this in connection with the First People's Group. This was a concise, well-written poem about the life cycle of sunflowers! I think you captured this all too short span of such a beautiful flower quite well. I saw no noticeable errors in spelling nor grammar. Thank you for sharing!
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Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cute poem! Well written. Perfect for children learning the fundaments of letters! Good job! Had a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I certainly enjoyed reading it, and I know that children would enjoy it as well! I enjoy writing within this genre, too.
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Review of Waves  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the sea, and ever thing about it! And, I am always happy when I am near it! This was a well written poem, with a good rhyme scheme. I enjoyed reading it. Your imagery was very thought provoking. Good job! I hope that you will continue to "write on"!
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Review of A Wrestler  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My husband was on the wrestling team, a lifetime ago, when he was in high school. I can see him standing there with similar thoughts racing through his head before, during and after the match. Good job. I thought it was a well-written poem. Please continue to "write on"!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think it is a catchy beginning. I will be very interested to see how it develops! I felt it was well written, with an excellent flow. It is definitely a beginning that would encourage me to read more. I am the type of reader whos interest MUST be captured in the first few paragraphs, or I usually don't finish the read! Please continue to "write on". And, let me know when you get more of this story formed!
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Review of My strength  
Rated: E | (4.0)
It sounds as though you have experienced the emotions expressed in this poem. Is so, I am truly sorry that you have encountered such hurtful experiences! I thought you used a good choice of words to make the reader empathize with the emotions that you felt. Overall, a good poem in my opinion. Please continue to "write on".
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Review of How Amazing!  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is always amazing to be in God's presence! Thank you for your beautiful poem! I thought it to be well written. It expressed such wonderful facts, too. It shares many things that I, too, feel. Like the words of the song that we sing, "He's still working on me" too! Please keep writing! I share your enthusiasm for this genre, and love to see others pass on the wonderfully amazing news of our God!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good job, Scott! This is a difficult form to master, but I think you did a great job. I enjoyed reading your "100 word" story. I found no repeats in the words. And, I think that all of us who write are constantly striving for your closing sentence! Please continue to "write on"!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem, and I feel that others will enjoy it as well. It is well written and would appeal to children if placed into a collection of stories/poems for them. Although I am new to this site, I am certainly amazed at the talent that abounds. Please keep sharing your writing with everyone.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting form, and one with which I am not familiar! I enjoyed it! Although I am new to this site, I can certainly see why it is an "Award Winner", It is brief, concise and to the point! And it is accurate as well. Thank you for sharing it.
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