Your poem is full of emotion, it conveys pain and hope at the same time. I feel like writing this piece must have been therapuetic for you, and so it is beautiful. There are some misspellings that distracted me, such as "I have been through lost (loss?) in my family"; and "there (they're) weak"; etc.
Keep writing!! You will move people!
NickiD89
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