Overall Impressions: This was a very emotional poem. You gave a great description and visual in this. The poem flowed smoothly with no mistakes. You did a great job! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions: You did a great job on this poem! I love poems about nature too.
Rhythm/Flow: This had great rhythm and flow.
Visualization: You captured the true beauty of nature in this poem! Good job!
Clarity: This poem was clear and easy to read.
Spelling/Grammar: I didn't find any mistakes or misspelled words in this poem. Good job!
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Closing Remarks: You did a great job on this poem! Thank you for posting requests in my review forum! It was my pleasure to read your work! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: What a great description of a flowers life. You did a great job on the flower telling a story of how it felt. It had great flow. I noticed in some areas that some of the sentences even rhymed, good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a great job on this poem! I love how you rhymed the sentences together and how great the rhythm and flow was. Jealousy is an evil thing which can destroy you. Sometimes I have to laugh at some people with how silly they can be. Jealousy is a green monster. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was very touching and sweet. I miss my grandparents too. My grandmother was the sweet one and grandpa was the grouchy one, lol! Sadly they passed away in 2003. I am glad that my other grandparents are alive. It's nice to have fond memories of your grandparents isn't it? Here's to great memories! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a great poem! You gave a great description in this poem. You also did a great job on the rhythm and flow of this as well. You did a great job rhyming the stanzas as well! Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a really cute poem! I love your description and the words that you used in this! You should write more poetry! You are really good at it! Good job! Keep writing! I think that I have raided all of your poetry, let me know if I missed any hidden poems!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was very amusing! I have actually seen several people fall backwards in chairs! This was very fun to read! You make furniture? How cool! I found a few typos in your story......second paragraph 'order' should be 'ordered'..........and the fourth paragraph there is a gap...you might want to back that up a few spaces. Other than that you did great job on this! Thank you for the amusing read. Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: I am a lady and I am obesessed with my hair too. What you wrote in here is not a far cry from the truth. I thought that this was a very creative poem that you have written! You did a great job writing this poem! Keep writing! Thank you for such an amusing piece.
Gemini
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Thank you for posting a request in my review forum!
Overall Impressions: This was such an adorable poem! It had good rhythm and flow. It made me laugh too. I love the shape that it makes when it's centered and the color that you've put this in. I have heard many stories of how many people have gotten married in Vegas in a drunken stupor, and not remember a thing the very next morning! You did a great job with this poem! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: I had a lot of fun reading this segment of "Different and Cool-Part 2. This was well written with no mistakes or misspelled words. You are doing a great job with your novel. I hope to see more in the near future. Thank you for posting a request in my review forum!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: Well, it looks like I have read your entire poetry folder! I enjoyed reading all that you had in here. I hope that things are better for you. I think that you are a great person. You truly show that you are a sweet person. Take care!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very lovely poem written about your friend. This was very well-written, and I enjoyed reading it. You did a great job with this! Keep writing! I think that this is the last poem in your port. If I missed anything please let me know.
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You have a large collection of poems in this folder. You expressed a lot of emotions in your poems. I hope that life is treating you a lot better than it has in the past. *hugs* Take care!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: There have been many times that I have felt just the way that you did in this poem. I felt like I was going to blow up like a volcano. You gave a great description of how you were feeling in this poem. Take care!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This was a very well-written piece with a lot of emotion. I feel bad that you went through/still going through this. Anxiety attacks are horrible. They waste time and eat away at your life. I hope that you are doing much better now. Take care.
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: This is a beautiful poem. I very much enjoyed reading it. It has great rhythm and flow, full of beautiful images of a happy life. Good job! Keep writing!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a great job with this poem! I like the way that you write. The poem had good structure and flow. I had a friend on the internet that had obsessive compulsive disorder. I hope that you are better from this. Take care.
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: My mother was that way.....a manipulator. She had her ways of getting people to do things for her and use people. I never fell for it. Whenever my mom would call I would refuse to talk to her. Sometimes with manipulators you have to shut them out completely. It sounds mean but it actually isn't. Trust me.
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a great job on this poem. I like the structure and flow really well. This is a well-written piece with a lot of emotion. I wish more people would look on the inside and find the beauty on the inside, because that is what matters most!
Gemini
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Overall Impressions: You did a great job with writing this. It flowed and had great rhythm. All of your poetry that I have read so far is so well-written I love the name that you gave this poem.
Gemini
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Good job! Keep writing! 
Sadly they passed away in 2003. I am glad that my other grandparents are alive. It's nice to have fond memories of your grandparents isn't it? 
You gave a great description in this poem. You also did a great job on the rhythm and flow of this as well. You did a great job rhyming the stanzas as well! Good job! Keep writing!
This was very fun to read! You make furniture? How cool! 
Anxiety attacks are horrible. They waste time and eat away at your life. I hope that you are doing much better now. Take care.