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Review of Whispering Wishes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as part of the Simply Positive Group's Review Forum. Please remember that I am no expert in reviewing. The views that I share are only the humble opinion of an avid reader here on WDC. I hope that you will use any part of this review that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your thoughts resonate! Your "whispering wishes" do bring many emotions to your existence, and color your thoughts and dreams. The flow was very good, and your imagery painted lovely pictures. Thanks for sharing your talent with those of us at WDC.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!

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Review of The Invisible Man  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Fyn,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as part of the Simply Positive Group's Reviewing Forum. Please remember that I am no expert in reviewing. The views that I share are only my humble opinion as a reader here at WDC. Please accept them as such, and use whatever you may find helpful.

Overall Impression: I thought this to be a very well-written short story. Your character development was very real feeling. The piece flowed well, and your use of language was a boon to the story. The ending gave wonderful and touching closure for the main character. Good job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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503
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Morgan Adam,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed this story as much as I did the other in this group of medieval tales for children. It flowed smoothly and was concise (which is always a plus when reading to children). It almost had the feeling of a "fairy tale". I know that children will enjoy reading this for themselves or having someone to read it to them!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of The Review Game  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear PLScholl,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This was such a cute story! I don't know whether it was true or not, but it certainly grabbed my attention with it's real life details and dialogue. Thank you for sharing!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Cloud filled Sky  
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear DRHF,

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Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your poem "Love Rose" as part of our Rising Star Member to Member Review. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Beautiful imagery. Your stanzas flowed smoothly and the rhyming element was good.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: I know of nothing that would improve it!

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future!
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506
Review of Equilibrium  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ken,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I always enjoy reading your work. This one is no exception! Your well-chosen words flow smoothly. The imagery is wonderful. Good job! Congratulations on winning second place in the contest for this remarkable entry!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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507
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear chinesegirllovesrice,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: It is such a true statement that things change. No matter what our hopes and dreams may be, it doesn't always work out the way that we had planned for it to do! You put these thoughts into words. Your short story really demonstrated a lot of emotion.


Errors:I noticed no errors.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Desire's Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Summer Day,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: You paint a vivid picture of someone who is having to say "goodbye" although it is a difficult thing to do. Isn't that always true at the end of a relationship. It is hard to say goodbye.

Suggestions:Let me first say, that by no means am I an expert on reviewing. I am just a reader here at WDC that enjoys visiting the ports of the other writers. Anything that I might suggest, is only my humble opinion. I think that you poem would benefit from some breaks between stanzas giving the reader a pause between thoughts that you are conveying. I also think that you might consider some punctuation for the same reason. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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509
Review of Take Off  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear DJ Young,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I have had some of these same feelings.....I am not overly fond of flying! Good job with your descriptions. I could really empathize with your character.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of The Great Game  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Chesschamp,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I thought this was a nice short story about children at play on a hot summer afternoon. I felt that you did a good job with character development. I could almost "see" them as they played together.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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511
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sherri,

This is the third review in the series for the Simply Positive Group's January Challenge. I must admit, this one is a particular favorite of mine! Thank you for sharing it and also for all of the wonderful things that you do for all of us here on this site!

Overall Impression: What a wonderful poem telling of the Christ child's birth, life and death. Indeed the greatest gift that we all can freely receive! Not only is the poetry perfection, but the message is as well.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of THE DARK  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sherri,

This is the second in the series of reviews for the January Challenge for the Simply Positive Group. It is a pleasure to read and review your work!

Overall Impression: OOOOOOOOO! Spooky! A wonderfully scary piece for Halloween. Again, the rhyme scheme is great and the flow perfect! This is a piece sure to make children wary of the "dangers" lurking out there on this night!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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513
Review of Dear God  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Wyn,

This is the third in the series of reviews that I have performed for the Simply Positive Group Challenge for January. Please remember that these are only my opinions. I have truly enjoyed the time that I have spent reading and visiting in your port.

Overall Impression: I think we all pray for a sign at times. Especially when things are going downhill. Thank you for putting this into words. This was concise and filled with emotion.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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514
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Daizy,

This is your third review in the series for the Simply Positive Group Challenge for January. Please remember that this review is my humble opinion only. Please use or discard anything that you see fit.

Overall Impression: I loved reading this piece! The words flowed from my mouth like silk. Not only did they ring true, they were so lovely. The poetic form and rhyme scheme were truly a "masterpiece". Thank you for sharing it!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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515
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Daizy,

This is the second in a series of reviews for the Simply Positive Group Challenge for January. Please remember that these reviews are my humble opinion only. I am certainly no expert in this field. Please use or discard anything that you see fit.

Overall Impression: This is a brief, but very profound piece! That still small voice is always there, if we only stop to listen. And, yes, He does tell us often, and in many different ways that He loves us. Thank you for the lovely reminder. The poem flowed beautifully from beginning to end. The rhyme scheme was excellent.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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516
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group Challenge for January. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Such a beautiful piece! It made me smile knowing that you share the same feelings toward our Lord and Savior that I do. The poem flowed well and your rhyme scheme was excellent! Your descriptive words painted brilliant pictures in my mind.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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517
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear WhoMe,

Nani again...back with your third review for the Simply Positive Group Challenge for January.

Overall Impression: A beautiful piece about my favorite thing....the sea! I truly enjoyed reading and reviewing your haiku. Brief and to the point, it paints a glorious picture in a few concise words. The sea meets the sun to begin a new day!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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I have truly enjoyed visiting in your port and reading your poetry!
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518
Review of Bathtub Haven  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear WhoMe,

Hello, it's Nani again back with another review for the Simply Positive Review Group Challenge. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good flow and rhythm! Poor puppy. Sounds like he needs puppy tranquilizers. This was a cute piece, even if it was written at the expense of a frazzled pup!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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519
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Whome,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group Challenge--Reviewing our Leaders. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: If only we all would take a good look at our lives and decide to make the changes needed, the world would be such a better place! This is a beautiful poem! It flows well and the rhyme scheme is in perfect sync! It was a joy to read. Thank you, for sharing your talent with all of us here.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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520
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lew,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please keep in mind that this review is my opinion only. You can use or discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Hind sight is almost always 20/20! This is what your piece brings to mind. I thought it was an insightful piece about regret. The poem flowed well and told a good story in only a few short lines.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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521
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear SamIAm,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewer's Group. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This is a lovely short story. Your imagery is quite good painting lovely mental pictures as one reads the story of a father and daughter sharing time together on a crisp autumn afternoon.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Rhumour,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewer's Group. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I guess I am a supreme optimist in the human race! I think that mankind will overcome avarice. Thank you for sharing your point of view and your hopes that this will be accomplished in this calendar year. Your poem flowed well, and your aabb rhyme scheme continued throughout the piece.

Errors:The only concern that I had was in stanza 4 line 2. You wrote "leaving nowt but dust in their hasty wake". Did you mean to use the word "naught"?

Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Review of I'm So Proud  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear MySharona,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewer's Group. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A beautiful free-verse tribute to your friend. The stanzas flow well. The content is lovely and inspirational.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lexi,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A sad event retold in the eyes of an eight year old child! Children can be so resourceful and resilient. Your story flowed good and was believable from the viewpoint of a child.

Errors:There were some minor errors with verb tense throughout the piece. You might want to consider having someone who is knowledgeable in this area to proof your story. Since I am not an expert reviewer, I would hate to make suggestions that might not be correct.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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525
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Morgan,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I found this to be a charming story especially for young children. It kept my interest from beginning to end. The story line flowed well with language that young children could follow. There was not an excessive amount of violence and gruesome detail. (Thank you for that!) I hope that you choose to pursue writing more of these stories.

Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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