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My reviewing style varies. I may do a little edit if possible or pinpoint what I think is incorrect. My review is merely base on what I feel about your piece. If I enjoy it, I say it. If not, I tell you why I'm not. I often do reviews on all Poetry Items- regardless of the genres, styles and the way it was written. However if you like, you can request a short story, chapter not the entire book or novel, articles and essays, etc. 2023 Quill Nominee
I'm good at...
Titles. You may ask for a better catchy titles for your piece. Rhyming for most poetry. I'll be reading your piece aloud and hear if consistent rhyming takes place. Emotions. I'm greatly affected on the emotions your piece may reveal.
Favorite Genres
All but Nature, Love/Romance, Dark/Horror and Inspirational are on top of my list.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, Short Story, Articles and Essays. Blogs also.
I will not review...
The entire book or novel. Don't have more time to read. Maybe soon.
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Review of each day  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen and thus, do not reflect necessarily to the group affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the said reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to weigh and consider to whether take this as corrective actions or not.

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I found your poem on your port. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.


*BurstP*Title:*BurstP*

Wow! I love the title! It really fits to the piece. By the title itself, Iit gives a quick snapshot to what your piece is all about


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I love the way you wrote this. The emotion of gratefulness was exposed and revealed as I went through the piece.


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You have the attempts to rhyme your piece but you just failed to do so. But it doesnt affect to the entire piece


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Awesome Imagery!


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There were typo errors. And some grammatical flaws.


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Just keep writing and I know your good. Write on and thanks for sharing


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Review of Dead Steps  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi there,

I am reviewing your piece via auto-rewarded item corner of this site. Please weigh and consider the following things I have noticed with your piece:

The title sounds good. Kind of catchy and interesting. I like the imagery and the scene portrayed on this piece. Though the rhythm is not good but it doesn't ruin the whole piece as a whole. It's a sad and a little bit scary piece and I found it interesting to read. I found no errors with your grammars and so did the spellings. It's a nice write. Thanks for sharing. Write on!

Always,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there Leila ,

Good day! I like your contest and I like your recent Prompt (My First Love). Well, as to this item, I can say that your'e doing good with it. You have explained well the mechanics and answered the questions to which entrants would ask more frequently.

I want to ask if a poem to be submitted must be new or not the ones previously made before this date?

I am looking forward to join on this contest. Good luck on this great contest.

Thanks.

Always,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there Jerec ,

I found your piece at the auto-rewarded item corner of WDC. I found it interesting and so I try to read.

I do not know why the title of your piece is "Adventures in 2151". I mean why 2151?

I like the way you write the piece, the description was well-done and the scene was vivid. I found no errors regarding to spelling and grammar composition. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Always,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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Review of Untold love  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there AlenGrig ,

Good day!!! I found your item (poem) through auto-rewarded item corner of this site. I found it nice and I so I take a read.

You know it's really hard to tell someone you loved the most (it happened to me sometime.). All you can do is just keeping it until sometime you will get the chance the reveal your feelings. I love this piece so much. In simple words you made us know what and how you feel. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.

Always,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there,

My mind was amazed with the imagery this prologue brings. I can really figure out how the rainbow-colored dragon appeared from that deep lake. I can imagine the reaction of the girl upon seeing such as well as the three men. The description was awesomely done. No wonder! The following chapters would be great.

Great write.

gervic,
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello there Kyle Peterson ,

Good day! I found your book on the auto rewarded corner of this site and I found it interesting upon reading on the title. I would like to review first your description of this book. Well, as I read your description I found no errors with grammars and sentence construction. However, I just want to clarify this one [he meets many knew friends and face even more enemies], are you referring to his known friends or new friends?

I wanted to delve and sail on to each chapter of this book soon. Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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Review of MAJESTY'S SPAWN  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


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The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen and thus, do not reflect necessarily to the group affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the said reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to weigh and consider to whether take this as corrective actions or not.

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Your item appeared on the REVIEW ITEMS Sidebar of this site and with no further hesitations I clicked it then started to read. After a few minutes of reading the following where things I've found with your piece.

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The title you've chosen was to its best. I can say that this would fit to your story as you go on through. I suggest that you should keep it the way it appeared.

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I am reviewing your prologue this time and I can say that this book would be great in the long run until its finnish. I can see it on the description you've just made. So, as for now my review will limit only to this, I will sail on to each and every pages of your book then. Good luck on this write.



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Review of The Hunter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dan Sturn

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The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen and thus, do not reflect necessarily to the group affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the said reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to weigh and consider to whether take this as corrective actions or not.

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I was reviewing via auto rewarded item and I landed with this piece of yours. Please read the following opinions from me after reading your piece.

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The title was a best choice. It seems that there is something a reader must to know (i.e. in the name of who?)

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The following are my suggestions to the content:

         *PoseyR*PLOT:*PoseyR*
You made it. the imagery of this poem was great and I like the way the lines cooperate wth each other to form a meaningfully deep meaning.

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Wow! You've just narrated the scene into such a simple words and it was really understandable.

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The emotion was on its intense sadness.

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I love every lines but I love this most:

Arriving, still dawn, with the dad of the fawn,
loved for the meat in the palm of his hands,
the dad who returns from the forests he’s roamed.
the dad who was known to sleep not at home
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I found no errors with your grammar. Just keep it the way it appears.

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This was great. I love it indeed. Great write. Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was great. Very deep meaning that readers must to ponder. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of My Country  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Paradoxical

I just love this poem of yours. Nice to read because of its awesome rhyming. And the scene is good to imagine. A great write indeed. Keep sharing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there Dave ,

"A Pixie Wonderland" is really a great write! The title itself is alluring to every readers. The content was great and to say, I found no grammatical errors. The scene was vivid and soI love its imagery. Every line in a stanza indeed contributes to what meaning you wanted to portray. I love this sonnet of yours. An excellent write!!! Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there,

This was nice. With few words but has a complete thought. Keep sharing.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I was reviewing via random and I found this piece of yours. I gave you a rating of 3.0 on this because I can't understand this kind of writing of yours. I tried using google translate but doesn't work though. I'm sorry for that. Well, I just hope and wish to read your english translation for this. If there is such, I'll be glad and would surely read.

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GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! I love this piece! Meaningful and I can relate. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Relationship  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi there,

I give you a rating of 3.0 because I don't understand this language you are using.
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Review of shaddow  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there,

This was a nice write. However, there are some words that are repeated. Well, I guess it was only a typographical error and it doesn't affect the whole piece though. In addition, some of the words must be spelled out correctly like in line "N there's nothing they can do without...." "N" must be spelled correctly as "In". And the repetitious dots must be minimized to make your piece appeared formal. And the last line must be ended with a period.

Overall, I like the idea of your piece, the imagery, and its meaning. I hope this suggestions would somehow contribute something to your writing. Thanks for sharing this one.

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
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Review of Railway to Heaven  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a great write. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of You Are There  
Rated: E | (4.0)
norswede:

First of all, thank you for joining "Romantic Poetry Contest" .

After reading your piece, I find it fascinating and interesting. I felt the emotions you want to portray. In connection with this, here are some things I've noticed:

TITLE:

The title fits the piece.

CONTENT:

The imagery is great. Well organized.

Overall:

Great write. Keep sharing.

GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
J. A. Buxton,

I truly enjoyed your composition, I didn't notice any errors or general deficiencies in terms of ideas. And to be more specific, the following were things I've noticed:

TITLE:
The title is great. An interrogation always brought the piece into the readers' eyes. It fits with the content.

PLOT:
Definitely well organized. The plot agrees and coincide with the prompt.

OVERALL COMMENT:
All I can say is WOW. I hope this story goes on for a while, and I hope you stay on WDC to keep it up. Good luck with your writing, it's a good looking story indeed. Thanks for sharing.

Best reagards,
gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Redtowrite,

This was an excellent writing. You have expressed very well your emotions for it is a free verse type of poem. Extreme imagery and of course the lines flow well. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Great job!!!. Keep it up!

Always,
Gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Ann Ticipation,

This writing of yours is unique. It's my first time to read poem like this. Every line you made is an interrogations. Interrogations of life's journey on how you actually get on there. It's an excellent write. Keep sharing.

Best regards,
Gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dan Sturn

Another excellent write of yours. As I go on the poem, the beauty of rhyming and its imagery satisfies me. I love nature poems, and this is one of them. The rhyming is consistent, the imagery is very clear and the flow of lines is very smooth. Thanks for sharing.

Gervic
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Review of Love is Red  
Rated: E | (3.0)
nice write. keep it up. keep sharing.
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Review of Voices  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
mr. meltdown,

nice poem...keep sharing.

gervic
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