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Review of The Window  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time
the sorry lady sits alone,
a bay window by the door
her daydreaming this day,
alone and without worry
her words copied here,
by embe in this review
for our poet of note.

Timothy Sweden.
lost in the war
six years ago,
now returning
signing to write,
as a fine member
of our writing. com
Simply Positive Review
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602
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
when I was a child,
I learned so much
to be a writer of note.

Weirdone in words
for embe to review,
learning about God
the fine story in time.

Many are wonderful
without an awardicon,
embe thanking you
for your fine portfolio.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment to guess why
and await a special guest,
to our poet of note, Magoo
a writer of children stories,
being reviewed by embe
knowing this writer of note.

To be the best that I know
with cookies warmly baked,
jelly doughnuts on the side
that stuffed that chubby face,
the night will soon be here
for a Simply Positive Review.
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604
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
Mississippi 1969,
racial injustice
is still alive,
by WinnieKay.

The writer of note
reviewed by embe,
only the lonely poet
trying to understand
writing short stories.

Herewith my poem
about Mississippi,
maybe in a story
next time around
in a new contest.



“Stolen Heritage”

On a lonely night in Mississippi
the river of blues on my mind.
I woke the ragged black man
waiting the train to nowhere
with sad words in a song.

Capturing slaves of old
hidden on timber ships
sailing away from Africa.
Drumbeats their farewell
heading for slavery to die,

the white man’s puppets
beaten strung to this tree,
our voices praised to God
mercy songs on our knees
with angels singing hymns.

On this heavenly railroad
no more tears to cry why
our heritage stolen there,
lazy black nigger music
dancing in cotton fields.

Oh! Mississippi Delta
such fields that holler
with the memories,
to curse the owner
drunk on whiskey,

with his raping
the baby aborted
silence for a moment,
buried in a lonely grave
her mother singing a lullaby.

When we rise in the morning
the dew drops on the grass,
her dainty feet the memory
a grassy glade for a grave,
we wake your new life.


Note!
The first six stanzas represent a saw blade,
sharp like the terror for the black folk.
The last stanza to wake life anew.

Simply Positive Review,
for WinnieKay.
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605
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Leonkie the brave with words of compassion,
for the curse of the white man in South Africa.

This review in my poem for the black folk
in Mississippi is attached in sympathy.

"Stolen Heritage"

On a lonely night in Mississippi
the river of blues on my mind.
I woke the ragged black man
waiting the train to nowhere
with sad words in a song.

Capturing slaves of old
hidden on timber ships
sailing away from Africa.
Drumbeats their farewell
heading for slavery to die,

the white man’s puppets
beaten strung to this tree,
our voices praised to God
mercy songs on our knees
with angels singing hymns.

On this heavenly railroad
no more tears to cry why
our heritage stolen there,
lazy black nigger music
dancing in cotton fields.

Oh! Mississippi Delta
such fields that holler
with the memories,
to curse the owner
drunk on whiskey,

with his raping
the baby aborted
silence for a moment,
buried in a lonely grave
her mother singing a lullaby.

When we rise in the morning
the dew drops on the grass,
her dainty feet the memory
a grassy glade for a grave,
we wake your new life.


Note!
The first six stanzas represent a saw blade,
sharp like the terror for the black folk.

The last stanza to wake life anew.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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606
Review of Black on White  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of deep thought
these angels in my ears,
silent for twenty years
to find a voice inside,
letters on a page
like a photo.
Black the image
a hint of dark secrets,
tell me all about it now
by our poet of note Aundria_k
reviewed lovely by embe here -

Simply Positive Review.
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607
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of winter
about the seasons,
this villanelle
by amp21a.

A poet of note
in the scent of pine,
a parasitic vine
entwined.

The face a map
out of place,
your turn in line
reviewed by embe.

Terror the scene
hidden away
from grace,
a tree crying tears.

Simply Positive Review.
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608
Review of The Secret  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the secret Good!
Good, good now
reading a poem
by our poet of note,
W.D.Wilcox, maybe
billwilcoxs's for embe
in this review, The Secret.

Concealed in my thoughts
wonderful accomplishment,
a place of surprise and anger
with eyes covering my face,
the secret slips from me
turned my back on grief.

One suggestion here,
move Copyright away
from the ending.

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609
Review of Peaches  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
with a chair tipping lazily,
a farmer sleeps to dream
a gravel stone waking him,
flies buzzing round his head
beneath the gleaming sun.

His peaches are bruised
he needs to sell them,
to this Sunday driver
the fine poet of note
tasting sweetness,
lovely Katwoman.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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610
Review of HIDDEN MEANINGS  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
In a moment in time
for Silver Hayes a learner,
please give me the feedback
hidden meanings in deep poetry?

Embe on a page to review today.

Depressing meanings to reply,
once upon a death okay
if in a new meaning,
is well described.

Try some of these suggestions -
Only capitalize the first lines.
Punctuation needed
with even stanzas.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Billion Cries  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment of sadness
a heart can never last,
broken in feeling
the desperation
within this drama,
will it ever let go of me.

Hearing the billion cries
by embe in the review,
for our newbie lovely
the poet krysacebedo,
seeing stars on a page.

One suggestion to edit -
Move copyright sentence
three spaces further down,
away from the poem ending.

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612
Review of Thanks God!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
thanks to God to pray
184,000 sec/day to say,

you have given so much
I have returned so little
I could give it all back,

by A*Mourning*Faith
our poet of note today
reviewed by embe.

My thanks my praise
your lovely wording
this gift bestowed -

Simply Positive Review.
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613
Review of Sandcastles  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
rebuilding sandcastles,
in history remembered
so far and few between,

too far out to see is fine
cautiously but it is futile,
there within the storms
many waves and tides,

by mindlesslyrhyming
our fine poet of note,
reviewed lovely here
be embe in the scene -

Simply Positive Review.
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614
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the old moment in time
by embe meeting lovely Lisa
give me hope for tomorrow.

She was our fine poet of note
but today a Preferred Author
in a race to be a Yellow Case.

Come first for embe to cheer
the good news in tears of joy
God bless you a kind friend.

Simply Positive Review.
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615
Review of Hard Sell  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
in a moment of time
It's what they all say,
with only a few stars
lonely on your page.

Our WritingInMotion
a fine poet unique,
for embe to review
the poem Hard Sell.

Build up the wall
paint the smile,
with these stars
shining brightly.....

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Review of The Mirror  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
the mirror reflecting,
wondering why
in a thought,
too afraid
to sing.

By Shawlyn
how I see you
see yourself here,
by embe in a review
for our dear poet of note.

The image pictured now
so lovely on the wall,
being a shadow
a background,
hidden away
for seeing -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The day you left  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment of sadness
the day you left the pastures
to lie in my arms to love you.

Wrapped around memories
this world is so cruel today,
it is not the beautiful place
for a beloved horse's death.

Our poet of note Savannah
so angry sobbing, terrified
my world collapsing mute.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe for your sadness.
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Review of Violet Roses  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment of lonely thoughts,
countless times I see death arise
in the bright sunshine rising anew,
the one and only that comforts me
in a poem by a poet of note today.

Zander darvathian the two in one
names, here for embe to review,
bring me to my solitude forever
seeing the violet roses fading,
only the petals beckoning.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Clipart  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Native in green,
a tiger to stare
welcome to earth,

saved this day
then set apart
by the fire light.

Now in his palm
praying for troops
why not stay awhile,

in the lighthouse
with God's hands
reaching out to care.

The waves obeying
the real men here
that worship Jesus,

by our poet of note
in his fine clip art,
reviewed by embe.

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620
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of concern
even God knows that,
the more you love
may you give
in honesty,
and truth
to believe
by Tim Chiu
our poet of note.
Reviewed by embe,
in the lives we touch
for our young children,
the sanctity of innocence.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Loving Grief (4)  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of deep despair
by our writer of note, Katy
for her son Bennett,
grief at the door
embraced her.
Waking a thought
she managed a smile,
he's in that better place
and speaking of God's will.

Reviewed by embe now
in sympathy to say,
my condolence
in a prayer
for this vision,
his home in heaven
dancing with the angels,
the greatest moment alive.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The Lie  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

In the magical moment of believing by a child,
Santa Claus with presents every Christmas Eve,
you need CeruleanSon to explain the reason,
why his son stopped believing in a Santa Claus.
"Well I gave him another hug to love him dearly,
Santa Claus came back to life when I was so ill."

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Poetry & Prose  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
If you need to read Poetry & Prose
five stars twinkling on a page,
you need to find our Chapel
with a first name Shannon,
the poet of note lovely.
I'm no Dickinson
I will stick to the rules
for embe to review anyway,
these eight awardicons here
come what may on this new day.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Blessed  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Welcome to Anna with her first short fiction story,
reviewed by embe wondering why the 2 stars
lonely on a page for the entry of -
"Blessed"
My suggestion to use paragraphs
creating an even flow of sentences,
easy to read and understand the story.

My rating bases as it is - 3.5 Stars
If edited, please advise and I will re-rate it.

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Review of Bed of Roses  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of sadness
angels let you sleep
in a bed of roses
by Whiskurz.
Our poet of note
the way you were
with your presence,
lovely in the sunshine
for embe with this review.

One suggestion here,
move the ending down
away from Copyright line.

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