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Review of A Shadow of Guilt  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Are you kidding me? You wrote this awesome short, painted a flawless character portrait with some deep background stuff going there, AND created a creepy ID thing (which Freud himself would have probably thought was cool). All this in only a thousand words? You are truly a wonderful storyteller Mr. Wilcox.
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I LOVE IT!!! Heartfelt and well written. Don't just stick with poetry alone..."The hurdles we must overcome that seem like a high jump bar at times! If you don't at least try to jump, you'll never pass the next one." I think you did okay with expanding your writing styles...GO FOR IT DUDE!!! *Smile*
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Review of Nathan's Quest  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This short story was AWESOME!!!
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Review of COCK OF THE WALK  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
AWESOME!!! Extremely clever, very well written. Wow...talk about a twisty tale. This was a pleasure to read. I wish you great luck in the contest. *Smile*
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Review of The Wardrobe  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Pretty good first stab *Smile*!
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Review of A musician's life  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Excellent...Your sense of comedy is awesome! You hooked me the first line. *Smile*
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Review of First love  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have such a talent for surprising your reader! I loved this!!!
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Review of A Murder of Crows  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is probably one of the coolest shorts I've ever read. Awesome! I really enjoyed it.
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Review of Bite of Vengeance  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVE IT!!! This was an awesome piece. Everything the hero of the story felt, thought and did was perfect! I would believe this!
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, this is really well written. I could imagine this piece as being part of a book.. Really good.
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Review of The Tyrannosaurus  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Awesome story and point of view. I was highly entertained by this piece. *Smile*
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
Can't say for sure if you are actually ugly...but your poetry is GORGEOUS!!!
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My only regret is we can only rate to five. This is wonderful! Please continue!
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Review of The Spectre  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice work Steve! Clever and well written.
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Review of Blaine's find  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece is pretty good!
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Review of Sold  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to genuinely say that this piece was immaculately written. It was so descriptionally good that I could see everything and feel everything the character was describing. Really, if this is your second attempt at writing a short story, I hope you write many more. You are a naturally gifted writer!
Alas, now for the critique...and these are only minor suggestions. Some minor punctuation, and instead of putting 'others'
in the semi quote marks (whatever they are called), you might find it easier to italicize the word instead. It will also make it less likely that the punctuation/grammar gurus will call you on it and aggravate you. I only say this as I am a punctuation criminal and get called on punctuation crimes all the time. But I think they may forgive you anyhow. Well done! It was a pleasure to read your second short story! I really hope you keep writing!!!.
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Review of Veiled  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely perfect! *Smile*
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Awesome characters! Awesome plot development! Really really awesome diologue! Loved it!
The document as a whole needs a little...little polish here and there, but I really loved it!
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! *Smile* Made me chuckle...
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Review of A Grandma's Heart  
Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome! I loved the description: "I looked into her eyes and she gazed softly back at me. " Karaleen is blessed to have you and W as her grandparents!!! *Smile* Nicely written girl! As usual, you made my eyes tear up with warm and fuzzy.
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Review by Lee Kilgore
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent story!
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