This was a great folder as well! You did a great job writing these poems. I hope that you will make more attempts at writing romance. I very much enjoyed reading your first attempts at romance and erotica! Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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This is a great folder full of beautiful poems on the environment and nature. It was a pleasure reading all of these great poems! You did a wonderful job on these! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a really cute poem. It had really excellent rhythm and flow. You did a great job rhyming the sentences together. I didn't find any misspelled words or other mistakes. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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I enjoyed reading about your cat! I had a lot of fun reading these. I can't wait to read more about your cat. You did a great job with these. What does your cat look like? Keep writing!
Gemini
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This was a very nice folder with the childrens poems in it. I hope that you will write more childrens poems in the future. You are doing a great job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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You have quite a nice collection of holiday poems in here. And also a huge variety as well! I look forward to reading the rest of your poetry! Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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It looks like you have a nice collection going on here. You did a great job with these. I am having a lot of fun reading your poetry folder. Take care! Keep writing!
Gemini
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I think the fact that you were able to write two palindromes is amazing. I only had the patience to write one! You did a great job on both of these! I noticed that I already rated the one that you entered for the try this contest. That happened with one of the other poems in here too. Keep writing!
Gemini
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You seem to be working on a great collection of acrostics! Let me know when you write more acrostics. Those are one of my favorite forms to read and write. I hope to see more acrostics! Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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This was a great folder of contest poetry. I enjoyed reading every single poem in here. Tell me, did you ever win anything for any of these poems that you wrote?
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This was an interesting folder. I assume that you are planning on adding more to it since you made a folder for them. I hope to see more free form haiku from you in the future. Keep writing!
Gemini
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Awwww! This is such a sad poem. It was a well written piece of poetry. It was written with a lot of heartfelt emotion. This is so beautiful. Did this happen to you? Or is this something that you wrote? Either way, this was a very moving and touching poem. Good job! Keep writing!
This is one of the most interesting poems that I have reviewed all weekend! I love the way that this poems flows and the rhyming involved in this poem. I also loved how you put fragments of history in here as well! This was a well-written poem! Good job! Keep writing!
Thank you for posting a request in the "The Red Carpet Reviews Forum"!
First Paragraph: I thought that this went off with a great start. I loved your choice of words and description in this story.
Character Depth & Development: I love how you implemented the relationship of a computer and its writer. I thought that was very clever!
Plot: I like how you started at the begining and worked your way through the entire story. Everything was in order and didn't seem out of place.
Visualization: Again, you gave a fantastic description and visual. You used a great amount of trickery in this. I really thought that you were talking about a man and a woman. Silly me!
Overall Impressions: I thought that this was a very cute short story. I also thought that it was clever how you made it sound so sensual, as if it were between a man and a woman. I especially love the ending!
Thank you so much for posting a request in my forum! You did a wonderful job on this short story. I didn't see any mistakes or misspelled words. This was well written and sweet! Sometimes the most beautiful creatures are overlooked by narrow-minded and ignorant people. Good job! Keep writing!
Thank you so much for posting a request in my forum! This was an excellent poem! And congratulations on winning an award for it too! You certainly deserve it! I love how you write about religion, how emotional your poetry is. This poem flowed well with no mistakes at all. You have a true gift at writing poetry. Well done! Keep writing!
Thank you so much for posting a request in my forum! You did a wonderful job writing this poem! You did well with the rhythm and flow of the poem. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or misspelled words. I loved your choice of words as well as how you kept the poem flowing smoothly. Good job! Keep writing!
Thank you so much for posting a request in my forum!
You did a wonderful job writing this poem. I am sorry about your nephew. That must be rough on the entire family to have something like this happen. I have a few lost souls in my family too. I feel your pain. Take care. Keep writing.
Thank you so much for posting a request in my review forum! You did a wonderful job writing this story. This was written with great detail and must have taken a lot of time. I didn't find any mistakes or any other errors. I also love the names that you chose for the characters. And I also love the image that you have below the story, a very nice touch! Good job and keep writing!
This was a very interesting poem! You did a great job writing this poem. I didn't find any mistakes or misspelled words. I also liked how you added a footnote at the bottom of the page. I also like how it told a little bit of history too! Great job! Keep writing!
Thank you for entering my contest, I wish you luck!
This was a very enjoyable story to read. This was well-written and funny. I like how you put the meanings of the Irish phrases in gray. It makes it much easier to read and understand for those who aren't familiar to the Irish language. Well done! Keep writing!
Thank you for entering my contest, I wish you luck!
Hello- This was such a wonderful poem. It flowed well and had an excellent rhyme to it! Well done! You did a great job writing a poem and telling a story at the same time! Well done! This was perfect. I didn't find any mistakes or misspelled words. Good job! Keep writing!
Thank you for entering my contest, I wish you luck!
Gemini
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It had really excellent rhythm and flow. You did a great job rhyming the sentences together. I didn't find any misspelled words or other mistakes. Good job! Keep writing! 
You did a great job on both of these! I noticed that I already rated the one that you entered for the try this contest. That happened with one of the other poems in here too. Keep writing!
This is such a sad poem. It was a well written piece of poetry. It was written with a lot of heartfelt emotion. This is so beautiful. Did this happen to you? Or is this something that you wrote? Either way, this was a very moving and touching poem. Good job! Keep writing! 
That must be rough on the entire family to have something like this happen. I have a few lost souls in my family too. I feel your pain. Take care. Keep writing.