🌹 Krista 🥀's (krista) Reviews

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Review of Thou Shall LoveThy Neighbor  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I came across this on the "Read & Review" page, so I'm here to offer my opinion. I'll start by saying that I didn't notice any issues with grammar or spelling. This message is a heartfelt reminder that, deep down, we are all the same. By using the Golden Rule & the sad story of a mother losing her son, you've shown that hate & labels only cause pain. It’s a simple but strong call to action: if we want a better world, we have to start by choosing love over bigoted thinking. Every person we meet is just another human being who wants to feel safe & accepted. We need more love & understanding in the world! Okay, I won't get on my soapbox. *Laugh* This is an excellent piece, keep up the good work!
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Review of Hayat garip hissettirse bile kalemim var  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I came across this on "Read & Review". I wasn't sure what language you used, so I copy & pasted it into a translator. This is a deeply honest piece of writing. It captures that imperfectly tensed feeling we all feel from time to time. The tug-of-war between the life we imagine & the messiness of real relationships. I know I'm not the only one who can relate. Based on this, it sounds like someone is definitely ready for a new chapter. Since I used a translation, I can't really comment on the spelling or mechanics.
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Last words (the abyss)  

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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 Wow, this a powerful, gut-wrenching look at the moment trust completely shatters. It left me feeling betrayed. It moves past simple sadness & into a deepest abyss of betrayal, where the strange false emotions of another person become a source of genuine pain. Your use of words like contempt and distorts creates a biting edge that cuts through the world of lies. I didn't spot any issues with grammar or spelling, so you're good there. Keep up the good work!Signature test
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Review of Forbidden Love  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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 What a touching exploration of sacrifice and unrequited distance. Using the metaphor of a chase to define a relationship, works well. The repeated refrain, For you to shine, I will fade, creates a bittersweet rhythm that suggests they finds their own purpose in the shadows, by prioritizing the other person's happiness above their own. It's bittersweet. There's an almost celestial quality to the imagery, which keeps the tone feeling timeless and selfless. I always have trouble writing a villanelle, but it looks like you nailed it. I didn't notice issues with grammar or spelling either. You're on fire!
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Black Cat on a White Fence  

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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 This is some god storytelling, dripping with atmosphere & classic hard-boiled tension. You’ve perfectly captured that stifling urban heat & the sweaty desperation of a man trying to outrun a terrible mistake. The dialogue snaps with authentic grit, especially the back-and-forth about business reputations. The final twist provides a satisfying, ironic punchline about Benny’s luck. I like the way you balance dark consequences with cynical wit. Overall, you've crafted a sharp, cinematic piece of writing that feels like it walked straight off a 1940s film set. Keep up the great work!Signature test
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Review of In One  

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Rated: E | (3.5)
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This poem offers a striking contrast to the one I just read *Laugh* With the rotting external, you create an atmosphere that feels heavy with the weight of intelligent ignorance & squandered ambition. The imagery of a vole seeking eternal is particularly gritty, capturing a sense of desperate, earthy survival amidst emotional degradation. It’s raw, a poem that doesn't shy away from the putrid parts of life. It left me feeling leaving a bit uneasy. Overall, you've written a haunting poem that strips away the polite surface of life to look at the parts we usually try to hide. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Tilling Vistas  

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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 This poem beautifully connects the natural world to the way we use language. I love the transition from the physical tilling of soil to the clever arenas of grammar, showing how we try to make sense of life through words. Genius! Your imagery of wisdom as honey dripping into buckets is a great way to describe shared human experience. It’s a smart, creative piece that ends with a perfectly witty touch on how we are all imperfectly tensed in our daily lives. After reading this, I feel grounded yet intellectually sparked.
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Crickets  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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 I picked this poem to review because I like crickets. When I saw it was a haiku, I was equally happy. I adore Japanese poetry.You’ve done a great job of sticking to the form, using very few words to create a clear picture. Even without naming the insect, the description of the powerful hind legs & the trills or chirps makes it obvious that you're talking about a cricket. If you want to go for an even more traditional haiku, you need to add two things: 1) The Kigo (Season Word)- A word or phrase that tells the reader what time of year it is (for example, "falling leaves" for autumn or "cherry blossoms" for spring) & 2) The Kireji (Cutting Word)- In English, this is often represented by a dash, a colon, or a period. It creates a pause or a "cut" between two different images, allowing the reader to see a connection between them. You've got exactly 5, 7, & 5 syllables across 3 lines, so you're already half-way there! I can't tell you how many times my syllable count has been off & I swear I counted three times! *Laugh*
Anyway, this was good, keep it up! Happy account anniversary!
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Review of Election  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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 What a biting critique of the modern political machine! It's great. By using a simple, rhythmic rhyme scheme, you’ve created a nursery rhyme feel that contrasts effectively with the heavy, cynical topic of politics. It perfectly captures that sense of exhaustion much of us feel during election time, the feeling that despite the billions spent, the average person is being lost in the noise of egos & advertisements. It’s a very punchy way to voice frustration with the status quo. Keep up the excellent work!
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Review of The Forgotten Song  

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I love how you open with a song. What an emotional poem. It's very strong & sad, about a church that was lost. It shows how beautiful songs are now just memories because of a fire. The poem helps us remember the people who sang there & tells us that their voices were special. This is a powerful way to talk about a hard part of history and making sure we do not forget. It made feel both sad & hopeful. Keep up the great work.
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Review of Of mice, owls and moonflowers  

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I just adore this clever poem about nature! First, it shows how a tiny mouse feels very scared while trying to hide seeds from an owl in the dark. In the end, the story turns sweet because those hidden seeds grow into beautiful moonflowers. It shows that even when something sad happens to the mouse, new life still finds a way to grow. This is just beautiful.
Keep up the excellent work.
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Review of Spring Flowers Quiz  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I was worried I wouldn't find any quizzes about flowers, so I'm glad I found this one! Apparently, my knowledge of flowers is limited. I only got one answer correct! *FacePalm*
The questions were easy to understand & the flowers you used are pretty common, so I'm kind of surprised I didn't accident get more right. Especially since it's multiple choice! *Laugh* This was a fun quiz anyway & I learned a few new things.
Thank you!
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Review of A Reapers thought  

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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 You've written a spooky poem about a day of judgment where people must face the bad things they have done. I'm sure many people can relate to this worry. The short, rhyming lines make it feel quick & a bit scary, like a warning that nobody can hide from the truth. The spiked claws are a creepy way to show that bad actions have consequences in the end, I love it. All in all, this is a strong poem about being honest before it is too late.
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Any Juice Will Do  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This poem is too cute! It's a clever & relatable parody that fits the rhythm of the original song perfectly! Using a well-known tune to talk about the high cost of healthy eating makes the message pop & adds a touch of humor to a common problem. The lyrics are easy to follow & capture that feeling of just wanting something simple and good for you without breaking the bank. It's a fun, creative way to share a daily struggle through music! I didn't notice any issues with grammar or punctuation, so I don't have any suggestions.
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Review of Honor Due for Great Jobs Done  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You've written a heartfelt thank you to all the men & women who serve in the military. You do a great job of showing that the sacrifice isn't just about the person in uniform, but also the families who wait for them back home. This poem feels very personal & sincere, especially when it talks about how much the rest of us owe to those who protect our freedom. Once again, there aren't any issues, just a lovely tribute. Thank you.
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Review of The Problem with My Water  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You've created a clever poem that has a great, bouncy rhythm. It's fun to read! Using all those different rhymes for "Coke" builds up a lot of curiosity about what the problem could be. The ending made me laugh. Everyone who has ever been thirsty for their favorite drink can understand. It's lighthearted & relatable, I mean, who wouldn't rather have soda instead of water?! I have no suggestions for this & I didn't notice any issues. Great work! Happy account anniversary!

 
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Review of Tough training  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This story is a great look at how being underestimated can actually be a secret strength. Using the "shrimp" nickname to show how the main character uses his small size and parkour skills to outsmart the others makes the action exciting. The ending is tough but realistic for a training exercise, & it shows that staying disciplined is just as important as being fast. I didn't see any kind of errors. The pacing is good, you kept my interest throughout. I could even feel the tension of the chase! Excellent job!
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Review of Double Standards Between Girls and Boys  

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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I came across this item in "Read & Review", so here I am! This piece is a very honest & passionate look at the unfair ways society treats people differently. You do a great job of showing how these double standards follow girls from the classroom to their own homes & social lives. The writing feels very real because it expresses a lot of frustration with rules that don't make sense in the modern world. It is a strong call for fairness & respect that many people can relate to. Keep up the great work!
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Review of Vast  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I came across this item in "Read & Review", so here I am! This poem is a beautiful way to describe having big feelings & a deep soul. Comparing yourself to the ocean makes it easy to understand how someone can be calm one minute & very powerful the next. The lines about the moon and the tides show a lot of strength. The idea that you are vast rather than too much is a great way to think about it. My favorite line is I love in phases, waxing, waning, returning anyway. It is a very moving piece that celebrates being a complex person. Keep up the great work!
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Review of The Alchemist of Shadows and Ink  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I came across your poem in "Read & Review", so here I am! You've created a lovely poem. You do a wonderful job of showing how many different parts make up a person. It connects personal things, like being a mother, to creative things, like writing & music, in a way that feels very natural. The words paint a clear picture of someone who uses their past to build a bright future. It is a very encouraging piece that makes me feel like it's not too late to grow and follow my dreams. Keep up the great work!
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Review of Virtual Coffee With Jay  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is such a heartwarming tribute that I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading it. Keep those lovely poems coming!

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Review of Atonement  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What a relatable little poem you've written! It shows how small fears during the day can turn into big worries at night. It is a sad but beautiful way to show how our feelings change when the sun goes down. You did a great job! Thank you for entering the inaugural round of my contest & good luck!
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Review of NaPoWriMo 2026  

for entry "Artemis aloft!" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You've written a great little poem. It perfectly captures the high stakes of a launch. The transition from the energy of the ascent to the collective relief of the crowd makes the reader feel the tension & the success. It is a very effective use of just five words! Thank you for entering the inaugural round of my contest & good luck!
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Review of Poet @ Work 2  

for entry "Holy Words" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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You've created an incredibly efficient poem. In just three words, you’ve managed to capture the entire cycle of creation, survival, and legacy. It feels very grounded & powerful, It could even be like a foundation for a much larger story. Every word really earns its place here! Thank you for entering my contest in it's inaugural round & good luck!
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Review of Dream River  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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You've created a poem that both is lovely & smooth. Starting with "River" and ending with "Light," makes me feel hopeful & positive. It is amazing how much you can say with only six small words! Thank you for entering my conest in it's inaugural round & good luck!
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