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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the theme here!!! I'm using this in this week's Poetry newsletter, even though it isn't poetry, because this is WRITTEN POETICALLY!
~FYN
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Review of Your Touch  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is great!!!

I do think (?) you meant 'thumbing' in the line: could no longer feel the thunbimg of footsteps approach me

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The echo got me! That and:The very pieces of my existence strewn all around to show
that perhaps they can only be pieces in the end


This line is particularly good!


I echo further and further ahead only to shout at my reflection

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter.

Great lines:No yoke - bad temper explodes - your (torn) wonderhood -
your starcourse - step choice yours

and this

~*we completely fail to realize*~- *~it is just one big karmamic illusion.~* ~Real only to the beings~ ~*which believe it so thoroughly,*~.. ~it becomes their only reality~... €and so they end up living a mazed 3rd eye projection life€... instead of their own active lives.

The asterisks were a tad confusing, but all in all, I found this a great almost 'stream of consciousness' piece!

~fyn
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Review of The Missed Call  
Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OOOPS! Good point with the 'crying wolf' analogy. Wonder if Sis learned anything from the episode? I had a big brother. I get it!
I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter even though it isn't poetry! ~fyn
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Review of The Devil  
Review by fyn
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh my! This was really good!!! Great twist! And you nailed the characterization! Well done!


Using it in my For Authors Newsletter this week! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know the feelings well! I rather like the way you write as well. Any of your work out in the world where one can find it?

Using this piece in my For Authors Newsletter this week!!! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This -- this is what it is all about!!!

Take up the fluency of ink
And bring to life whatever
Is in your own being

I'm using this in this week's For Authirs Newsletter ... it fits!!!
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This --- n whispered confessions under moonlit skies,
She bared her scars, her soul laid bare,
He penned her tales with tear-stained eyes,
Their love a fragile, forbidden affair.

An encapsulation of love and just a tiny part of a very finely crafted poem!

I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter!~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is super and perfect for my Poetry Newsletter this week!

Were you in a place where you could see yesterday's?~ fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Perect for this week's Poetry Newsletter! As you'll see...I experienced something quite similar! !fyn
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Review of Ellipses Eclipsed  
Review by fyn
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh! I needed a good giggle midst doing three things at once! I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love history in poetry!!! I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter.~fyn
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Review of Eclipse  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ohhh...this is really good! Great angle on it! Setting the table for eternity--excellent image. I'm using this in my poetry newsletter this week. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my gosh!!! So, so, SO good!!!

THis:
Game pieces sliding on concrete tables,
re-cementing checkered lives
with silver-white tactics,
cantankerous grins,
and hierarchy's strategy.

Brilliant on numerous levels! Well done!!!

Using this in this week's poetry newsy! ~fyn
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Review of Layers  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes ... on a plethora of levels! (pun intended!)

This! He knew it would, but he had to hold on
People needed him to hold on
Some people are too important to let go

Using this in this weeks poetry newsletter ~fyn
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Review of Shed No Tears  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Of course you'd have something that works for this week's Poetry Newsletter!!! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good layering (of a different sort than is on the surface of this poem! Well done!

Curious, did you mean 'thee' or 'the' in THEE me scares me

I'm using this in my Poetry Newsletter this week. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ohhhh!!! Got such a kick out of this!!! Going to send it to DRSmith as he'll get a kick out of it as well!!! ~fyn
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Review of The Letter  
Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good one! Using this in this week's Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Reality of Words.  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Using this in this week's Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was sweet. Hopefully your love loves you right back!!!


The last two stanzas especially stood out! Well crafted!

I'm using this piece in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
And it so, so does, indeed!

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is much truth entangled within the poem. I especially liked this verse:

In the tapestry of love, threads of pain,
A complex weave, a soul's refrain.
Yet within the agony, a beauty lies,
A love that endures, though tears fill eyes.

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my... *sits here laughing!* It's perfect for my newsletter this week. So giving you a heads up should you want to delete the gp reward! LOL. Poetry for Dummies...just too, too funny!~fyn
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