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Review of SOTD PT. 7  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
2/5 Rating, it's good but you need to revise this and polish the hell outta your writing skills. im not too good either, but im not gonna sugercoat. not trying to hurt your feelings.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Take the evil away, and all of this is gone, but the "lord" is too lazy to fix what he did, creating that tree and not removing the serpent was our downfall,caused by him, technology is a sin, clothes are a sin, everything man made is sinful because of god's error, we call ourselves sinful and demonic in churches, but it is GOD'S mistake. why didn't he remove the serpent?
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Review of Eye Contact  
Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)
spoiled, rude brat is the definition of Garph. but good story regardless, are you gonna make a 2nd chapter?
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Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)
write chapter 4, this is getting interesting. A hypo-critical mom who cheats and got caught red-handed by her bunking daughter, great build-up and end it with a bang! :D 100/5 rating!!!
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Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)
yeah man stuff like that is f***ed up.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
dude with the skeleton part, you should write a creepy ghost story, something demonic cause i think you would make a great one. 5/5 for this :D
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow this story was scary, i thought it was the old man but you twisted it at the end, his dad was down in the basement dismembering bodies. Then he cut his son Nick to pieces at the end. Crazy story that deserves a 11 rating but there's only 5.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
does the ending mean that the green eyed killer was in the building with him?!. very good story and a twisted ending.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
a abusive mother correct?. good story and i feel bad for this boy even though it ain't real.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)
hmm i don't understand explain in your response
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
wow epic story and terrifying.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)


excellent 1st chapter, i viewed your port and only found this. Did you just start on this site?, if so i will send you 1,000 gift points as a start.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


this was a terrorist attack on the world trade center if your wondering.
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Review of Friends  
Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)


you have it easy, all my friends ditched me and picked on me for 5 years
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Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)
correct, time is the very life force of life itself. however there are other ways it can function, what would you do if you could freeze time just like pausing a movie?. or what if you were immortal?.
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Review of John, Doe  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Great story but needs indentation and some spelling corrections, remember i'm not berating you about it.
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Review of One Night Stand  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


so the man killed her
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

So the toy-makers alive and makes humans into toys, that's terrifying but a really good choice of plot. good story and keep on writing
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
getting a tattoo covered up?.
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Review of The Cube  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
make a part II where jack manages to survive and the cube runs rampant around the world or something. great story and keep on writing, also look at my incomplete dead earth series and email what you think.
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Review by kc1998
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
cool story and look up viooz, you can watch free movies on there
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Review of final journey  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Wow a dream about hell and heaven, very good story and take a look at my portfolio when you get the chance, have a nice day.
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Review of The Guardian  
Review by kc1998
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


John cameron's avatar, but with many twists i assume?
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Review of The Host  
Review by kc1998
Rated: E | (5.0)


Thank you for becoming a fan on one of my story's, have a nice day JLMC :).
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Review of The Woods  
Review by kc1998
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
woah that's a creepy & wack ending, good story and you should write a part 2 where the boy tries to find his way out of the dark place.
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