Overall Impressions: This was a beautiful poem! It had great rhythm and flow. I also loved the beautiful picture at the bottom as well! It looks like covertcow is an excellent photographer too!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You have a good poetry folder full of very interesting poems. You do a great job writing! I hope to see more poetry from you in the future!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting piece. I am glad that you submitted it! I had a lot of fun reading it! You did a great job and it flowed well! You also gave a very good description! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did an excellent job on this poem. You gave a great presentation of this poem in the forum with the writing ML colors, I am wondering why you didn't apply those colors to the original one? It would look really cool if you applied those colors in here. Other than that you did an awesome job with this. It had great rhythm and flow, and had a great description as well! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very powerful and emotional poem. You did a great job with the rhythm and flow of this piece. I love how you rhymed 'C' and 'D' together, very clever! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very interesting poem. I have never seen a double acrostic before. This was a very cute and unique poem. I enjoyed reading it. It had great rhythm and flow. You did a great job! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love your use of colors and ML. You gave a vivid picture and description. I also love the topic that you used as well! Well done! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is a very unique poem in itself. I love your unusual choice of words. You gave a great description and visual. It had great flow and had no mistakes. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: What a beautiful tribute to our fallen soldiers! You did a great job with this ABC Poem! It had great rhythm, flow, and description. You gave an awesome visual as well! Well done! Keep writing! Good luck in the contest!
Nikki
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Overall Impressions: This was a very beautiful poem. I love the way that you wrote this. It had great rhythm and flow with no typos or other mistakes. You did a wonderful job expressing the feeling of love and devotion towards your fiance. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a wonderful job with this poem. You used a great choice of words and description with no misspelled words or grammar errors.
It is a sad reality that many women live these horrible nightmares such as this. You did a great job bringing attention to this growing problem.
Well done! Good luck with the contest! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Yuck! Sweat and pee? Other than the intense morbidness of the piece, it was well written with a lot of description and gross visuals. I didn't find any mistakes or misspelled words. You did a great job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You have a nice folder here. I hope to see more poems like this real soon. You gave very beautiful and descriptive images in these poems. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You have a really nice folder here. I am glad that you are able to express your emotions freely without blinking an eye. I can't wait to read more in your port! I am enjoying it! Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Wow! You pull no punches when it comes to how you feel! You just lay every emotion out on the table. I admire that in a person. I wish more people would express their feelings like you do! You did a great job writing this poem. You truly expressed the anger inside. Keep writing!
Gemini
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Thank you for posting a request in my review forum!
Overall Impressions: You are off to a great start with your novel. You are doing a great job! It has a good plot and the story flows well! I found only one typo; in the seventh paragraph "Anthony was a stereotypical “tall, dark and hansom” man." You misspelled 'handsome'. Other than that you have done a great job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a great job on this. This was really funny! You kept up nicely with the rhythm and flow of the poem! I love how you transitioned the words between this one and the original. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is really good! You did a great job on this parody! I liked how you broke up the segments between the Story Master and the Conevention Pirates. You did a great job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Ewwww! LOL! This was hilarious! I love reading song parodies! You did a great job on the rhythm and flow of this poem. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This looks very interesting. I have heard of SLAM! Poetry. I might have to try it one of these days. I love the way that you decorated the contest forum! I hope that this will be a successful contest!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a great poem! You did a great job! I love your description and choice of words. You also did a great job with the rhythm and flow. The image at the bottom adds a nice touch! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very inspirational poem! I enjoyed reading it. It had great description and it flowed well. You did a great job on this! Congrats on the award! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was such a cute poem. I love your description in this poem. I also love sunflowers! It flowed very smoothly and I found no mistakes. Well done! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Nikki
Yuck! Sweat and pee? Other than the intense morbidness of the piece, it was well written with a lot of description and gross visuals. 
I didn't find any mistakes or misspelled words. You did a great job! Keep writing!