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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, I just finished reading your short story, "Longfellow's Grieving Sky." As I read, I formed pictures in my head of the few snowflakes I've seen, the cleansing rain or mud. I don't write poetry, but I do know how it makes me feel. "For always and everywhere, wether whispered, or howled, the sky will find a way to reveal its grief to the world." I'd like to belive the sky is mostly happy with sunshine.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, I just finished reading your poem, "Giving Thanks to Adversity." I understand, or think I do, about problems being challenges and solving problems, or at least trying to solve a problem builds strenth of character. We all battle to make it up hill and enrich our lives and those whose lives we've touched.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, I just finished reading your short story, "Kitchen Conversation. I have never thought of my cooking utinselsl, vegetables and ingredients talking to someone. I thought is was so cool! You have a great imagination and the writing skills it takes to make your work worth reading.
Lesley


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Review of Naked Bowling  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
Hi,
I just got finished reading your story about "Naked Bowling." I think it is funny. I like, "No expenses due for clothing, Or walks that wear and tear. Those pricey games and shoes to brig loathing, and sights beyond compare." Now, what about the men? The same goes for them, too. I always wished they played football in the nude. Maybe I might start to like football!
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,
I just finished reading your short story, "Annie's Dog Has fleas." I thought it would end up with you two having kids and more dogs. Yet I can identify with your "reason" for breaking up. I dated a guy who hated snakes. Yet, I was well known by my friends to carry small snakes in my pockets and larger ones in a pillow case. I happeded to have a baby rat snake in my front pocket. That guy freaked out and ran to his car!
Believe it or not, we dated for a while, but I just couldn't see a future with this guy. Later, I heard that he told someone that we almost got married! I would NEVER marry a person who hates snakes! So I understand.
Lesley


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Review of Stony Gaze  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello,
I just finished your poem, "Stoney Gaze." The story is something I can identify with. I've felt that way before and still do sometimes. Animals always chase away the blues (unless one poops on the floor). I was an animal control officer for about ten years and also managed a couple of animal shelters. Susan, I saw so many awful things I can't even tell anyone. I wrote a couple of my animal control stories, but I think people don't want to think about such things. Anyway, you earned you awardicon!
Lesley


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Review of Daddy"s Girl  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello,
I just finished reading your poem, "Daddy's Girl." Check the last word, Daddy's has an aposrophy.Sorry I am a rotten speller. That is why it takes forever to write anything.
But back to your poem. I liked the sentence, "I wonder if she realizes that she is her mommy's world."
Keep on Writing!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
HI,
I eventualy found your introductory page. My email has been flashing on and off.
I found the lesson helpful, as I probably will with them all. The concept of how to acually see things in ordinary objects may not be too hard, I don't guess. I have to learn to use my imagination. However, most of my stories take only as fast as I can type.
Thanks for the help,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I just finished reading your tutorial about writing poetry. I feel completely in the dark and worry I can't handle the course. But then I tell myself after reading all the different types of poetry and the names of the poems, I can learn this! I will try as hard as I can to learn as much as I can. I am still worried I won't make a good grade.
Sincerely,
Lesley Scott


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I just finished reading your story, Good Samaritan Mother." The story proves that people still are nice and generous just when you think they don't have much money. I thought is was cool that the kids from both tables played with each other, thinking everyone was the same.
Keep Writing!
Lesley


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Review of Le'ah  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi,I just finished reading your story about Le-ah. She is an interesting and active young woman. She tried to experience everything life has to offer. But it doesn't seem she is impressed. She feels hungry and on the prowl. I was surprise that the police officer and animal control knew what and who they had just captured.
Keep Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hi, I just finished reading your cute story,"The Marching Monkeys." I thought is was funny, cute, with a bit of betrayal. If the crocs had their way and their plan worked, there would be no monkeys to march. You should probably put the sentence of the monkey cleaning dirt. It seems like the croc was rubbing himself. But then, crocs can do anything they want to.

I was so pleased the monkeys were saved by the eagles. They are raptors and very strong and have long, fierce talons.
Tell the monkeys I said, "Hello."
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, I just finished reading your story, "For Babies Sake." I found it interesting and funny. The ghost kept coming up with some good one-liners. He sure does like to pick on Gregg and Shannon! He acts like he doesn't like babies, but I'll bet he will finally be happy with a baby in the house.
Keep On Writing!
Lesley


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Review of Follow Your Heart  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, I just finished reading, "Follow your heart." I liked the way you started each verse with, "Follow your heart." The subject matter like chasing your dreams and accept every individual for their worth, and cherishing everything on out precious earth.
Keep up the good work!
Lesley


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Review of Tapestry  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,
I just finished reading your piece, "Tapestry." It reads like poetry, but seems like a story. You must be enlightened like Abraham Maslow's "Hierarcy of Needs." You seem to have a deep understanding about one of the important traits we humans make with their life choices, good and bad experiences and "Fill your tapestry with beauty, light, love and the blessings that your heart deserves."

Keep up the Good Work,
Lesley


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Review of Blind Faith  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,

I just finished reading your poem, "Blind Faith." I found it enlightening. I love to read inspirational poems. I don't write poetry, but I know what I like. I loved reading, "Phillip,a mirror of future generations, believe with blind faith," is a good phrase. Actually, there are several other sentence and phrases that were very spiritual.
Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Sorry I haven't written in so long. You aren't easy to find. I just finished reading your story, "The Unexprcted Gift." I could just picture snow on the boughs of the trees. The story was very majcal and the end was wonderful. I loved reading about the start filling the sky.
I love almost all of your stories that I understand.


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Review of Monster Justice  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi, BBW!

I just read your interesting story, "Monster Justice." I found it to be funny through it was serious, as well. All of these werewolves killing sisters, sons, and all of the other people and werewolves was so different than anything I've read to date. I want to read it a couple of more times. I liked the plot and characters.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hi, I just finished reading your story, "All Good children Deserve pie." I felt almost like one of the children preparing myself for the next days festivities. But at that time, I felt like something was going to happen. The two boys, Abel and Danika gave the normally pleasant atmosphere to the cottage. I couldn't help from a chuckle when the two boys yelled "Fire!" Everyone ran as fast as they could. Everone ate the red pie after Halvena "took care" of the boys.
"Good Children deserve pie, Naughty children get seconds. It reminded me of Stephen King.
Good Tale,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hi, I just finished reading your eye opening poem about, "Kissinger in the Whitehouse." At the time of Nixon's rule, I was not really paying much to politics. Now that I am older and can vote, I will. But I have feelings that the politicians are going to do what they want, and we will be poorer.

THe planes and bombs made me think of Viet Nam. But now, I think of another war across the ocean. Why don't we learn that killing and violence never go away while someone is making a fortune.

Keep Writing


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I just finished reading the late Brian Jacques' driven epic poem, and tribute. He expressed a lot of talent. I-Am that is Redwall won't be the same without you adding to the adventures of friend and foe." I liked, "I-Am That Is You will be missed, By those who travel That wonderful world Known as Mossflower."
That was really good. I liked the format, too.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, Pete,
I just finished reading your piece about how life can be simple or complicated. Is that what you intended, or did I see the words in my own way? I believe that the more you have, the more you want and you can never get enough. A wise man who lived 3,000 years ago said, "What you have is what is enough."
Yours,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just finished reading your action packed epic poem. I like the format and I couldn't find any errors at all. I didn't expect any, you've been at this a long time. The poem has many great phrases like, "No quarter taken and none given Friend and foe alike died that day, but we would not rest, until Mossflower was free.
That is only one of your phrases that was great to read!
Keep up the good work, Ledger!
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, I just finished reading your story, "Assignment:What Jesus Means to Me." It was well written, and if you have any mistakes, I read your story twice and missed any probable. Your story about the birth of Christ and the songs the kings and others sang in the birth of their Lord was a nice touch. You paint a nice picture.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review of Randy n Teddy  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.0)
I just finished reading your cute poem, " Randy n Teddy." I noticed that you need to change your phrase, "Obvious" When used properly, quotations are okay. But I only use them in conversations. But that is only how I write. The rest of your poem touched my heart. We had 29 rats for a while. They all knew their names and could do tricks. I can tell you love all animals.
Keep Writing,
Lesley


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