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Review of City of Death  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
for the city of death
finding yourself there,

an unfamiliar event
all movement gone
lights still aglow.

Now fading away
a bat out of Hades
I cried for mercy,

just came to tell
hopefulness now
by our whitemorn,

the fine poet of note
for embe to review -
Simply Positive Review.

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502
Review of Chlorine  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the waters of my soul
sometimes it all hurts,
checks chlorine levels
my skin is turning blue
pills will render me new.

By our fine poet of note
sereading reviewed here
by embe in this scenery,
maintained consciousness
reading I see now, oh how
the five bright stars below.

Simply Positive Review.
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503
Review of The Apology  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this sad poem of woes
I've been away for awhile
because of my pride,
no apology within
now lying dead
angry inside.
My vision
blurred
in a grave,
silence fled
a speeding car
from HuntersMoon,
our fine poet of note
aching heart with dread
in a simply positive review.


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504
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
i'm too lazy to work today,
my free money for nothing
payment by the Government.

Why so jealous and irritated
maybe you are frustrated,
because of work so hard
supporting this lifestyle.

Your two jobs to get by
for that new quality of life,
by embe for Missnikkidear
poet of note for lazy people.

Simply Positive Review.
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505
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time by embe
I found this new poet today
our dear Rosslie Del Valle,
all alone in her room
staying at home
wondering why.
I'm not sleepy
in this moment
nightmare comes.
Am I a worthy poet
to share my dreams?
Yes the answer by embe
one tiny error a double space
in the forth line the first stanza.

Simply Positive Review.
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506
Review of My Love For You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time
riding to your ranch
time stands still here,

like it never existed
waiting there for you
in my daily prayer.

The dreams for you
by embe to review
our KuriosCowboy,

for this lovely poem
with a tiny mistake,
that should be they.

Simply Positive Review.
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507
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
with these questions
by our poet of note,

a long ago member
the purest of hearts
with a lovely poem.

For embe to review
our new Kirky-Kirk
my welcome to you,

my brother in Christ
that holds true for life
if you follow the light.

Simply Positive Review.
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508
Review of Gentle View  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
trying to make sense
with my writing format,

I found a friend for life
embe with this review
for our fine poet Dimo.

From God's window
near Shaka's reign
created the king,

like our Da Vinci
that turns heads
in this scenery -

Simply Positive Review.
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509
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
searching for silence
the voice shouting,

this harsh reminder
to stand my ground
the crowded place.

Of the human race
by Holly Anderson
our fine poet of note,

to quell the voices
for embe in a review
lovely for these stars.

Simply Positive Review.
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510
Review of Stuck...  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
in my little yellow car
i'm stuck in the traffic,

unable to panic today
late again for my boss
serves him right in time.

Hiding in this snow pile
secretly smiling again
with his straining eyes,

embe reviewing lovely
for our fine poet of note
my dear Princess Zelda.

Simply Positive Review.
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511
Review of Iniquity  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a sad moment in time
as we go about our day
walking away ashamed,

why so homeless there
on this lonely sidewalk
your thin worn blanked,

without a family to care
sitting by the fireplace
with drinks and laughter.

soulquest your savior
reviewed here by embe
so sad a lovely poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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512
Review of Mansion  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
background of love
betrayal and death,
by our poet today
in this mansion
pain is felt in lies.

His eyes very dark
and his face is pale
by our Linda Susan,
reviewed by embe
with my comments.

silawet - should be - silhouette
ly - should be - lie
shes - should be - she's

My rating includes these changes for you,
and don't let it get you down.
We all make mistakes sometimes.
Embe, your friend for life.

Simply Positive Review.
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513
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
sealed with this kiss
by Mickey Pig Knuckles,
one day you have so many
and the next they are all gone.
Beneath the sun on another day
touched by your glowing stare
deep in thoughts so lovely,
for embe to review today
penned by our fine poet.

Simply Positive Review.
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514
Review of Last Gasp  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time
here is the meaning
for our mother earth.

I cry out to her now
a feeling of sorrows
on this lonely planet,

remaining the same
calling out for help
from dear jimminy.

Our fine poet of note
telling those things
searching for purity,

in this lovely poem
reviewed by embe
seeing the meaning.

Paper Doll Gang Review.





I hoped to convey: a person who was searching for purity was calling out to (Mother Earth) to wipe the human race from the face of the planet because of the lack of purity. The selfishness comes from keeping these feelings bottled up rather than sharing these feelings and giving others a chance to improve




I call out to our mother
To take away our pain
I cry out to her
Telling those things
Things that I could tell
Not to another
And remain still
The same





Here is the meaning


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515
Review of The Joker  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a loving moment in time to write
synopsis of times with my daughter,
by our writer of note on this page.

The Joker by lovely Wendyd,
I have a five year old daughter
always in trouble at school.

I wish she were grown already
thankful for the little problems,
that I enjoy every little moment.

For embe to review in a poem,
lovely the scenery of a family
in moments the Lord gives me.

"Paper Doll Gang Review"




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516
Review of Two Came Walking  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
dear Scowel writing a line
two came walking today,

crying who will review me
in my fine lyrical novelty
heavily steeped a spiritual.

Or Seven Sisters Lucent
with embe in this scenery
I saw them in movement,

there declared by purpose
finally with my thoughts
two now walked this Way!"

Paper Doll Gang Review.


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517
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
just wait and you will see,
this is a school assignment
by Soupman our poet of note.

The lovely day of paradise here
will you be there to see it there
the glorious place in this review,

by embe where beauty abounds
in a holiday scene using poetry
for a Simply Positive Review.
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518
Review of Progress  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
green the scene
from an eye,

by Don Two
with a fine poem
for embe to review.

With these thoughts
for you with my poem
about the forest trees -

Is this magical realism trees hiding in my mind

walking and talking to me on the television news,

too afraid to wonder why a tree would listen to me

and tell their sad story in this poem of shame today.

The lawyer signing a new contract for deforestation

with a million dollar bribe for the logging company,

camped on the river with barges waiting there

wondering why the trees are whispering,

we were born along this river bed

in the depths of the earth.

Slowly rising in the morning sun

that appears where man has never been,

listening for the rain splashing down from heaven

until that fatal day when disaster appeared suddenly.

Monstrous mechanical ants rumbling through the land

hacking down our trunks one by one in agony, fast falling

stripping our branches of leaves now scattered in the wind.

To my shame, like puppets in a row floating together out to sea,

on ships sailing to other lands with slicing machines into chipboard,

dry like this merciless heat in the barren desert where nothing grows.

Now all that you can see are the memories of the river weeping,

for skeletons of fish and fowl in the puddles all around me.

Sometimes when the moon shines, I feel the dampness

of the cold night air with frozen moisture on my bark,

crumbling cast into their dying timber, my epitaph

only man knows how to destroy my soul,

the owner of a fragile heart.

I could feel love

pain and compassion

in a row of Coniferous trees.

Saplings rising from the bare ground;

poor shy Magnolia gently crying away

while comforting our little trailing Rubina,

hiding to glance toward sister Silky Camelia,

out west at the new home of California Laurell.

Every morning, he scans pages of new burials

sitting with the hymns of destruction on his lips,

searching to soften my heart once more in illusion,

boundaries of their world keep collapsing in my mind.

O heartless men, I promise to revenge Nature in your trap!

Simply Positive Review
in honor of Dannigan
our poet supreme.
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519
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time long ago now
of a musician on stage performing
for our Octoberskelecountry here,
a concert observation by embe
for our fine poet of note today
everything is quiet and calm
these lights fade to black.
Returning on the stage
the singer and his band
take their final bow today,
singing to the rhythm lovely
for the final beats and lyrics
on a page Rising Star Review.
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520
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
Vanja on my mind
from Denmark now,

the fine poet of note
there with my eyes
for this lovely review.

We celebrate today
red hair a solar ray
she lingered there,

way out in the sea
being dear Hamilton
with her good friends.

Simply Positive Review.
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521
Review of Shoreline  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
into the ocean today
he carried me away,

crying my sadness
by our dear Jessica
the fine poet of note.

Reviewed by embe
lovely the scenery
on this shoreline,

of land and sea
with coolness
from a breeze,

waves breaking
very close to me
I'm proud of you.

Simply Positive Review.
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522
Review of Love..sort of  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
lilies he thought,
yes if pretty
for Amy
in a sheet.
Now draped
for his girlfriend
laid her body down,
the heavy rain
in the soil.
For Hope
in this tale
a poet of note,
very descriptive
in a moment in time.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe for a scary scene.
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523
Review of Lento Poem  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a lovely scene of a red rose
this image in my mind today
to review our Cherokee Rose.

Dew adorns the seedlings
in days of summer sun
in this fine review.

The lento poem
written lovely here
for embe to review.

Our paper doll gang
rockin reviewer's
group.


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524
Review of Choose Happy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
choose by AbbyReed
the new Lento creation
for a fine poet of note.

Confirmed by embe
in a lovely review
pleasing the eye
to be crowned.

There on this page
the wondrous scene
it’s more than a feeling.

Paper Doll Gang Rockin
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525
Review of My Items  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the purple ribbon,
my items here
for embe.
A lovely review
Mine. Mine Mine
for our StoryMaster.
Jack and Phoebe
lovely on a page
my iPhone,
nothing but
a space holder.
Useful Software
in a moment in time

Simply Positive Review
for you to view today.
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