Personally I think this feature on writing.com has merit. I'm sure that once a writer recieves this award from another writer that it will boost their desire to be more creative and therefore write more, which is what this site is all about. I think the creators of this site have definitely hit on a winner.
This writer says so much in Two Hundred and Twenty Two Times. I can identify with almost every line in this piece. You know, been there, done that. A Creative approach made this a very interesting narrative. It was well written and entertaining.
I think a group dedicated to people with disabilities is a good idea. In fact, I have kidney failure and I am on home dialysis and would like to join this group. My hat goes off to the originator of this group. This is a good place to share and swap stories.
War is hell, but as this writer shows, the soilders involved in battle are just that, in a lot of cases they are just taking orders. So it is reasonable to assume a soccer game could break out in the midst of war. The writer illustrates this very well.
Your story is especially touching and emotional because it is true and the pictures of the family included with the manuscript make it more up close and personal. I can't say 'I know how you feel' because I don't have anybody close going off to war. I know in a previous war, (Vietnam) I lost a lot of friends in a short period of time. And let's face it, war is war.
I really will add you and your family to my prayer list. And I'll pray that it will be god's will to return your son to safety.
For me this poem was a very thoughtful and moving piece of writing. Obvously it is atribute to a woman of whom the writer names a masterpiece. Well written and interesting, the writing exhibits a creative talent. This is a job well done. Keep writing. Reviewed by INMAN
This is a very emotional, well written piece of work. The writer is very articulate with words. And exhibits creative qualities found in writers of this genre. Good job.
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Mr. Storymaster has done it again. Taking each segement of one's statistics and breaking down 'how to red'each statistic. Actually the credit goes to the program designer that makes all of these things happen automatically. Behind the scenes, I'll bet this is complicated programming. Good job. Thank You.
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This story is about a girl who has had to face the hardships and challenges of life and has done so with a surprisingly POSITIVE attitude. Well written and interesting.
This was a good story.
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Great story with a great ending. Refreshing. The sex was erotic but subdued and tasteful. Also there was a bit of suspence and mystery. Good job.
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A story about leaving. There is honest truth woven into this story. Well written and interesting. Good job.
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This is an excellent, well written, erotica motivated, and a little unusual piece of writing. The writer exhibits creative qualities. The story was interesting and entertaining. And the concept of the story was awesome. Good job. Keep on writing.
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Nice looking butterfly. Lots of colors and they do compliment each other. Job well done.
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I really enjoyed reading this well written and interesting story. The events that take place make the story entertaining as well. And I liked the double twist at the end of the story. Good job.
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Well written poem, however a couple of lines feel forced. Good one for the season.
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Good story. There are lots of errors in this piece of writing and I find that reading the story outloud to yourself you will find most of the words used out of tense or just plain wrong in context. A good spell check program should be used to correct spelling errors.
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This is a tribute to the woman the writer loves. Well written and interesting, however, several mis-spelled words, some words were used in the wrong tense, andthere was no division of paragraphs in the last half.
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complected. (mis-spelled) there was another word mis-spelled too but I lost it. Well written story about an outlaw who decided to change. Interesting and entertaining. Keep up the good work.
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This poem was alarming because "I like bears." The poem is not forced and sounds good. Well written and interesting. Keep up the good work.
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I thought this was a very nicely laid out newsletter. It features many interesting topics and just reading through the newsletter itself is entertaining. Keep up the good work
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Well written for one paragraph. Could be a great introduction to a short story or a novel.. Not enough here for good character building. It might become an interesting story, just not enough here.
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First of all, the third line in the last verse needs to be changed. It is wrong in several different ways.
Also, some lines seemed to be forced. However, overall it is a good poem, tells of a truely broken hearted person.
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This writer says so much in Two Hundred and Twenty Two Times. I can identify with almost every line in this piece. You know, been there, done that. A Creative approach made this a very interesting narrative. It was well written and entertaining.
